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Edgeworth and Shodan vs Brayne Ded and Erk

The Fire Nation

EXPO:

Erk told Tyrant that his COMMAS ARE GREATER here: https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=507673

The section that was hit by Hurricane Michael is considered the Florida Panhandle. 

Gal in a crack/Gallon 'a crack

Artemis is a Greek lunar/moon goddess

Anything else just ask.

Fuck me dead, this battle was mad. I'm honestly still a beginner, and It's hard as fuck for me to critique something as well written as this.

I love both, but the winner Edged this with battle with funnier random rhymes.

Even with WWE figurines, there won’t be a “NEW TOY THAT YA FLEXIN”! Haha lmao.

Fair's in, great battle.

Loser had a good closer but w was more all around. From punches to flow

8-3 edgeworth verse earned a win gb buh Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2018-10-15 11:58:37

One teams complexity was the death of their oppenents here. You can feel the chemistry in one of these teams where the other is two people popping in and out, tagging is definetly a science and is not pulled off by all those who attempt it. Further analysis shows one teams experience writing greatly helped them shine in this one, while the ther did their thing they were definetly the lesser in the factor. A good read fellas but i got my winner/GONZOvote

Think both had some good hits here and there, also some misses. I think Team ShoWorth got the better hits in over-all, better scheming too, although the NAZI CREMATORIUM multi, I felt was a little forced in terms of rhyming. Apart from that the verse was pretty good. Team BrayneErk were good, but I was feeling the second half better than the first, ultimately leading to one team being more consistent than the other. Fairs in yall, wish both teams the best of luck! 

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BARS!!!!