One had some really good concepts that where executed well. A good read through out his piece. The other had some good concepts, could of executed & elaborated on them more though. The fairs in, i'm out. G'luck to whoever goes through. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-07 12:05:08

expo: You light Nine candles for Hannukah... Great battle Row & goodluck Posted on: 2015-09-06 05:16:07

SOLID STATE Posted on: 2015-09-06 06:47:24

One of these verses came with some very hit and miss material for me, and more than a few bars that seemed like filler. It was delivered fairly cleanly but some of the concepts were a little played, or weren't really connecting for me. That said I also thought it had the best lines of the battle. The other verse was more consistent, without ever really hitting the highs that his opponent did. It was sometimes a *little* wordy in between the punches, and the wording was a little off in places. Tough call but in the end I edged this to one. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 07:02:02

One was just more consistent throughout in all areas. good shit fellas. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 08:58:15

FAIRZIN Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 11:50:14

The st8 Posted on: 2015-09-06 12:50:57

I thought this battle was fairly clear. One forced his concepts by ending them with something created specifically for that bar, instead of already-existing terms, in some places. I can go into more detail privately if needed. I don't like that because it removes the challenge from making idiomatic punches. The concepts were just decent throughout. The flow, rhyming, and delivery were solid. Overall, this verse was good, but fairly light compared to what he's capable of. The other dude had punches that weren't as strong. The delivery in his verse has also poor; it frequently lacked words connecting the concept to the punch. One took this by a clear margin. Fair's in. 6-4. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 13:01:25

Too many drake punchlines hurt the losers verse. Winner had a mixed bag of punches ranging from meh to pretty nice. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 13:27:53

Fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 14:35:36

A bit disappointed, to be honest. Both had metaphors that were, frankly, kind of goofy. had to give it to the one that started out a little cleaner. Fairs in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 15:38:41

2 different styles . some of my losers wordplay and schemes were very basic , expected more . winner had a couple of funnier lines and more complex multis . fv n nh . Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-06 17:04:34

My Fam~ILLY! !! Posted on: 2015-09-06 21:48:08

FAM FAM FAM!!! This was Epic!!! Posted on: 2015-09-07 10:31:41

The fair is in. My winner was much more clever and delivered consistently in his verse. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2015-09-07 15:48:31