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Put on a show my dudes! GL

Posted on: 2017-04-10 21:11:42 Private Message RhetoriK


X
<BG>
The Boss


Good effort from both participants, solid wordplay and multies. The personals were pretty even, one flowed a bit better and had a couple harder punches.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-16 14:53:03 Private Message X



 

 
 

Congrats on making it this far gentlemen. Let`s see a hot one!

Posted on: 2017-04-09 15:12:25 Private Message NOBLE


Green Street!

Posted on: 2017-04-10 11:00:19 Private Message Fybre Optikz


ShotsFired
<EVIL>
Wesley Snipes

Expo: Celsius tried to get WarSand to let him ghostwrite his verse against Eth. Eth exposed Cels personal information in the forums...Cel claimed he was backing out of the GC. His grandma recently passed. Ja Rule and The Game had beef w/ 50 cent. John Booth killed Abraham Lincoln in his viewing box while attending a play. WP expo: Shot Lincoln to death/Shot link into death Get to 50 cent/ Get 250 sent Rule n The Game/Rulin the game Celebration/Cel abrasion.

Posted on: 2017-04-14 00:34:49 Private Message ShotsFired


Fair vote felt like my winner came in with better executed punches and personals GB 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-14 00:47:38 Private Message YC


my honest is in pm for expo :D

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-14 01:45:48 Private Message The Real Deal


Whoa,  pretty dope from both. Sf: opener was ur strongest line 'celebrity over night' & booth' 🔥 after that you continued good bars but they weren't as hard. I feel you're verse is top notch as far as construction goes. Celsius: very glad to see you polished up since your last drop(as in less mistakes made, spelling errors,  autocheck). You're originality here plays a major part. The golden gate line is probably the best bar in the battle. I will think on my vote 

Posted on: 2017-04-14 08:12:24 Private Message Dexter3


Bnas
<MvH>

fuckin heater... fire battle... crazy shit, will not sway for the winner. this may be the best finals in text GC in the past few years man

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-14 09:38:34 Private Message Bnas


The Punches fron one. Probably went over heads. My winner got this by the skin of his teeth. I'm impressed by both here. Good LuCc!!!

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-14 10:26:25 Private Message MaCc Da G0D


Close one here...I felt one's verse was much easier to follow, cuz he didn't try to squeeze in as much filler...however, the punches weren't hitting very hard, but that could go for both mc's...I expected more, due to this being the championship match...I rated the scores even, but since there must be a winner, my fair vote is in. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-14 20:54:58 Private Message Cekspree


I felt winner edged in the multis, wordplay, and had more punchlines. The personals from both were the low of the battle but the winner edged in that too. If you are going to gossip then at least go all out and say someone needed ghostwrittens. claiming someone complained about the mods isnt that hard, especially since its about the mods on letsbeef. Close battle, GB, FV noh8 GL 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 02:30:25 Private Message Bosses


Good job fellas... Both got personal.. Punches were tight.. SFs drop felt like it flowed a lot smoother.. I based my vote on that.. Was close tho.. Big ups to both of you!

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 10:10:07 Private Message Pugz


Jesus, another fire battle. I think my winner was a bit more advanced here. Some of his personals and punches in general were execeuted a bit better, making them have a bigger impact. Both given tens for getting to the final though, props. Got one winning this by a bit. Fairs in. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 12:52:07 Private Message Bape


Because of this battle's nature (GC final) and the fact that it's very close, I will break down each verse, bar-by-bar. For reading convenience, this will be a four-comment expo, with each comment's content as follows. 1 (this comment): introduction. 2: ShotsFired's verse. 3. Celsius' verse. 4. Closing thoughts.

There will probably be a substantial amount of time (say, several hours) between comments two and three.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 14:03:58 Private Message Shodan


ShotsFired

I’ll make u a “Celebrity over Knight” w/o PACS SHOOTIN EXPLAINED Then “Shot Link into Death In The Box” I go “JOHN BOOTH W/ A PLAY” u get it "Handed to u all the Time" like a CLOCK’S MOVEMENT BEHAVES So how u gon “get to 50 Cent” when ur “NOT RULE N THE GAME”!!?

- This is a very strong opener. The way that you schemed together several distinct punches, while using a unifying angle (aggression/violence), immediately drew my attention. My only substantial criticism is that the Lincoln and Clock wordplays are awkward. 8/10

Ya gran’s death got u “On ya last leg” like a LOAN SHARK VIOLENTLY SNAPPED It’s COLD HARD IRONY THAT u been "Gassed Up For Ages" & that "OLD FART FINALLY PASSED!"

- The grandma's death angle is brutal. The ending punch is good but only moderately creative. The flow is very fluent. I have no other substantial remarks to make about this bar. 7/10

Let’s “Take the gloves off” b4 u TRY N WEAVE THE GREATEST PUNCH A straight-can-cause-this-man-ta-rap “Racist propaganda” that’s a “SIGN U NEEDA HANG EM UP”!!

- This line flows excellently. However, the ending flip is slightly awkward since it didn't, technically, work both ways. I would have written it as something like: "that's a SIGN, TELLING YOU TO HANG THEM UP!" Exchanging technicality for fluency might be better though, so consider that remark primarily relevant to personal style. The concept is still extremely strong though; probably better than anything from this tourney's previous battles. 8.5/10

Eth got personals to “Rub it in his face” like a FEMALE WATCHIN PORN & “Made em pay when he let’em go” so C “BAILED” TALKS OF WAR when that “Sensitive information got exposed” no E-MAIL LOG REPORT! he thought he’d “Skate through the Comp w/ Style” til he saw those “DETAILS ON THE BOARD”

- Full disclosure: I had to have Shots expo the skate punch for me. Now that I understand it though, it's a strong punch, and since the underlying reference is so well-known, that ignorance is my fault more than Shots'. I'm fairly certain that I understand the first three punches, but they aren't great. Individually they are weak, but being schemed together makes them decent. The ending punch is strong though, as aforementioned. 7.5/10

Some 1 shoulda gave “C PR training” cuz when the “PRESSURE WAS ON YOUR CHEST” u asked Sand if it’d “Be Cool if you Ghosted” vs Eth like a SPECTER FROM THE NORTHWEST Ur “Gettin sent home crying” 4 tryna write a single “LETTER FA that WAR VET”!!

- This is strong. CPR, as a general concept, is played, but the combination nameplay and personal, with a creative addition (the PR reference), makes this solid. The ghost bar is a mediocre personal; relevant, but not interesting. The ender is mediocre also; perhaps I'm missing something? 6/10

U found yourself “After success, takin Shots” that shoulda BROUGHT A REVELATION tryna “Scrape by me? Makes guys bleed” that’s the “CAUSE FOR CEL ABRASION”!!

- I HATE self-nameplay, but that aside, this is good. The relevant setup and internal multis allowed for fluent execution of an original punch. The punch is probably your second-best, after racist propaganda, but I decreased its rating for being a lone concept. 7.5/10

CLOSING THOUGHTS: Quality and quantity are both extremely important in battles, and you had plenty of both. However, I felt that some of your setup-punches were lackluster. The flow was good throughout, and buttery-smooth in some places. There were no major flaws in this verse, but some parts were underwhelming for a GC final even though the verse was satisfactory overall.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 17:18:37 Private Message Shodan


Celsius

Nawkout wannabe! This dopehead could never MATCH UP TO HIM THOUGH, "Dabbin in celebration" but as far as his PATTERNS OF WINS GO? He's got more 'freebies off the middle of the card' than my GRANDMA AT BINGO

- I find it interesting how Shots ended with a celebration wordplay, and your opener involved that word also. That aside, this is a decent opener. The personal angle is effective, but the bar generally felt stretched, especially so the concept. I'm not sure how it should be rewritten, but it reminds me of Black Book's bars; the concept is too lengthy. Good idea, mediocre execution. 6/10

A Collapsed frame'll make em say its over..pass', while tryna HOLD HIS EIGHT RIBS IN, "Thought you'd cruise by, SF? you're in Deep Water" like the GOLDEN GATE BRIDGE IS OVER WEIGHT LIMTS!

- The ending concept is strong. It has a similar problem to the previous bar, but feels less stretched despite actually being longer. The double multi-set at the end was impactful. I didn't like the overpass setup-concept, though. 6.5/10

The type to abandon his five seeds then go on IG & FLEX CHEESE TO VIEWERS, there's no spending time neither no FETCH, BEACH OR SCOOTERS, his thought process? Fuck all that, LETSBEEF IS COOLER! like if "Metro Boomin' didnt trust himself" here's another "DEADBEAT PRODUCER!"

- This could have been written more briefly and thus more impactfully. The concept is alright, I guess. 6/10

U called two mods out over VOTES MADE IN MATCHES even though BOTH NAMES ESTABLISHED, then Row & Illo roasted kiddo for his POST-RAGING ANTICS "Bad Control of Sportsmanship led to trouble with peers" (piers)like JOSE FERNANDEZ!

- This is easily your bar of the verse. The concept is great; a bit too lengthy but still comes off fluently. I would have written it differently though, by removing the phrase "even though BOTH NAMES ESTABLISHED" and changing POST-RAGING ANTICS to something more natural. Still a very strong bar. 8/10

Two nines on me, I aint aiming "for your eyez only" when I'm POPPIN' BOTH HEATERS, Remove that "Crooked Smile" & he aint GOT HIS NOSE EITHER, Call him J Cole how he "saw a Milli twice and DROPPED WITH NO FEATURES!"

- This is also strong. I don't have any substantial comments to make about it besides that. 7.5/10

You a Simp Son, I got this Mod close to God like NED FLANDERS WIFE,(Maude) "Shots fired near Manny has him seeing double vision" but I'm the only TEXT CHAMP IN SITE

- If I didn't know better, I'd mistake this for a Black Book verse... That aside, the bar is reasonably fluent. The Simpson / Maude setup is good, although I seriously wonder how many people will catch it. The ending concept is good, not great, but the personal angle amplifies it. 7/10

CLOSING THOUGHTS: I've seen better from you, Cel, but given the strain of writing several GC rounds in a row, faltering is understandable. You brought a GC-worthy verse, no doubt.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 19:08:38 Private Message Shodan


FINAL VERDICT: After my first read, I thought that this was a quality (Cel) vs quantity (Shots) battle. Further reads have convinced me that one was substantially better in both of those aspects.

I won't reveal whom I'm voting for in this battle until after its voting closes, but reading my expo will probably make it obvious. Although I have a fairly clear winner, I want to make it even clearer that this is a great battle, and whoever wins will completely deserve the GC title.

Fair's in.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 19:11:24 Private Message Shodan


fair dropped good read fellas

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-15 21:09:19 Private Message Ray Zeus


DopeDbattleoverallshots came firing. Inc..celsius haf the hay maker..the end..shoys was firing3 3-db. Took it

....celsius had closer and ender..by an eight of a k UN nt hair

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-16 04:39:21 Private Message Flako Boom


Congratulations to both of you for making the final. ShotsFired won the personals battle here. All that punching back, to back, to back while maintaining a solid flow was impressive. Some concepts/references were kinda loosely tied to the punch, but lots of times it was in the setup bars so it didnt hurt as much. Old Fart was BOTB, Email log report/Details on the board was nice as hell too. Celsius was as always really creative. Ive seen the simp, son/maude and j cole no features plays before but they were done a little differently here so it didnt hurt too bad.  The bingo punch off the rip was a solid beginning. The Jose Fernandez punch coulda ended this battle imo because it was that good an idea, especially tied in with a personal, but the wording to set it up was long winded and took away from its impact. Close battle here but one was a little more consistent with execution start to finish. Good shit to both of yall

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-04-16 07:11:17 Private Message Esso


ShotsFired
<EVIL>
Wesley Snipes

Good battle Cel!

Posted on: 2017-04-16 15:09:01 Private Message ShotsFired

 

 

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