January 7th: Round One Posting Deadline

19:00 EST (USA)

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LoD

Dope drop, now i read mine it makes no sense the way i had thought it out in my Heaad, lol

One came with some real slick punches. The other I feel cyphered their verse. 

Clear winner for me. Fairs in. 

I got Cel taking the W here. A few bars that made me lol a little. Solid punches and concepts from him. TRAX didn't have much wow factor imo. I have Cel taking this in all aspects. 

One sided for Cel here. Doe needs to have a better grasp on rhyming in general. 

I swear to god that Doe Drop was just babbling like JayDiamond v2 lmfao. Celsius' verse was funny as fuck with heater after heater, I hope you didn't put a lot of effort into this verse though lmfao. Honestly it has a claim on being verse of the round. Pretty much an auto-win too and it would have been an auto-win if this verse were 10 times worse. Fair's in.

This ones easy, loser needs to cap multies, improve on setups and punches. Try to be a little more creative. Work on fluently writing it out, because it all comes off a tad bit choppy son, no hate, fairs in. 

LoD.

winner takes this with much better everything including using multi sylables, punches, and other conceprs u name it. the other simply did not do that and was on a basic level so he should learn to rhyme like da winner. fairs in. no h8

Doe Drop really impressed me here with one of the better verses I've seen from him, although I really think you need to keep working on spending more time on your verses and setting up your lines better. Try reading through the guidelines on the forums.

Cel I really really liked your verse here. The opener really hit hard for me, and I really liked the Rican bar. Obviously you had a few typos which hurt your first-impression of readability and might have been an issue in an extremely close battle, but overall I was really impressed with your verse here. Could have done with less space between your multis is really all the feedback to improve that I have given that this is just a first-round effort.

no brainer here, doe was way too basic while celsius kept it light as per his standards but with a way above average verse nonetheless. Thas wall potrait though, was some serious fire with a lil tweaking.