Ups & downs for both, but.. one just embraced the topic more. Vote's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 16:16:41

Claaaaaaaaaaaassick! !! Posted on: 2012-12-04 16:25:08

Topic: "What a live battle would be like if words could materialize themselves into real objects." ....this is going to be a real challenge, goodluck to both! You both made me proud! tear* Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-04 20:24:14

REMEMBER ***VOTERS***** THIS ISNT A BATTLE VERSE TOURNEY*** THIS IS WHO CAN MAKE THE BEST TOPICAL VERSE USING THE TOPIC... VOTE USING THE RUBRIC//Vocab*Flow*M ultis*Poetic tecniques *progression etc..... VOTE ON WHO HAS THE BETTER TOPICAL... NOT WHO HAS THE BETTER BARS!! LEHGOOOOO Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-04 20:46:32

Wooooord???? CLASSICK u BASTIDS!!! Posted on: 2012-12-05 11:52:25

Easy Money, Class. Posted on: 2012-12-06 12:19:20

This will be dope. Posted on: 2012-12-08 13:50:47

yo this was dopppe haha... ima need a few more reads... im shocked at how well you both did... shits close.... be back later tonight to vote Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 14:05:56

topical battle of the year here fellas. ez Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 14:06:39

ait im not gonna be able to vote later so the fair is in fellas... This was a dope battle... I just enjoyed ones more and felt he hit the topic right on the nail. Good shit to both and goodluck! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 14:38:03

Dimed for the finals/// fv Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 14:56:26

lehgoo we need 15 votes on this to close... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 15:22:39

Honestly hated this topic. I didn't really like either drop mostly because of the topic. Didn't feel like a real topical. Voting for the one who's story interested me more. But I hoped for more out of the final of the topical tournament. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 15:52:57

pretty evenly matched, but ones story was a bit more intriguing Posted on: 2012-12-10 18:31:43

Was a very good topical battle, don't know what Black Book talking about lol. But a vote is concealed for the one with the better topic. Regardless there is really know better topic to me on this battle it was real close vote could go either was but, votes in. 10.10 Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 21:08:44

Good shit from both. but i felt one was a bit more creative and pulled the topic off a bit better no hate fair always in good shit bro both!! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-10 23:37:56

Dope finale fellas! Fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-11 04:22:32

flow: revan vocab: dono imagry: revan multis: revan overall: revan good read from both kind of got lost and had to re read revans cause it was hard to keep track of when he his characters were talking and when it switched back to imagry at times had to read it a few times if that made any sense anywayz the fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-11 04:46:44

CONCEALED VOTE.. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-11 08:33:14

The fuck did I just read. Not only was this the best topical battle I've ever read, but it was the best writing I've ever read on LB at all. That being said, I'll try and explain this; Dono - your piece was quite abstract, which deflected from you scoring highly in the imagery category, but definitely got you points in other areas. The amount of vocab you used was amazing, and you managed to deliver it in a way that made it possible for everybody to read and understand, that's a real talent right there. I followed and fully understood your storyline, rhyme schemes were dope and creative. Easy 10. Revan - Your whole intro was dope AF, schemes were cool throughout, I actually read it in the voice it would be announced in real life too lmao. So, your imagery was on point, your story was cool too, at first I though you had just found a way to drop gun bars in a topical battle, and I kept switching back and forth between that opinion, but I landed on your piece being like a pokemon / yu go ho / ultimate fighting champion / harry potter wizard duel type thing, it was mad, a lot going on, come cool ideas and really has the potential to draw in the reader, another easy 10. Both had good endings too. Very difficult vote to drop, but after changing my mind loads of times I've landed on my winner. Well done, great final. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-11 12:37:20

this was good for LB. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-11 13:00:31

This was dope. The idea is awesome the actual topic an since you both approached it different made it a pretty dope read... Dono's vocab an scheme shined throughout... fucker a walkin thesaurus... my knock though the story was hard to connect with a lack of imagery hurt some Rev's shit was the story so this ended up bein story vs topical my personal pref is always with the Story... cant help that... will say Rev's scheme was not nearly as precise as Dono's... an that did hurt the verse but his imagery was on point an the story flowed well...progressed well i liked it. an the story was pretty badass dope one here fellas worthy of a champ match think one had the science of the topical down more... but in the end that only goes so far it all comes down to content to me.... got my winner Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-11 13:30:10

One was clearer with the imagery and his story had me wanting more nohomo, good either way for me not liking the topic at all Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-12-11 14:48:06

that was an amazing read... wish i could have voted Posted on: 2012-12-17 21:35:20