ViTRiOL vs GOOD GRIEF - Text Tournament Battle - Rap Battles and Freestyle Battles at LetsBeef.com


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Scheme Tournament #3
Length: 12 Lines

ViTRiOL (95%) Won

Scheme Champion

Ranked #-- This Month (#-- All Time)

Crew: G.O.A.T.

Reppin: United Kingdom

GOOD GRIEF (5%) Lost

Tag Team Champion

Ranked #-- This Month (#-- All Time)

Crew: Geek Squad

Reppin: United States

ViTRiOL

Y’all really think Grief is "Fire in a Box" and this FRAUD’S THE TOUGHEST ACTIVE? Never 'caught-a-flame' from a Streak 'cause he barely "Scrapes a-Head" in ALL HIS FUCKING "MATCHES"!! Around LB, Grief is doin nothing but "Trash Bars" w/o a BRAWLER’S DRUNKEN ANTICS but he "Insists that his Garbage is Untouchable" like a HOARDER’S SUDDEN PANICS if you’d THOUGHT TO TOUCH HIS ATTIC!!! Now you front w/ MORTARS, PUMPS N' HATCHETS, pffft! You couldn't "Come to my Country Fully Packed" w/ a First Class FOREIGN LUGGAGE TRANSIT so the dude'd only be "Strapped and Spilling Blood" as a TORTURE DUNGEON CAPTIVE where Vitty's team'll tie up this cunt beFORE A DOZEN AXES zip-and-his-torso-splits, red flesh start flapping w/ "Strips Hanging off the Kid" like an ORPHAN'S RUGGED FABRICS!! He had a chat w/ the tourney host, well... a CALL TO BUMP HIS CHANCES: They went over a "Cuss to Debrief", if he needed votes? Grief'd be FORCED TO SUCK HIS PHALLUS, yeah he'll see my verse and "Rush to Get Over RULE's" faster than a LAWYER STUCK IN TRAFFIC!![CustodyBrief] And your damn wifey?? I didn't "Give her the Horn" in an ORYX HUNTING RACKET, it was a quiet room: She "Pursed her Lips" and slurped-the-dick but she had AWFUL SUCTION HABITS and I'd "Tell Her to Blow Harder" ... juuuuuust like your "DAUGHTER'S TRUMPET PRACTICE"!!!

GOOD GRIEF

We repping USA and PALMING AUTOMATICS using you Brits as targets, schooling Y'ALL ON PUMPING RATCHETS I'll have Goons Every "Day Go Bust Teaching In Full Force" like scenes SkyWALKER TRAINED FOR PRACTICE in ALL OF YODAS TACTICS!! (Dagobah's Teaching In Force) I got an AWLFUL PUNCH LIKE CASSIUS but how he a real boxer when DAWG IS KNOWN AS PASSIVE? "You Can Tell Triol" wouldn't "Count In A Ring"... unless Ages of SMALL TREE STUMPS ARE ADDED!! (Tell Tree Ol') when ya first "Championship Loss Behind Bars" like ALI SUFFERED BACK THEN this L will have you giving up on life BAWLING UP WITH SADNESS and "Consuming Your Entire World"... I'm TALKIN LUNCH, GALACTUS!! He was booed in the UK cuz his SONGS WERE POOR AND LACKIN got worse performing in Houston and was booed ALL THE WAY TO 'DALLAS' his weak flow was even more "Vincible After Playing In Texas"... like ChiCAGO TRADED MAVERICKS for Carter's BALLIN JUMPER STATUS!! (Vince A Bull) think these Brits are rap gods, but they FALL WHEN BRUNG TO SCRAPPIN they turn to Average "Joes If Taken To War" like STALIN WITH THE AXIS a million reasons these niggas gay: GOD THEIR FUCKING ACCENTS in the US if they're "Mouthin Cockney On The Land"... It's CALLED DICK SUCKING HABITS!! (Mouth N Cock:Knee On The Land)

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2014-06-12 09:03:53).

RULE <CLASSICK> Administrator Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Rookie Champion Tag Team Champion	Chosen Rhyme Scheme: All Or Nothing Tactics. ====== ================== You have until 22:00 BST, Sunday, 12th of June to post. Failure to meet this deadline will result in auto-loss. NO EXCEPTIONS. Good luck 1/ Posted on: 2014-06-08 00:31:51
RULE <CLASSICK> Administrator Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Rookie Champion Tag Team Champion	*Thursday, 12th of June. 1/ Posted on: 2014-06-08 09:52:03
ODIN <Asgard> The All Father Topical Champion A Celtic Bard	Nice scheme, best of luck to both. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-08 10:57:14
ODIN <Asgard> The All Father Topical Champion A Celtic Bard	This is a close one. I'll be back to this... Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-12 06:47:36
ODIN <Asgard> The All Father Topical Champion A Celtic Bard	Good battle. Entertaining read. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-13 03:33:45
Manhattan <LoD> Moderator Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	Dope final here. I thought one had cleaner wording but yet the other stuck to the scheme better. Was pretty close in my opinion. Both had a solid amount of haymakers thrown but my winners connected more due to execution and wording. Fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-13 09:03:58

NatsHubby Banned	ACs Posted on: 2014-06-07 02:22:51
GOOD GRIEF <GS> Tag Team Champion	^... Posted on: 2014-06-07 16:13:25
ViTRiOL <DGAF> Scheme Champion	Crew: None ... Repping. Posted on: 2014-06-07 20:45:38
Wizdumb Basic Member	Viva La Free Agents! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-08 15:11:53
GOOD GRIEF <GS> Tag Team Champion	Expo: Yoda taught Luke Skywalker the Force on the planet "DAGOBAH", you can tell how old a tree is by counting the rings on its stump, Muhammad Ali lost his title and went to Jail, GALACTUS is a comic villain who eats planets, Vince Carter plays for the Dallas Mavericks, "Joes If Stalin" fought the Axis in WW2, Cockney is a kind of British accent. Posted on: 2014-06-12 06:14:16
Anarchist <ANA> Banned	great battle, both were entertaning reads and did well with the scheme. i felt one was conistently strong throughout the drop, whereas the other finished stronger than he started. got my winner Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-12 06:38:19
SAND	Quite simply, one stook to the Scheme better & delivered more impactful punches. Good luck to both. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-12 07:13:45
Phracture <TheElite> Grand Champion	One Just came Smoother. Enjoyed the Read. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-12 11:21:26
ViTRiOL <DGAF> Scheme Champion	Only expo needed: An oryx is a type of Arabian antelope and it's commonly hunted. Good luck my Good friend Grief. Posted on: 2014-06-12 11:59:14
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT King Concept Champion	This came down to better utilization of the scheme in coordination wit conceptual flips.. winner here had consistently cleaner wording and the word/sentence plays consistently read correctly in both meanings.. loser did well to but towards the end faltered a bit in that dept.winner here had one forced wordplay imo.. rest worked.. great finals guys and congrats to whoever wins Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-12 14:43:54
The Dope Man	daaamn. mad close. came down to preference for me. no hate fairs in. ~1~ Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-12 21:35:30
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	One edged here .. Was smoother.. Less forced.. Punches hit harder. Fairest vote in the land .. Respect it Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-13 05:36:55
Trademark Basic Member	Well, I guess I can not vote. It isn't giving me the option to vote but only leave a comment. Both writers did pretty good. One just seemed a little more effective while the other struggled to properly set up and execute his concepts. I think a lot of the MULTI's used from one were staggered and weren't strategically placed well. Kind of a rough read as I found myself having to go back and re-read a couple of the bars to try and pick the flow back up. A lot of the "Punches" were worded poorly and came off statement'ish. To me, a punch is an insult or some type of belittling using various text tools such as wordplay, creativity, personals, etc... I think one lacked in that area. Another thing that I noticed while reading was a few forced concepts, lol. Anyways, that's enough input considering I can not vote, if either of you would like me to break your verse down bar for bar and elaborate, PM me. Otherwise, not bad of a battle and keep writing fellas. Posted on: 2014-06-13 09:36:38
Wizdumb Basic Member	Concealed votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-06-14 11:36:27