Good first battle! Both had strong presence, but some rhyming didn't make sense to me on both sides. Multies were decent on both sides. One had better wordplay and vocabulary. Votes in.

Quick Expo; "Ray J's Beat scene" Beat is UK slang for sex, just means a sex tape. Best of luck Fyber! Posted on: 2017-03-07 08:48:40

Good luck Watts Posted on: 2017-03-07 08:59:01

Ok. I Read BOTH verses TWICE to make sure my choice was Accurate..Can we Say 'WHAT AN UPSET!!!!' Yo, Watts Even though you had a few Typo's and Your syllable count was a Bit Off for somelines, your Verse was Full of Jabs and a Punch or Two. Digg that Ray-J Punch. Niceee. Your Verse Wasnt AMAZING but for the first Round of the GC it was def. Suffice. Good battle. F.O. you came with one of the Most Simple Rhyme schemes I've Ever seen from you. Nothing in your Verse stood Out to me to the Point that made me 'oooh or Damn' like your opponent. Still a decent verse. Just not GC level. Once again, Good job fellas! & Good Luck to Both. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 09:34:02

watts I like your concepts but i think your rhyming could use some work. Like, you grasp for complex multis which is obviously dope but sometimes it's broken which denotes that entirely. I actually fucked with your LOSE YOUR VISION scheme but the multi that made the punch work broke every multi before it lol. Rookie mistake that definitely cost points in something like the GC. Even the bar after that with RHYMES ATTACKING THE BEST MEN the syllables were broken. You've got your fundamentals down, and are obviously scripting some hitting concepts, but you should focus on refining them and removing any awkward wording/unrelated setups/broken multis and if you dedicate to that you'll probably find your content being hella better. Your finishing bar however completely denotes my last statements, wish you came like that the whole battle. Was super fluid, fairly impactful, but simply worked. Giving your verse a 7. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 12:37:23

Fyber, I felt like you couldve definitely came more correct in the rhyming field. Even in your first bar, MOCKERY doesnt fit with ROBBIN HIM. Thats just the first example of this repeated offense in your verse, which during a GC definitely costs points. I liked your obvious heavy style of grasping for punches but i feel like the harry potter bar was too drawn out for such an unimpactful crescendo, also some of them were semi-forced like how vending machines do not drop bottles, but cans. Idk. Just some clunky decisions in your verse that I feel like couldve either been more refined or replaced. I fucked with it fundamentally, though. Cool gc starter. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 12:41:09

ehh I was expecting a little more from both, as it is the tournament I feel like both really had simplistic punches and nothing wow'd me I think my winner's metaphors were a little better and thats what took it for me fv and gb gl to yall in advancing the tourney Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 12:51:21

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Posted on: 2017-03-07 12:52:13

Feel like this may have been a little rushed on both sides.. ones lines stood out a little stronger than the other to me Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 13:01:07

TFW. Your verse was pretty light. I felt like you focused too much on name flips and they just weren't hitting. Your lines aren't connecting punch is one of the most played concepts on this site. I've seen it no less than 5 separate times and you didn't do anything to distinguish from the others. You had a couple punches in the middle of your verse that were ok but you started and ended pretty weak. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 15:14:28

Fybre, started ok with the NBA concept but the execution fell a little flat for me. I feel like the pottery bar had some merit but again wasn't executed very well. Other shit was meh, ended with a broken multi. Ok. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 15:17:21

Got a winner in Fyber, thought he was more versatile and had better potential in his punches. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 15:18:08

I feel one rhymed better and wasn't as predictable...Would say more but this is a tourney...I don't wanna give away who I got...The fairs in... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 15:53:57

This was a close battle, i had to read it twice to clear any doubts...Fybre's longest multies (all of em actually) had 4 syllables, and if you follow just what's printed in bold, it kinda gives you the idea that his punches weren't too impactful...the "pottery shit" line was his best punch, IMO, but other than that, nothing really stood out as being impressive. TFWatts had a great verse, and the entire second half of it incorporated 6 syllable multi schemes, and it flowed well, the punches were landing, especially the "lines lacking connection" one...his setups were better too, IMO, and he had way more nameplay going on, every line was dissing fiber in a creative way. It was a brawl, but TF got the best of this one, in all honesty. -Spree zy Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 16:19:01

Gd tourny battle fellahs.. appreciate attacks from both my opinion fairly evenly matched.. I think my choice winner came with stronger punches. This mainly due to my choice L here had sum gd concepts but the filler made the punch seem very light I think both had some wording issues both had some iffy lines multies matched fairly close on both sides tho both had a few lines I jus felt didn't connect or match.. the choice loser here had some great nameplay flips & concepts that I think had he worded better & lessened the filler they'd bn haymakers I like that both was on attack stayed consistent. In the end my vote jus goes to the verse I felt edged by a hair after several reads Gd job again to both gd luck fair vote in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 17:22:18

Gd tourny battle fellahs.. appreciate attacks from both my opinion fairly evenly matched.. I think my choice winner came with stronger punches. This mainly due to my choice L here had sum gd concepts but the filler made the punch seem very light I think both had some wording issues both had some iffy lines multies matched fairly close on both sides tho both had a few lines I jus felt didn't connect or match.. the choice loser here had some great nameplay flips & concepts that I think had he worded better & lessened the filler they'd bn haymakers I like that both was on attack stayed consistent. In the end my vote jus goes to the verse I felt edged by a hair after several reads Gd job again to both gd luck fair vote in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 17:23:04

Fv in .. One btter with the construction of the bars Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 19:41:52

Interesting battle here Watts you had better punches better name flips an jus overall heavier bars but you forced rhymed a couple bars an kinda threw off the flow a bit Fybre u were the opposite you had better flow better connecting bars but punches on the weak side an a lil hard to follow at times with your word selection so wit that said fv is in good shit Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 20:56:00

Hardbody battle. Won't sway but both dudes went the fuck in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 20:56:31

Interesting battle here Watts you had better punches better name flips an jus overall heavier bars but you forced rhymed a couple bars an kinda threw off the flow a bit Fybre u were the opposite you had better flow better connecting bars but punches on the weak side an a lil hard to follow at times with your word selection so wit that said fv is in good shit Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 20:56:42

Interesting battle here Watts you had better punches better name flips an jus overall heavier bars but you forced rhymed a couple bars an kinda threw off the flow a bit Fybre u were the opposite you had better flow better connecting bars but punches on the weak side an a lil hard to follow at times with your word selection so wit that said fv is in good shit Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 20:57:12

Interesting battle here Watts you had better punches better name flips an jus overall heavier bars but you forced rhymed a couple bars an kinda threw off the flow a bit Fybre u were the opposite you had better flow better connecting bars but punches on the weak side an a lil hard to follow at times with your word selection so wit that said fv is in good shit Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 20:57:52

Interesting battle here Watts you had better punches better name flips an jus overall heavier bars but you forced rhymed a couple bars an kinda threw off the flow a bit Fybre u were the opposite you had better flow better connecting bars but punches on the weak side an a lil hard to follow at times with your word selection so wit that said fv is in good shit Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 20:59:20

One had broken multis along with some good ideas...some set up better than others. Not really consistent throughout. The other was a bit more creative and had cleaner execution...earning him the w here. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 21:01:15

One had better punches and better execution (other guy had some broken multis). Pretty clear all around, don't think a more detailed expo is needed. Fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 21:30:28

Good shit for the first battle in the tournament. I felt one just brought more punchlines and flow overall. Both had name play but one had way more. Votes in good luck Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2017-03-07 23:29:15

Solid battle, both came hard. One had more variety for me in terms of punches and themes, the other stuck to using just the fibre theme, which was executed well but i think more variety wouldve been more entertaining. no hate, good battle, fv

Good battle, felt one had more variety and themes with their scheme, whilst the other executed their limited themes well i felt it lacked creativity outside of that theme. Fair vote, good battle.

Watts had better punches an nameflips but a couple forced rhymes

Fybre had a better flow and structure but weaker blows and his word selection made it kind of hard to read at times

Fv is in

This was a close match here in my opinion. When reading text battles I basically vote for whom I thought wrote a better verse, but if this were audio and I heard the delivery it could sway the vote. All in all GB and good luck 

This was a close match here in my opinion. When reading text battles I basically vote for whom I thought wrote a better verse, but if this were audio and I heard the delivery it could sway the vote. All in all GB and good luck 

Better concepts got this..

close battle, both was spitting about the same level, ima have to go with optik cause his seemed to be flow more better. L was more all over the place. I also thought W ending was more funny fv ho8 gb

Really good battle.  This is going to be super under-rated but both had really nice concepts both ways.  I dropped my fair vote.  Respect to you both.  

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Both came with it. 

Both came wit it* 

Glitching don't know if my votes counting or not lol..

nice battle

tough call fairs in