noice

CHECK YOUR NOSE** damn phone 

Good battle

Both verses were really good.

Postivies: nine7eight started off strong and remained consistently good throughout, without dropoff. You had amazing wordplays, and nice multis. "my soldiers waitin.. boy u not in 'rotation' call us out, me n my 'allies' will KNOCK YOU OFF YOR AXIS!/" was, fore sure, your strongest line, and I, generally enjoyed your verse. Kold, your multis were strong and you had some metaphors that definitely worked.

Negatives - nine had certain lines that felt like he was, more than anything, just struggling to fill the box in some place, although it wasn't often.  Kold didn't seperate his lines or bars, so it all runs together like one long bar, and it ruins the flow. Some of your multis were borken and didn't work, and some of your rhymes were a Mr Fantastic level reach (WAY OFF FACT IS IT'S SLIM and ADOLF'S NAZI REGIME, Way off and Adolf rhymes, but nazi and fact is don't rhyme closely enough, and neither do it's slim and regime.) I see what you went for, but, overall, it just didn't work in some places.

Multis - nine7eight

Metaphors - Kold Krhymez

Vocab - nine7eight

Punches - nine7eight

Overall, both emcess brought it hard as hell, and brought a strong opposition for their opponent, but, in the end, one edged the other by being more complex with their punches and wordplays.

Good battle, fair vote. 

EXPO = 'Hitlers the don of time/Hit last the dawn of time' 

The Cairo Conference was held in egypt during ww2 by heads of states of certain countries to take action.

I would like to believe everything else wont go over heads

very nice bars, i assume this is a ww2 concept battle, one did flawless here, great careful use of grammar and did the concept perfectly while dissing the opponent directly,the other was good too, but his multis were a bit shaky a few broken parts , but good at dissing n conceptualizing his bars at his opponent but the other edged it w/ a more smoother read. GB fair is tossed.

This was nice battle cool lil verses on both sides..imo the winner jus had better flow and punches and did thr concept better...the loser didnt do bad at all...i just feel the other guy did better...good job fellas 

I'm going to do this expo bar-by-bar, awarding (or non-awarding) points for each bar. Here's the meaning of each number - 0: meh bar, 1 or more - good bar (the better the bar the more points), -1 or fewer - bad bar (the worse the bar the fewer points). The winner will be the person with more points, and if it's tied, I'll make my decision 'holistically.' Now, let's get started.

nine7eight

who got 'Jew(you) gassed' bitch, we do not-see(Nazi) hot bars so STOP WIT ALL THE WACK SHIT/ my soldiers waitin.. boy u not in 'rotation' call us out, me n my 'allies' will KNOCK YOU OFF YOR AXIS!

- First thing I want to mention is that the Jew / you thing might not work for everyone. It worked for me but I kinda had to reach, since I typically pronounce "gotcha" with the unvoiced -ch sound rather than the voiced -j sound. But it can work. Not-see / Nazi isn't going anywhere either, that's one of the most played wordplays in history. Axis / rotation / allies all works together, although I'm not a fan of how the punch was worded. It sounds like an Axis is a physical object that somebody possesses, which it isn't. But it still makes sense, and it all flows nicely, so I'll give it a +1.

friend or foe, man they OFTEN SWITCH/pretend to be so, got you LOST IN TRICKS/ so when the enemy's close I am POPPIN CLIPS/ till their camp is closed like AUSCHWITZ!

- I vaguely remember seeing someone else turn AUSCHWITZ into a 3-syllable word to make a multi work. Is it really three syllables to you? For me, it's just AUSH-WITS, not AUSH-UH-WITZ. I'll give you a pass on calling this a broken multi, but it still hurt my opinion of the bar. I do like how this whole bar stuck to one angle consistently, and it all flowed nicely apart from the ending hiccup I just mentioned. When I said in my predictions that you say what you say and people get it, this is the kind of clean line that I was talking about. +1

firing squad for ur family, so yeah ur SON IS IN DANGER/ lock u 'alone in the oven' n call it ONE IN THE CHAMBER!

- Another basic line here... but in my opinion this lacks the impact of the previous two, if only because it feels kind of dull by this point. Nothing wrong with it, but I can't in good conscience give you points for this. 0

when the TROOPS ALIGNED u made the wrong move on CHOOSIN SIDES/ you a pussy like Hitler rather than face defeat you'd just commit SUICIDE!

- This isn't even a punch really. Just an obvious reference to an event. It attacks your opponent, but it doesn't really have a double meaning. It's very rare that people can get away with doing this and the bar still hit like a 'real' punchline, and this wasn't an exception to the rule. 0

I'll roll up like a dictator that's TEN CARS DEEP/ n have your empire fall faster than the FRENCH ARMY!

- See what I said about the previous bar. 0

you took 'massive losses' that's what the RECORD SHOWS/ n I don't mean 'determaning your ancestry' when I say I'll show up at your front door to CHECK IN OUR NOSE!/

- see what we said in our IMs lol. But if you ignore the fact that the relation to noses only exists one way, this is an alright bar. The nose / Jew hunting thing is kinda cool, but the lack of coherency brings the number of points for this bar down to 0.

Overall: +2

Kold Krhymez

Nine's such a geek his BAE NOT NASTY WIT HIM, chances of him 'makin bangers' is WAY OFF FACT IS ITS'S SLIM cos we stil wnt c dat "Hit Last the Dawn Of Time" lyk ADOLFS NAZI REGIME.

- Right off the bat we have a line that's putting forced shit in our faces. First off, I got the Hit = Hitler thing without the expo, but you can't just randomly shorten words and expect people to say "oh yeah, that's something I would expect to hear in normal speech." And if they don't say that about a bar, the bar is badly worded. Secondly, how do you pronounce NAZI? I've never heard anyone say it like GNAT-SEE instead of KNOT-SEE, but I guess I can overlook that since you're from London and who knows how you fucking limeys pronounce words. The second multi is off to me, also. But I get the angle here... "To last a thousand years" and such. It's a decent concept and it hits the opponent, but the subpar execution makes this worthy of a 0.

So act bold all u want, kolds SET STAMP N CRUSH WITS gun-fire wil have 'Hollow causin blood flow' lyk dose DEATH CAMPS IN AUSCHWITS.

- If I weren't giving you the benefit of the doubt because you're British... man, I would be linking you to Hooked on Phonics. I wish this were audio so I could judge whether or not your multis actually rhyme to you. Hollow cost / Holocaust is a wordplay that's already been used, by ILLoKWENT for sure and I think by others, and this wordplay is pretty close to that. So no points for originality. If not for the benefit of the doubt, this'd be a 0 or maybe even a -1, but I'll just barely give this a +1.

Watch him switch up like he RUNS THRU TOWNS W/ RAGS THATS TACKY yet we still aint see him bringin smoke wit his "New Clear Agenda" like the MUSHROOM CLOUDS OF NAGASAKI.

- New Clear / Nuclear? In 2019? Bro this was a played wordplay when I was coming out of my mom's baby exit hole. The execution is alright, except for the pronunciation weirdness that I'm attributing to the accent barrier, but a concept like this is too stale to be worth more than what I'm giving it, which is a 0.

So harbouring thoughts of ya SHIT BARS PERFECTION'S ALL NOVICE SIR cos we'll only see 'Juice Behind his bars' as one of HITLAS CORRECTIONAL OFFICERS.

- Juice / Jews???? Really?????? No amount of accent barrier is going to save me from laughing in pain at THAT wordplay. And the first multi has absolutely atrocious wording. Nobody would ever say "SHIT BARS PERFECTION'S ALL NOVICE SIR." Nobody. It's obvious that you wrote that multi just to fit with "HITLAS CORRECTIONAL OFFICERS." Painfully obvious. And the concept is maybe the most basic one you've had in this verse so far, although it's hard to outdo anything about New Clear / Nuclear in that regard. -1

He pump faking, how dis GUY SOLD GUNS FLEXING KNEE DEEP? left 'Numb aching' when 'hollow heads takin action' like the CAIRO CONFERENCE IN EGYPT.

- I get the countries taking action thing, but not why 'Numb aching' and 'hollow heads taking action' were in quotes. I guess they somehow tied into the punchline, but I don't see how. I wouldn't have known what the Cairo Conference was if not for the expo, so maybe there's something here that I'm missing. Anyway, although the first multi was worded a bit poorly (not nearly as poorly as the one from the previous bar though), this was a decent bar. Not good, but decent. 0

U'll die so compressed n seasick, cos If Krhymez CLUTCHES DA GLOC AND W/ SWIRL ARMOR u'll see pieces of "Nine7Eight" scattered around like WATCHES N CLOCKS DWN IN PEARL HARBOUR!!

- Bro. Think about what you just said here. This is a total reach. Pearl Harbor happened on December 7, which has NOTHING to do with 978. Clocks never show the time 9:78 unless they're broken as shit or using some alien time system from Star Trek. Sure, I get the idea that there could be watches and clocks blown up in Pearl Harbor, but there are parts of this bar that simply don't mesh together with other parts of it. That earns you a -1 from me.

Overall: -1

What's the concept?

World war 2

Scheme's vs punches this battle was mad fire and had all sorts of style. Vote is concealed good looks to both but good luck to the advancer

both did alright, but one read much smoother, gb

Straight up heat from both beautiful battle guys, nine7eight that was some serious smoke bro!!

PUNISH shit !!!

Nine7Eight:

who got 'Jew(you) gassed' bitch, we do not-see(Nazi) hot bars so STOP WIT ALL THE WACK SHIT/ my soldiers waitin.. boy u not in 'rotation' call us out, me n my 'allies' will KNOCK YOU OFF YOR AXIS!

The Nazi wp didn't work for me... We do not see hot bars / we do Nazi hot bars ?? The idea you went for here was not bad.  I just felt you could have developed it a lot more, worded it better. Felt you tried too hard with the concept here, making it unnatural and choppy. Punch was ok but could have had a lot more impact. 

friend or foe, man they OFTEN SWITCH/pretend to be so, got you LOST IN TRICKS/ so when the enemy's close I am POPPIN CLIPS/ till their camp is closed like AUSCHWITZ!

Broken multi for starters [AUSHWITZ - 2 syllables, the rest are 3] You did better here by not overusing the concept but the punch could have been more complex. Basic idea and you could have done a lot more with it. 

firing squad for ur family, so yeah ur SON IS IN DANGER/ lock u 'alone in the oven' n call it ONE IN THE CHAMBER!

Best bar so far from you.  Short and sweet, with good execution. Solid punch, and this shouted you can be more creative with your craft. 

when the TROOPS ALIGNED u made the wrong move on CHOOSIN SIDES/ you a pussy like Hitler rather than face defeat you'd just commit SUICIDE!

Not bad but could've done more with this. You had a lot to play with, execution of this punch could've been better.  Came off simple but did have some sting to it. 

I'll roll up like a dictator that's TEN CARS DEEP/ n have your empire fall faster than the FRENCH ARMY!

Nice. The execution could have been better, but this was nice.  Felling like you have a hit and miss kinda verse at this point. 

you took 'massive losses' that's what the RECORD SHOWS/ n I don't mean 'determaning your ancestry' when I say I'll show up at your front door to CHECK IN OUR NOSE!

I don't get this. How can you determine someone's ancestry by checking their nose.  If I'm missing something / not understanding then please do tell. 

Kold Krhymez:

Nine's such a geek his BAE NOT NASTY WIT HIM, chances of him 'makin bangers' is WAY OFF FACT IS ITS'S SLIM cos we stil wnt c dat "Hit Last the Dawn Of Time" lyk ADOLFS NAZI REGIME.

WAY OFF FACT IS IT'S SLIM - That's disgusting, bad wording. And the Hitler wp? Even worse, Hitler and Hit Last? Come on, this was a good idea but your execution was poor. Not a good way to start a verse off.

So act bold all u want, kolds SET STAMP N CRUSH WITS gun-fire wil have 'Hollow causin blood flow' lyk dose DEATH CAMPS IN AUSCHWITS.

Multis were choppy and who's Hollow? Punch was ok, needed better wording. I also think you're trying too hard with the concept. Things are coming off as choppy and your punch impact isn't too strong at this point.  

Watch him switch up like he RUNS THRU TOWNS W/ RAGS THATS TACKY yet we still aint see him bringin smoke wit his "New Clear Agenda" like the MUSHROOM CLOUDS OF NAGASAKI

Dope. This was good. Better wording [1st multi still a bit off though] and the concept was used well.  Nice flip on the punch too, making it land with more impact. Need more of this. 

So harbouring thoughts of ya SHIT BARS PERFECTION'S ALL NOVICE SIR cos we'll only see 'Juice Behind his bars' as one of HITLAS CORRECTIONAL OFFICERS.

I liked the punch but the execution is still not the best. Better though, more relevant to the concept so the punch came across with more sting.

He pump faking, how dis GUY SOLD GUNS FLEXING KNEE DEEP? left 'Numb aching' when 'hollow heads takin action' like the CAIRO CONFERENCE IN EGYPT.

Nice. Good take on the concept and the punch was decent this time. Would've landed with more sting if you cleaned up the wording.

U'll die so compressed n seasick, cos If Krhymez CLUTCHES DA GLOC AND W/ SWIRL ARMOR u'll see pieces of "Nine7Eight" scattered around like WATCHES N CLOCKS DWN IN PEARL HARBOUR!!  

Multis were choppy again but the closer wasn't bad, wording issues again. Punch was ok, could have had a better flip to it though.

Both had bad wording and instances where they tried being too complex. I felt one was more basic and could've used the concept in better ways, I felt the other rushed it and didn't clean up his wording. Overall, I'm going with who I thought had slightly more sting to his punches and also used the concept better. Fair's in. 

krhyme killz way better

This was a very close battle I am giving it to the more fresher barz fair is tossed fellas 

Deleted KGs vote by his request. He clicked the wrong name. 

Read this a few more times and decided to change my vote. One was more basic and had some spots where his wording was poor, but I felt his concept use was a bit better. The other tried forcing his execution, overusing the concept too much where it impacted the readability mainly his setups and the wp's he tried using which didn't work both ways.

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I felt this battle really came down to execution vs conceptual strength.

I felt nine7eight's wording was a lot more natural and flow was a lot clearer, particularly in bars such as the "knock you off your axis" bar which I felt was the most cleanly executed bar of the battle. However, I felt conceptually your verse was a bit narrow. The "one in the chamber" one was clever, but other than that I felt most of your wordplay was very basic and conceptually limited. For instance, "got Jew gassed" is one of the most played and obvious WW2 lines imaginable.

Kold Krhymez, your wordplay and punches were generally quite clever and varied; however I thought your wording made them connect much less strongly than they could have. Your final two bars in particular had very weird wording in their set-ups which felt like it was really unnatural and only there so it would rhyme.

In the end my vote came down to whether I thought execution or conceptual strength was more important here.

PUNISH

very limited ww2 awareness displayed, i can understand it from a yank but kold u were schooled in england fam, very holocaust heavy battle so i cant edge it far in either direction as to who did the most out of the box stuff with the concept so im givin it on virtue of who i thought punched better

Half decent showing from both. Felt they both went a little bit crazy with the jew angles. Kind of expected but would have been nice to see some variety in the verses. Outside of that both seemed to have similar issues with use of the concept. Made it a bit tough to choose, but I thought 9 was just a head here with a few more clever lines that stood out from the verses. Could go either way. GL to both.

My winner here edge it more, sticking all the way through with the concept though some lines were streched to me at times, my loser had a brpken multis and ended up losing concepts at points though they brought it back it was a flip on 2nd bar wich loses its punch traction. Both came really good but looking at it from the concept angle and using fresh material and not having broken multis one edged it more. Fairs tossed GB forreal No hate.

Hmmm, I thought Kold Khrymez was trying too hard to maintain long rhyme schemes and it backfired and hurt the readability of his verse by a long shot. I was reading some of this stuff aloud and was like, this doesn't sound right at all xD. No offence bruh, gotta be straight with you. Try shortening your multis to make the bars cleaner. nine7eight, your first bar had some wp that wasn't working both ways, try to ensure the readability from both meanings makes total sense, also you had a broken multi in your second bar, Auschwitz is two syllables. Other than that, you had the cleaner verse for sure and I felt like you had the more stand out bars, which ultimately lead this into your direction. Fairs in y'all, good-battle.

If you want me to explain anything in further detail, please just ask.

PUNISH SHIT 

VERY HARD TO PICK A WINNER ACTUALLY, CONCEPTS WERE VERY SIMILAR.  HAD A FEW ISSUES WIT NINES VERSE AS HE USED ''AUSCHWITZ'' WIT 3SYLLABLES, ALSO I WASNT FEELIN THA TWO WORDPLAYS AT THA BEGINNING ''JEW-YOU'' ''NOT SEE-NAZI'' DONT REALLY WORK IMO...... KOLD WENT FOR LONG MULTIS WHICH IN AROUND 40% OF THA VERSE IT WORKED NICELY AS IT MATCHED THA FLOW OF THA BAR, BUT THA OTHER 60% OF THA VERSE WAS VERY HARD TO FOLLOW AS THA LONG MULTI SET DIDNT GO WITH THA FLOW, NINE WENT A BIT BASIC WIT THA RHYMES FOR THA MOST PART BUT HIS VERSE FLOWED ALOT BETTER AS A WHOLE...... ITS TOUGH, IM GONNA VOTE FOR THA DUDE WHO I FELT USED HIS CONCEPTS SLIGHTLY MORE CREATIVELY..... GL TO BOTH HERE, FAIR IS DROPPED!

Got my winner edging this one out with a little more consistency in his verse. Both suffered from trying to extend their schemes a bit too long to me. My winner rhymed a little better but a lot of sxhemes on this battle seemed forced or unnatural. Honestly, I prefer about 4 syllable rhymes. It's long enough without having to force anything. Both battlers stayed on concept decently but again my winner used it more effectively. Pretty similar ideas from both but one was a touch more creative when pairing it with his schemes. As far as actual punchlines, my winner started strong and fell off a bit and my loser had high and low points but I believe the winner was more consistent start to finish. Favorite part of the battle was my winner's opening two lines, that was dope. Seems a bit played but was executed well. Good battle, fellas. Fair vote. Good luck to whoever advances.

Thought one stayed on topic a bit better and had more oomph to his concepts. Other wasn't bad just a level below his opponent here. Fair is in yo