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Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2019-04-16 03:31:38).

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Deadline to post: April 17th, Midnight PST

Round closes: April 19th, Midnight PST

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Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-15 16:19:08 Private Message Student


Student
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RED Ribbon or Lotus, bring the heat gents

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Posted on: 2019-04-15 20:28:15 Private Message Student


g u t s
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expo: the notre dame of france caught on fire today. 

Posted on: 2019-04-16 03:56:41 Private Message g u t s


Edgeworth
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Going one way based on not only the punch being better, but also the wording making more sense and the rhyming not being jagged. Fairs. 

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Posted on: 2019-04-16 10:10:11 Private Message Edgeworth


Rieper
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Although one took the obvious concept choice, I feel he did a much better job with his wording with it compared to his opponent, who I feel had a choppy flow with some reaches in his wording.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 11:20:51 Private Message Rieper


Student
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g u t s: Punch was cool-ish, it was culture relevant but it would've been better if the beginning bar was relevant to the punch, multi's lined up by syllable but didn't fully rhyme so it just made the first part filler which in a one bar doesn't help you out.

Apollyon: Strong bar here, showed a good use of multi's here and at first glance the first bar doesn't seem relevant but it actually ties in, "Checked" as-in "Autopsy Procedures" and "Freak" as-in guts' last opponent and "zombie known creatures".

Overall: Felt like my winner took this by executing a higher calibur bar with more multi sets and a higher syllable count. Loser had the better concept but sacrificed the first part with filler.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 17:19:04 Private Message Student



 

 
 

i felt guts was a little higher on the diss and apollyon a little on the self hype and set up.

Multis were broken and weak from both though.

pretty close one here but guts gets this imo.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 07:39:02 Private Message nickleshanandan


While reading guts' bar I was like "eh, this isn't great, where's it going..." until I got to the end. Wow. That's such a fast response to something I only found out about a few hours ago and something that actually made me chuckle. However, I did think that your multis weren't too clean. Not so much the vowels, that can be down to accents; but like "ass" and "france" aren't a perfect rhyme, and when you only have a single set of short multis I'd kinda expect them to be cleaner.

Apollyon your bar had a whole lot of wordplay throughout it, and I think this took away from the flow of it a bit. The punches were pretty solid though, and your multis were quite clean and complex. "all zombie known creatures" doesn't sound like a very natural thing to say though.

All in all this was a battle I thought was close but clear. Good battle, good luck to both, both were highly enjoyable reads.

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Posted on: 2019-04-16 07:50:50 Private Message Lil Talent


Two very different punching styles on display here. I felt guts's bar was a direct punch which was set up nicely and executed well. Also, conceptually it was easy to follow which made for a much smoother read. Apollyon's bar was different in terms of structure and focal point. I feel like his bar would've been great as an opener to a 8 or a 16 as a set up, but not that strong as a standalone punchline/1-bar. Also, the punchline itself didn't read smooth either because you had to adhere to the limitation of characters, or it was just worded poorly, but 'im makin the cut brain dead mf' just wasn't it bro. In battles like these, you might have to cut corners with spelling or wording, but the actual punch is the LAST place you want to do that because then you're diluting the overall presentation of your bar. You only have 2 lines to work with so I think you should've either changed the wording, multi, or language of the set up, or went back to the drawing board with a whole new scheme and punch altogether. 

Good round 2 battle though gents. Fair is in, and good luck to whoever advances.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 12:02:34 Private Message Saiii


i felt likeone had broken multis but i likethe current referencr, the other stood out more to me i likethat verse its creative. fairvote.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 13:58:47 Private Message Racketeer


Ima go with guts on this one...fresh one line....nice flow ...apo...ur lines was bad..jus felt guts was better more creative and jus hit a bit harder...not bad at all fella

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 15:44:51 Private Message Panorapic


...both were ok, but my winner had better multies and concepts. the other's concepts were not well structured and look too played. anyways, fv no h8!

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 16:08:44 Private Message kru:shul


Venom of the Red Lotus

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 18:01:11 Private Message Shodan


Dope dope dope shit here both dudes making the most with their bar and dropping a haymaker. Multis from both were on point but I give this to my winner for his aggression. vote concealed

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 21:08:09 Private Message Bnas


close shit fellas my fair is.tossed tho

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-16 22:28:02 Private Message o EaSTeS x


dope punches from both, guts took a topical approach so i think that in itself made his punch stand out alot,  from an execution i thought it was solid and an overall good punch. but im giving this to appollyon, i think the setup was better from the opening ine settting up the concept, to the comparison leading up to the double stacked closing rhyme. imo just had moree of a sting to it

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-17 20:18:55 Private Message Alzie


Although one was more relevant I feel my choice's bar had a little more quality

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Posted on: 2019-04-18 14:01:21 Private Message ZaKw0n


X-Calibur
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Phenom thought you was dead .... good bar not really complex but you did enough here to my loser go peep rican 1 bar on Notre damn that’s how you use the concept this was a bit weak bro ... good attempt but not good enough ... .:X:.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-18 19:59:42 Private Message X-Calibur


Guts left my crew so I guess I can vote on this now. If not, remove this vote.

Anyway, I felt that these two bars were pretty much equal in every way, except for Apollyon's absolutely atrocious ending multi set. "ALL ZOMBIE KNOWN CREATURES"??? Really?!?!?!? That wording is so utterly illiterate that it would make a retarded illegal immigrant feel like Shakespeare by comparison. Nothing else even needs to be said about this battle because that shit tipped the scale by itself. Also, congratulations to guts for using the most obvious concept imaginable for right now (but also for adding a nice spin to it and executing it cleanly). Fair's in.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-19 01:26:19 Private Message Shodan


Nice shit, this was close, gb

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-19 12:02:31 Private Message ContagiousZ


I will say that Notre Dame bars seemed kind of played from the time the actual burning happened, since it’s a bit of a low hanging fruit. That said, one bar was simply worded in a way that made sense, and the other wasn’t. “ALL ZOMBIE KNOWN CREATURES” was super forced and I’m not quite sure what it means. Fair’s in.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-20 00:37:37 Private Message Wonderbred

 

 
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