Chosen Rhyme Scheme: All Or Nothing Tactics. ====== ================== You have until 22:00 BST, Sunday, 12th of June to post. Failure to meet this deadline will result in auto-loss. NO EXCEPTIONS. Good luck 1/ Posted on: 2014-06-08 03:31:51

*Thursday, 12th of June. 1/ Posted on: 2014-06-08 12:52:03

Nice scheme, best of luck to both. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-08 13:57:14

This is a close one. I'll be back to this... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-12 09:47:36

Good battle. Entertaining read. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-13 06:33:45

ACs Posted on: 2014-06-07 05:22:51

^... Posted on: 2014-06-07 19:13:25

Crew: None ... Repping. Posted on: 2014-06-07 23:45:38

Viva La Free Agents! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-08 18:11:53

Expo: Yoda taught Luke Skywalker the Force on the planet "DAGOBAH", you can tell how old a tree is by counting the rings on its stump, Muhammad Ali lost his title and went to Jail, GALACTUS is a comic villain who eats planets, Vince Carter plays for the Dallas Mavericks, "Joes If Stalin" fought the Axis in WW2, Cockney is a kind of British accent. Posted on: 2014-06-12 09:14:16

great battle, both were entertaning reads and did well with the scheme. i felt one was conistently strong throughout the drop, whereas the other finished stronger than he started. got my winner Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-12 09:38:19

Quite simply, one stook to the Scheme better & delivered more impactful punches. Good luck to both. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-12 10:13:45

One Just came Smoother. Enjoyed the Read. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-12 14:21:26

Only expo needed: An oryx is a type of Arabian antelope and it's commonly hunted. Good luck my Good friend Grief. Posted on: 2014-06-12 14:59:14

This came down to better utilization of the scheme in coordination wit conceptual flips.. winner here had consistently cleaner wording and the word/sentence plays consistently read correctly in both meanings.. loser did well to but towards the end faltered a bit in that dept.winner here had one forced wordplay imo.. rest worked.. great finals guys and congrats to whoever wins Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-12 17:43:54

daaamn. mad close. came down to preference for me. no hate fairs in. ~1~ Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-13 00:35:30

One edged here .. Was smoother.. Less forced.. Punches hit harder. Fairest vote in the land .. Respect it Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-13 08:36:55

Dope final here. I thought one had cleaner wording but yet the other stuck to the scheme better. Was pretty close in my opinion. Both had a solid amount of haymakers thrown but my winners connected more due to execution and wording. Fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-13 12:03:58

Well, I guess I can not vote. It isn't giving me the option to vote but only leave a comment. Both writers did pretty good. One just seemed a little more effective while the other struggled to properly set up and execute his concepts. I think a lot of the MULTI's used from one were staggered and weren't strategically placed well. Kind of a rough read as I found myself having to go back and re-read a couple of the bars to try and pick the flow back up. A lot of the "Punches" were worded poorly and came off statement'ish. To me, a punch is an insult or some type of belittling using various text tools such as wordplay, creativity, personals, etc... I think one lacked in that area. Another thing that I noticed while reading was a few forced concepts, lol. Anyways, that's enough input considering I can not vote, if either of you would like me to break your verse down bar for bar and elaborate, PM me. Otherwise, not bad of a battle and keep writing fellas. Posted on: 2014-06-13 12:36:38

Concealed votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-06-14 14:36:27