One had more solid punches. Good effort

AC's

Expo. Word play is in itallics. Forlorn = for Lourne (Lorne Michaels is the creator of SNL). Sci in bitches = sighing bitches. Any S game = NES game.

Clowns wear funny make up. Houndstooth is a pattern used in jackets and shit. Think the rest should be easy enough. Good luck sci.

Lyve had some solid attempts at punches but was just too flawed. Execution was off logically in some places, and I spotted a broken multi. Aggo didn't have strong, complex concepts, but he said some funny shit. Leaning this way. Fair's in.

One had a lot of choppy multies, hindering the verse difficult to read and lessening the impact of many punches. Other kept it pretty simple, light jabs. Didn't like how he kept repeating words in his multies. One got this off of readability and better punches.

Aggo: Lol, you executed the comedy angle well here. Displayed a cool handle on rhyming & fluidity while keeping the concepts impactful & fresh. I liked the approach. 

Lyve: While you did good in the sense that you've got a grasp on setting up a concept, I think that your execution needs deep polishing. Things from the wording in bars like HAND TEEN FRIENDS CHEETOS that muddy the flow & make it awkward fluidity wise to the breaking of multis which can be seen in this very scheme. Gives a rushed vibe. You obviously have a grasp on rhyming & how a good punch should be set up, but the connection is failing to resonate with me.

Overall: I feel like Ags just overpowered him, in content impact and structurally. Good battle though guys

i felt like one bars landed harder then the other imo im going with the verse that i liked the most great spar fella's my fair is in

One picked it up in the second half of his verse and managed to scrape the W here...fair one

One was far more fluid in their delivery with more humor and impactful punches.

This was a dope Read..Aggo~you're Opener was Strong I liked that Saturday night line that glowstick line was sick it made me laugh you're Closer was also Clever with that Konami code line..Lyve Science~you're Opener was Decent with that clearly Dumb line..rest of you're Verse was decent danny devito and cheetos line was not Set up well Executed Overall I felt Aggo had the Smoother and stronger Punches fv no hate~

The fair is in.  One was conceptually much better imo. 

Winner had a clearer flow .

one edged it.fair up

Aggo had a pretty solid verse. One hard punchh for me was the 'sighin' bitches'. Had a nice laught with that. But for the most part the punches were just par, but consistent. Lyve had some nice ideas in there like the danny devito and punch drunk bars but overall he didn't have the execution to make the impact with his punches. Some of the bars had hicc'ups with the flow as well. 

Pretty evenly matched I think one may slightly have edged here.. read both a few times &IMO both was alil all over the place in some parts. I think the winner was alil more consistent.. had more landing punches winner may have edged a bit wit some doper name&word flips loser here I felt had some stretched concepts &multies that weakn the punch for me the winner also had some reaches that drowned the punch but overall I'm Jus leaning toward who verse stood out the most to me.

Gd job fellas g no hate fair is in

I think Aggo took this one. I enjoyed his flow more and his verse was funnier. Beside that, Aggo had a better use of concepts, although I think some of his references were a bit obscure and reliant on the expo which takes away from it a bit. For example, I didn't know that SNL's creator was named Lorne Michaels and wouldv'e never known how forlorn played into the whole SNL concept had it not been explained in the expo comment.  Bars are stronger when they're self-explanatory or when the references used are so well known imo. Lyve SCIENCE had some choppy wording and rhymes that weren't congruent imo. For example, one would have to forcibly skew their pronounciation of "BACTERI'UH" to make it rhyme with "NEARLY DONE." And would calling someone a "DUNCE SLUT BITER" come up in natural speech? Some of the wording just seemed awkward and forced. Besides that, I didn't think Lyve used complexity (metaphors/wordplay) as well as Aggo so my vote is set.

Props to both for showing up. Both had some nice shit but, I'd say I have a clear winner. My winner was really consisting with his whole verse frequently drafting good punches while my loser wasn't as consisting or as hard hitting with the punches. Overall my winner's verse was fresher and more complex. Fairs in, best of luck to both of you. 

ones multis took it for me gb fv nh.

Felt like one was just more consistent overall. The other had a decent amount of filler imo that lost points. Fv in, decent read.

Fuck this was a better battle then originally would have thought. both dudes attacked well with punches and metaphorers but one had a name flip or two that was more well executed. fairs in this was top 3 battles from round 2

Aggo man this was a bummer from u. Lyve .. For your style. Ill say u did your thang. This was a even play out because of the lack of targeted punches . fv in fellas