guts with the better written, more well structured verse. Dxter

Dxter verse lacked a cohesive structure. One syllable end rhymes don't cut it. Punches need to be more well developed 

January 7th: Round One Posting Deadline

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DEDSE..... wait.. Wrong month

guts the dia tribe shit almost worked but not complete yet kinda other than that i think the faze and the fives and the brylcreem shit was damn impressive man the faze shit was the BOTB for me. DXTER you had the flow man decent jabs as well but on a punch level u got outdone here by guts man, also you were a little high on self hype too that is only ok if u follow it up with a punch related to the hype. you know i fuck with ur audios if only you could justify ur text game as well and then balance them both u did be golden.

Cool battle. I got one winning on more put together punches. The diatribe bar was the BOTB for me. Good stuff fellas

Giving Guts the vote. Better punches and a more cleaner read. Concepts were in his favor as well. The other at least made an attempt but didn't stay on target much. Votes in. 

DXTER was just overly basic here and his verse was  jsut way too unpolished and unstructured to put up a fight here. Guts was stronger structurally, conceptually, rhyming wise and ahead on punch count.

Basically I think this is almost an automatic win for guts. DXTER suffered from an almost complete lack of real punches with double-meanings here and also was a lot worse in terms of execution. So no need for a long expo here. Fair's in.

Dxtr- you lost because your setups weren't creative enough and your punches didnt hurt. Expand your multie to about 4 or 5 at a time. And go from there. 

felt like one had better flow and delivery, the other was kinda inconsistent and was sort of on a basic level but had good ideas just didnt excute them properly. Nice battle here and G L to both fairs in.

Ok this was a decent battle with some nice bars on either side, although I thought my winner kept up a whole verse of back-to-back solid punches whereas my loser could only manage a couple.

Guts I thought your opener and your coding bars were your best, I didn't think your closer was great though.

DXTER I thought your "FIELD TRIP" bar was your best, this was actually a cool concept and I thought you delivered it reasonably well. However, I thought a lot of your lines didn't really have punchlines that you landed well (like your opener).

Good luck to whoever wins this, but I have my winner quite clearly.