Your scheme is: Cut to the chase

Good luck to both competitors!

Okay so I think this was pretty clear. Saiyan, you had alright punches throughout.. nothing great but alright. Stop with the ROUNDS punches though. A bucket IS round, but it isn't A round. Same with plates. Kona, not much to see in your verse, and there was a bunch of homoerotic content too. Why would you have your butt to his face and have him eating your shit?! Plus I didn't see an actual double-meaning punchline in there, which sealed the deal. Fair's in.

big fucking mistake from me here, i completly missunderstood the time skale we had and the way these tourneys work, i could have approached it  with the structure of my normal battles and put my effort in dope hard punchs and dint cos of getting fukkd u info n missintupritting wat i was doing.. as soon as i read his bars i was pissed lol noh8 saiyan gb bro well dope but lesson learned first ever tourney.. on to the next tourney.. watch this space whoevers gets me next is gettin bodied

KONA's elevated to tha point i can say, OLYMPUS HAS FALLEN .. lol ... Apocalypse!!

fair vote is in ! feel like kona went easy & rushed his 16, he had more than enough time to create a very strong 16 ! and this was not the case <! feel as if saiyan was just warming up here, he is saving his good shit for the later stages ! both were good though so it was not an easy decision ! but i have made it & i think it is the right decision, good shit guys & good luck 

KONA NEEDS TO STOP BEATIN HIMSELF UP....... YOU HAD SOME GOOD SHIT IN THERE FAMS.....APOCALYPSE!!!!

Gb

Fairly clear to vote. Fair is in. 

i got an inv...had 7 days it said, the inv didnt work hd no shceme, tht happnd about 4 times, i got the working invite, was told by the student i had 7 days from wen i got the correct inv, worked on detailed battle style bars, was then told i have to rhyme the scheme in every ine, i couldnt rhyme anything other than the scheme which is y the only rhyming word in there are a million rhymes with the scheme, i then got told i had to enter my bars that day, 2 days after getting the inv and 30 mins after starting to rite my bars, so this is a pile of rhymes thrown together out of cinfusion in 30 mins, simple. noh8 but thts exactly wat happnd, fair votes gud drop saiyan but honestly i think saiyan can do alot better cos if i had dropped wat i was originally planning to do honeslty bro it was better thn wat u dropped, and ur deff a better emcee..all facts..no h8 APOC

Gb man hard to choose but my winner had slightly harder punches and I like the word play better

Think one's structure/content was a little more solid here. lead to cleaner and stronger punches. While one had a tad more filler and lost impact due to this. Nice verse from both though. Fairs in. 

One stood out more to me in this battle. The loser used the same words in his Multies a few times an that hurt his verse a lot. The winners punches also came out a lot stronger to me. Votes in guys.

ur not getting what im saying to u....look at the bars i dropped here...the structure.. its not the same as how iv writen in my past 10 battles, i started writing for this as if it was just another battle with THAT structure (similar to how saiyan wrote his (and every decent mc does) and then was told i could not write it like that becasue the ONLY WORDS IN this tourney battle that i was ALLOWED TO RHYME is the shceme i was given.. so saiyan has writen a verse with content and bars, all i did was rhyme the scheme word over n over, as i was doing it i was saying this does seem rite, AND @ SAIYAN UR BARS HERE ARE NOT GREAT BRO WANNA BATTLE MA?  SEND ME 8 BRO SEE WAT HAPPENS THEN I AINT EXPLAININ IT Again

this isnt me making excuses to loosing the battle...saiyan clearly won and theres no h8 at all...im  pissed off cos i was given shitty incorrect infomation by the 'top' lets beefers on how to do this, feels like sabotage

UR MOM WAAS 1

KONA don't want that problem. AL's.

Ok . Wtf is going on here? U guys was playing with my mind or something. Winner was not that hot but loser was fcked from the jump fv in

Lower rates due to it being a scheme battle. Higher lower rates due to it being in a tournament. This aint shit in my opinion. I definitely didn't like kona's battle because i freestyle that shit. Saiyan was just like blah but still sorta creative. I know it's limited but still...its not like a regular battle on here. Peace.

Just looked at his bars. Dude isn't even worth my time lol 

Agree with Erron Black's and Shodan's breakdowns on here. Overall, felt like one stuck to the scheme more. Fair's in fellas.

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