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January 7th: Round One Posting Deadline

19:00 EST (USA)

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I think you only have to type one thing and hit enter til the line count gets to where it needs to be instead of rhyming bullshit.....good luck to the guy who was prepared 

Tongan came with some clever stuff. Unfortunately zez just posted to post 

Very obvious win here for TK. Too bad Zezmer couldn't find the time to actually post a verse. GL to TK in the next round

Free credits shit here lol.

Zezmer pretty much rushed his verse to the point that it seemed like jay diamond wrote it in some parts lol while Tongan came in with a much better planned and executed verse which was ahead in every category. I was actually looking forward to this battle coz i really thought Zezmer would have some dope shit to throw in but that wasn't the case lol. That alimony shit was funny asf esp the way tongan led up to it lol. 

Not much to say here really, tbh Zezmer's verse is as good an expo as I can give as to why I voted for TK. Hard luck Zez, it was worth posting and hoping for the best, my opponent no-showed. 

TK this felt rushed due to the deadline so I'm not gonna scrutinise every mistake here, but my general feedback is that your punches would be a lot stronger if they were less direct flips. For instance, "I'll take your money like when a woman takes your money" with the alimony punch doesn't really have 2 meanings. I've seen you put out stronger punches before so I'm sure you know what I mean, if you want more expo on this or anything else with your verse feel free to hit me up.

Okay honestly I don't even think this one needs an expo, Zez was basically just Dr Seuss for his first few lines. I get you caught it with little time but at least try dude. Tongan gets the vote.

gb fv fairs in lmfao obviously an auto win for one basically

one had punches and everything in it ,n better tha n the other opponent the other should incorporate more his lines and use capped multis and things of that nature n fill the box completley. one just was simply more complete. fv no h8

One had a way better attempt at actually rhyming, coming up with punchlines and trying to rap itself. Other dude just threw in some mumbo jumbo and called it a 16. Fairs in, congrats to the advanced yO

first verse was cool, rhyming ability is there just needs work on wordplay abit, the us part could have been reworded a bit but it came off kind of stretch enjoyable verse overall tho. second verse coasted i feel like coz the lyrics read out like they were lazily written.

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