Text Scheme Championship #8

Your Scheme: Fuck The Bar Maid.

Post the scheme so everyone can see.

Deadline to post is March 16th, 11:59PM EST.

Goodluck!

Scheme: FUCK THE BAR MAID

This was a good battle I thought one was more consistent with the scheme and had a more better thought out verse. My fair.is tossed fellas good shit

For me one verse had a much clearer flow, which meant it was a lot easier to see how the stressing of the multies would work to get them to rhyme and made the whole scheme a lot clearer. Wordplay, metaphors and punches across both were pretty much the same; therefore the verse which had a smoother flow and thus was much easier to see how it fit with the scheme was the one I voted for. Good luck to both in the tourney!

Ok. Ultimately, I made my decision based on use of the scheme combined with strength of punches. I think one had a LOT of filler in their set ups, while one had a LOT of filler in their punchlines. I also found that both had some awkward cases of wording in their multis, and in writing lines that literally make no sense. So, I'm picking one to win by making less of these wording errors, having less filler, and most importantly adhering to the scheme a little tigther. Vote concealed. 

My winner utilized the scheme more consistently and had better set-ups with harder hitting punches. Loser had some decent jabs but nothing too creative, too much filler throughout and had wording issues. I get where he was going at some places but he could've elaborated slightly to get the point across better. Pretty closed otherwise, good reads and I agree it was a hard scheme to work with. Fair's in fellas.

Ones flow was too much here.. I think his opponent underestimated him as to why he brought what he did. Vote concealed not giving away anymore of my vote

Great match here thank you both for the hard work this was a very tough scheme to follow but you made lemonade out of the lemons you were handed I'm leaning towards Phe felt like he did a Lil better following the scheme guts had some wording issues plus a couple multies had heavy slant still a decent drop it never hate got Phe over Guts RESPECT fairs in congrats to the one who advances 

Venom of the Red Lotus

got one taking this with a more enjoyable read, top to bottom. Smoother transitions between multies, and cleaner wording. Flowed a bit better too. This could go either way, but i have a winner.