Expo: Coffin Dodger old as fuck.

Ahh my instinct was right....as my bars said , too predictable sub . But good luck anyway faggot.

Funny shit here I ain't going to lie. What edged this out for me was readability. Ones wording was great and verse flowed effortlessly was easier to follow more impactful and all that jazz ... fairs in good opener

I like the beginning to CARPETS NEED CLEANING..this was a Classic read the opponents line was fire too I like the OWEN HART IS STILL BREATHING... fire from both keep doing y'all thing.

My winner carried the scheme better

Damn, I should've signed up for this tourney...

I think my W more than edged this with fresher concepts & finding a way to consistently create dope, thought-out punchlines with the scheme guidelines he was given. The L came decent too, but not close enough to make this debatable, imo.

This was a close one imo. While one was fresher/less predictable the other executed his bars better. Reading over the second time I got my winner, fairs in. 

Underwhelming battle. Both had decent rhymes but had little to no concepts stringed along with them which made the punches fall flat. Both had basic references and similes which is understandable since this is a scheme battle. Subreal started off slow, had his ups and downs but had a dope closer, I felt that he could have utilised the multies more creatively and strung them with fresh metaphors and concepts instead of just executing them as statements. Coffin had some dope personals and simple references was consistent throughout. My winner was more polished with the scheme and won because he was a bit more creative than his opponent.

This was solid. Both had some good material but one was just a level or two above his opponent with punches. Fair's in.

this battle was a dope one that's for sure. both had they own execution and creative concepts. feel both had unnecessary filler at times but the blows that connected was solid. Sub faired here in the delivery and construction department aswell as landing a good amount of punches. Coffin had a nice verse and I felt he held the advantage in personals. I will go over this one more time after I take the lady out for a quick bite 2 eat

Felt both struggled to work decently set up punches into the schemes. That said my winner did have more instances of that. Loser had some funnier moments but they weren't complimented by a strong punch usually and that gAve the winner a slight edge. 5-5

Votes in/ got one edging this slightly with an overall more smoother scheme, both did a solid job here nothing fantastic though 

fv

I felt one got his personals polished from the start here..thou he took a while to get to punches but he went realy hard..had sum comedy lines sumed up neat Set ups..I felt the other tried to rebuttle but wasn't driving home with the lines..also his personals were meh didn't realy hit hard the fair is in..

That rebuttal was nice but i still feel Sub came in Harder here no hate and fair vote always.

one dude got exposed here. both stuck with the scheme but one had more personals and punches. the only take away from my loser was rhyming the "MA" shit twice. fairs in fellas

Sub kept the scheme better. Not a lot of hard punches from either. Coffin had some good concepts, just didn't connect as hard as they could have. Fv

Subreal had the smoother verse and his opponent was all over the place

Subreal had a smooth clean read, nice funny punches, could've been a little more creative concept wise tho'

CoffinDodger: I liked the way you predicited Subs verse but felt u could've used that to your advantage more, that was proab the highlight of ya verse..punches was ok..could've had more impact..being this was a grudge match

close battle but my winner had better punches, smoother read and a little more creativity...fairs in