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Expo: Arrows on a compass point due east 

expo don't vote if u don't get!

dodge makes VIPERS by the way thought outside the box a little.bit here

got a clear winner, one was much more creative and put more thought into their piece..GONZOvote

givin it 2 erupt 4 stronger form n structure innit, in terms of rhyme n punchline

Winner had a very strong bar in terms of how he used his concept, setups were relevant and it was easy to follow from start to finish. Clean wp and a nice flip at the end, to give a solid punchline which had impact behind it.

Loser had a good concept but his execution could've been better. The links weren't really there like in the winner's bar and it was a bit more simplistic, like the multis you used. Punchline was nice but there wasn't too much sting with it.

MVGT: Erupt

One's big downfall here is his wording, he went for a cool idea but it just wasn't executed properly. Also, his multis were off & there wasn't much of a structure to his bar. The other's multis weren't 100% but his bar was still stronger w a harder punch. 

o EaSTeS x: Interesting concepts here but the execution could've been better, just had too much going on, in a one bar you don't have the luxury of space so every word counts, just work on relating everything together.

Erupt: Good bar here, simple concept but it was executed well. Not much to critque tbh

Overall felt like one took this somewhat easily, loser crammed too many concepts together which led to wording issues.

O eastes x had some good lines with some good ideas or creature,eruypt was little less creative and slow rap,o eastes x ftw

Thought one had a better structured bar with a more creative approach. Other guy had too much space in between multis for the execution to be butter. Fair is in

East could've just had a better bar all together. Erupt's line about Due East/Do east was enough to take this one

Got rupt taking this despite the use of ock. That's some antiquated slang. Still his bar was a bit more to the point. Simple wordplay and more agressive. Thought eastes wording was a bit weird. "Dodge on death" doesnt really make sense. "Dodge death like a viper in the graveyard" would have been more naturally worded

East ya concept was a bit of a reach but it was a fresh one, just delivered poorly, u needed a better set to pull that off

Erupt had a good setup with a nice punch at the end, had to read a couple times to get it. But it was clever imo

Both bars here had some interesting wordplay and metaphors, but the multis from Erupt were just a solid step ahead of o EaSTeS x. The first bar had a capitalised multi which realistically had about 2 unique syllable rhymes. "300 Spartans wit the bravehearts/300 Vipers on the graveyard" only contains "bravehearts/graveyard" as actual different words whose syllables match up. Erupt had a 7 syllable multi which he carried pretty cleanly three times, leading to a more effective bar which I felt won this battle.

Thought this was clear as day, Erupt's punch was on a totally different level in terms of creativity/execution/etc even though it was kind of a reach in that nobody commits gangland murders with a bow and arrow. Fair's in.

Good shit man I loved both drops gotta roll wit Erupt felt like he edged this due to the heat of the bar and execution East you killed it to bro bro RESPECT fairs in

Votes in..

The compass line had a little better execution than the viper line. However erupt got docked a mark as its supposed to say “due east”. Where east lost his most point were 1. Words clumped together 2. Braveheart was a Celt, not a Spartan. 

God damn!! Nice battle here.

Erupt and Eastes definitely brought it here, the compass bit amazing and the only personal in the battle, but the coherence between the first and second line was low while eastes had it all in his bar simple multi fire concept, smooth set up loved it, but would have perfect with a personal tho. Eastes definitely had the best metaphor of the torunament so far other than edgeworth's, and even tho generic imma give this to him.. GB!!

East was reaching big time with this shitno doubt about that, lmao. Both decent but felt Rupt was a bit smoother and his set up worked for me. Though I gotta say compasses point north not east. Fairs in. 

...the winner took this easily with more complexity and better multies plus cleaner concepts. the other didnt do much to take the win. fv, no h8!

Votes in, felt rupts bar a lil more. Good shit from both. 

One utilized his bar here with a haymakers while the other attempted what the winner had done. Both had some dope scheme's but winner was on another level here yo for real

One was more personal I found.

Pretty cool round Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-04-15 10:02:37