one had some rlly questionable multis, broke the flow of what would've still been some pretty basic punches, not close 2 the best i seen from this brere

other had good structure but absolutely killed it with da punchlines, cleverly written and funny as fuck, made da battle pretty 1 sided 2 me

can't see the topic in order to drop a vote 

I was able to choose this one based mostly on the structure and technical aspects of the verse, but this same person also had better bars. Winner had much better wording and didn't suffer from some bad WP mistakes like the other. Rhymes were a bit smoother and verse read properly. Also felt like the winner was just wildly more creative with the concept. Clean verse with strong punches versus jabs with some technical mistakes. Easy choice for me here.

CONCEPT: FAST-FOOD CHAINS

Expo: (For those not familiar with American fast food) Burger King is a fast food chain. Jack in the Box is another fast food chain. They are a burger joint but are somehow more popular for their tacos. Sonic is yet another fast food chain. They have stalls you can park in and carhops bring your food out to you. McDonalds is notorious for their broken ice cream machines. CakedOut is ranked #14, most "combo meals" at fast food chains are numerized. That should cover it. Good luck, Caked. Good battle.

CAKEDOUT

Lately, this guys been acting dumb. His SKILLS ARE ON A DROUGHT. fker climbed the roof of a Wendy’s cause he heard the MEAL WAS ON THE HOUSE!

LMAO @ the scond punchline lol nice one loved it and the yo momma style here 3.5/5

gets sexual aroused by fast food and I’m not KIDDING,SHIID. guy goes to BurgerKing cause he heard the CHICKENs STRIP!

LMAO again!! a little forced and could have been better worded but LMAO stuff still 3/5

Fat & depressed kid BREATHES WITH SORROW cuz right when he’s leaving McDonalds the workers SPEAK TO THIS LARGE DUDE rather than saying good bye, it’s always SEE YOU TOMORROW!

this was a low, nice imagery props on that but this one really didn't surface an effective punchline tbh plus it was a pretty stretched structure to the bar and broken multis too 1.5/5

Literally this guy ATE SOME TODAY 4,000 calories he’ll say he didn’t MAKE A MISTAKE but he drunk a Diet Coke so with his logic it MAKES IT OK!

another ok bar, a little below the standards you set with your first two bars in theme yes but feels nimble and the broken multis ain't helping again here 1.5/5

could kill him on his birthday and get him MURDERED WITH GUN PLAY. ain’t Chick-fil-a but I’ll SERVE HIM ON SON DAY!

the set up was a let down, concept was just okayish another low in the verse here and the multi is slightly off too 1.5/5

Leave his brain soft as a slushy for thinking you DOPER THAN THE CAKE. Funny you thought I worked for sonic once you seen this ROLLER SKATING WIT THE TREY

broken multis bro, syllables ain't the same, plus i didn't really feel the punch here wording issues maybe something on the lines of he getting served when i be rolling kinda? still not too effective 1.5/5

and he plays basketball but its rare he’s JUMPIN SO MUCH says he got hops but only thing he’s DUNKIN’DONUTs

nice finisher here, could have been more worded more effectively but decent nonetheless 2.75/5

Total - 14.25/35(40.71%)

this verse could have been wayyy more better with a few tweaks here and there and esp had there been more lines like the first two and the last one man!!

BONEDADDY

When Caked "Battles (W)Rappers?" It's on tha sandwich line. It's a miracle when THIS GUY SURVIVES. Too bad tha only "Time He's Punching" is the clock at tha Burger King- workin' HIS NINE TA FIVES!

good matured opener, 3/5

He ain't fresh with the beef; it's 2019 an' his punches hardly even SMACKIN' ON OCKS. I'll fold his "Corny Rounds" in half when my "Shells Hit His Gut" like I stuck-this-fuckin' JACK IN A BOX!

the first line was ok the second like ok too just felt like more of a jab instead of a punch tho 2/5

Fucked his girl afterwards. Her pussy look like a Sonic grilled cheese- taste JUS' LIKE IT, TOO. Bitch had 3 carhops, 4 parking spots & I still waited in-line-behind 5 cars... JUS' DRIVIN THRU!

this one pretty much has ur name signature style written all over it lol yet on a punch point of view pretty basic 1.5/5

Gave her that Special Sauce and dipped (lol) but once I LEAVE THE SCENE? Her pussy and their relationship more broken down than a McDonald's ICE CREAM MACHINE!

lol nice multis average concept made to look better with execution dnt resonate much with the second line coz their ice cream machine's generally always in fine working condition here in my country 1.75/5

Shit. Tha only time he spits on a mic, is in the drive thru after he gets HIGH AN' WRITE HIS RAPS. Shut the fuck up, Caked. Fuck your rank, gimme your #14... oh, and I want the SIDE OF FRIES WITH THAT!

LMAO!! 3/5

#Who'sYoDaddy^^LMAO!!

11.25/25(45%)

Bonedaddy closely and very nearly edges this one for me, Fairs in.

I've honestly never liked Bone's verses. He's not bad, I just don't like his flow or his style at all.

But I'm gonna look at this from an unbiased point of view.

CakedOut - Great multis, good metaphors, painful punches, and a great concept. Wordplays were good too. 

Bone Daddy - You didn't cap rhymes for a considerable portion of your verse. You had okay multis, but you were for sure reaching in places. I got what you were going for, but most of your bars didn't work for me.

Metaphors - Bone Daddy

Wordplay - CakedOut

Multi's - CakedOut

Punches - CakedOut

Overall - Both brought it pretty hard, but one for sure edged his opponent with harder punches, better multis, and a better flow/scheme. Both of you brought a great verse, though. Good battle. I've said it once before and I'll say it again - this tourney is off to a hell of a start.

I thought CakedOut had some funny lines, especially at the start of his verse. Although they weren't super creative, they were kinda straight forward. Roller Skating w/the Trey/Tray was decent. Bone Daddy came harder here, imo - and flipped the concept in a way where it was a bit more creative, liked the shell hit ya guts bar, also the opener. The punches just had more sting to em, althought there was some lines I thought were bland like the Ice Cream Machine one, but didn't really put him in a position to lose. Good battle guys, fairs in. Good luck!

Before I start breaking down the verses I'd just like to quickly thank Bone Daddy for their expo. US stuff is often referenced on this site and I have to google it or just assume a meaning based on context, so for things like Sonic and Jack in the Box that was really helpful.

CakedOut your verse was pretty solid but was held back by issues with the multies as well as some content that didn't really punch with a double-meaning. Your first bar was very solid, "skills/meals" is only a slant rhyme in my accent but I gave the benefit of the doubt it worked for you. The second bar was about the same, novel concept but not too hard-hitting in nature. The next bar was very problematic imo. "Breathes with sorrow" is four syllables whereas "speak to this large dude/see you tomorrow" are both five. Thats a basic mistake. Also, I've tried and tried but other than the first syllable I don't really see how "speak to this large dude" rhymes with the other two multies at all. Very broken multies cost this bar dearly. The next bar was fine multi-wise and made me chuckle because it reminded me of a few people I know. However, the whole third or so of the verse between "fat & depressed" and "makes it ok" didn't really have any wordplay or conceptual cleverness going on at all, it was reasonably face-level from what I could see. If this wasn't the case I apologise, you could have made it more clear by putting wordplay in quotation marks (or italics or whatever). But this was a serious lack of conceptual strength in your verse. The "gun play/son day" bar was probably your best imo, I didn't exactly know what everything meant on my first read but I could infer pretty well and I thought it was you at your cleverest and cleanest in this verse. The next bar though was seriously flawed. Count the syllables in "doper than the cake/roller skating wit the trey" and you'll find its 5-7. Thats a serious problem. Your closer was solid enough, simple but effective and cleanly carried out, but nothing to write home about.

Bone Daddy your opener was simple and the wordplays themselves weren't too original, but the actual way they were used was quite fresh imo and made it a reasonably strong opener. Your second bar would have been stronger if the concept was carried through both lines, as it was the first line only served to set up a rhyme, when I really thought you were going somewhere fast-foody with "ain't fresh with the beef" and so on. Still though, the second line was quite well executed with a very solid concept that made it a effective punch; if such a thing exists then that second line was the lotb. I don't know what a Sonic grilled cheese looks or tastes like, and now I don't want to, but that next punch again didn't carry the wordplay over both lines but did build up to a decent punch nonetheless. The "Ice cream machine" idea wasn't amazingly creative but it was well-executed and made for a solid enough bar. The closer wasn't really a conventional punch; but nonetheless it made me chuckle and was a very fitting closer to this battle as a whole.

At the end of the day I thought the two verses weren't far apart, but there was a clear difference in both conceptual strength and clean-ness of execution.

both did theor thing, burgers concept i guess, felt one was a bit less creative n the others rhymes were predictable, but i think the other had a smoother read n better flow the other was a bit harder but the other edged it still. felt like the other couldve been more articulate. fair is tossed. GB

I have just voted a perfect for the first time, audio or text, and its deserved. my loser did very good as well, but pefection is impossible to beat, gb

Ima go with the c.o. on this one...his lines were better and the punches hit harder...had more creativity as well...the other guy wasnt bad at all...jus out matched...good job on both ends tho

I liked both and this was definetly a difficult decision to make. I read each a couple of times and I have to go with the one I found to be more raunchy. Fairs in fellas. Check out my battle when not opponent posts there verse.

This was a good battle. My loser hat good punches at the start but became lifeless and simple through out the rest of the 12 bars, and became almost predictable and at points it was hard to find transitations of the next set up after the punch. Also seen 4/3 broken multi that did hurt to see cause it coudve been a good punch.

My winner came with more creativity and more complex bars built of the concept and was perfectly deilivered and enough to edge the win.

Gb No hate Fairs tossed

First I'm gonna discuss CakedOut's verse. This started really strong, much better than I was expecting, but after the first two lines it fell off worse than Pizza Hut after they stopped carrying P'Zones (although they have them back now!!!).

The meal on the house line was kinda simple but hilarious, and almost perfectly executed. The kinda shit that could win a Jokes Over Bars tournament.

The second line was so ridiculous that it was a reach, but still made me laugh so points for that.

The third line is where the verse went downhill like a dude who abandons healthy eating in favor of fast food 3 meals a day. BREATHES WITH SORROW / SPEAK TO THIS LARGE DUDE / SEE YOU TO TOMORROW... please count the syllables there bro. Broken multis don't win you tournament finals. And this line wasn't as funny as the previous two so the decline is even steeper.

I don't get the Chik-fil-A line, I guess they're open on Sundays as opposed to competitors? But man the Diet Coke thing was flames just because there are people who actually think like that (I've been guilty of it to some extent) and wonder why they are as fat as fucking hell.

The Sonic / Tray and Dunkin Donuts / hops (Did they go back to Dunkin Donuts and not just Dunkin'?) lines were just barely passable conceptually, and you had another broken multi at the start of the former. You gotta watch out for that shit bro, especially in a tournament battle. If you drop broken multis, you can come up with the dopest concepts ever and people will still see your lines as pig slop.

Moving onto Bone Daddy...

First bar is alright. I get the 9 to 5 / punch card thing, but I think that there's an argument to be made that this bar doesn't really tie into the concept. You could have an almost identical bar tie into almost any job that there is. And it's basic too. Decently executed though. Solid opener although nothing like CakedOut's in terms of impact.

Next line. A rounds bar? Really? I get that you were fucking around but c'mon man. There's a time and place to do shit like that, and a serious tournament battle against an opponent who can write a coherent line is not such a time and place. The wording is also questionable because "I stuck this fucking Jack in a Box" (with Jack in a Box referring to the chain) is ungrammatical, and the chain is actually called Jack in THE Box, not Jack in A Box. I do like how you had relevant setups in this and the previous line, but that doesn't make up for the negatives I just outlined.

Your progression was like the opposite of CakedOut's verse in that it picked up after the first 2 lines rather than slowing down. I actually like Sonic grilled cheese (along with pretty much everything else on their menu lol, best fast food place around here) but I get what you mean by that insult, I think. "Special sauce and dipped" was the highlight of the battle, somehow, even though it was just a setup. Then the Ice Cream Machine thing had my FAX machine going off. 

Closer was good. The setup also had my fax machine going off... You would think that we live in a day and age where the voice transmission line to the drive through speaker box would put out crystal-clear audio, but nah, it almost always sounds like the person on the other end is screaming through a paper towel roll into a tin can phone line and then the whole thing is being played back on a degraded VCR tape. The #14 / combo angle is alright, although it would've been better if it referred to a specific meal IMO, and if it didn't need an expo. The mention of a specific number had me thinking you were referencing some specific thing that you can order at some specific restaurant and then I read the expo. Smh

Overall, this battle didn't weigh in the way that I expected it to. CakedOut was inconsistent, but the ups of his verse more than compensated for the downs. Bone Daddy, aside from one takeout, lacked anything which had that kind of impact. I'm voting for Bone Daddy just because CakedOut had some absolutely fucked up execution in some places (broken multis). If he had polished his verse more, he would have taken this. Fair's in.

CAKED'S OPENER WAS REALLY GOOD, CONCEPT SLIGHTLY PLAYED BUT I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU WORDED THAT SHIT, I ALSO LIKED YOUR ''DIET COKE'' CONCEPT.  SOME OF YOUR WORDPLAYS DIDNT WORK BOTH WAYS THO LIKE THA ''CHICKEN STRIP'' AND THA CLOSER, YOU ALSO HAD A BROKEN MULTI WITH ''SPEAK TO THIS LARGE DUDE'' WHICH WAS A FORCED MULTI ANYWAY. THA VERSE WAS A LIL INCONSISTANT AT TIMES BUT YOU WERE QUITE CREATIVE WITH THA CONCEPT....... BD WAS A LIL INCONSISTANT TOO AN SOMETIMES TOOK AN AGE TO GET TO THA FUCKIN RHYME LOL, BUT I REALLY LIKED YOUR OPENER TOO, THA ''ICE CREAM MACHINE'' PART FOR ME WAS BOTB, THA CLOSER MADE ME LOL.  I DID FIND YOUR VERSE HARD TO FOLLOW AT TIMES THO AS THA FLOW TO ME WAS VERY CHOPPY IN PLACES....... ALL IN ALL IVE GOT ONE AHEAD HERE, NOT A LANDSLIDE BY ANY MEANS BUT THA SKILL LEVEL OF ONE DID SHINE THROUGH IN THIS SPAR, FAIR IS DROPPED!

My winner here was nicer with the wordplay and punches. Loser lacked the strong haymakers and that's where the winner propelled. Fairs in