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Topical Tournament #5
Length: 40 Lines

Dono (88%) Won

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Reppin: Salt Lake City, Utah, United States

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                                              Title: Truth Is Only What You Believe 
The Myth: Dancing upon the precipice of a long troubled fortress/Two twitterpated teens sit in a place once called couple's forest/Passion erupts, their hands in a rush, heavy breathing/They clamor to touch, pants as they brush, very pleasing/Then a loud crash, probably a tree falling to earth/The girl jumped and took a pause, afraid, stalling their mirth/ She's not ready for more, plus the sun was stealing the light/And to be here at dark was not quite feeling alright/ Fear pulsed through her, she begged the boy they had to leave/"Because of a stupid story? Come on you can't believe...."/A rustle in the distance, he stopped, puzzled him in instants/Struggled with admittance but his zeal buckled like his mistress/He recalled the folk tale - A black beast of gargantuan size/And within its empty eyes are where our path to sin lies/Those that dance with it die, it consumes from within/  It abuses the skin for amusement and grins/And finally devours every ounce of a man/Get your wits together before it pounces and scram - /Crudely constructed mental images buried any doubt/The boy was worried now, took his girlfriend and scurried out/
The History: Three missing, parents asking with impossible pleas/ Police can't do much without any plausible leads/The rumor had increased like a tumor that's unleashed/ Since authorities already knew they were deceased/Three bodies found, two separate witness accounts/ Of a dark creature in the woods where mischief abounds/These incidents were a first in their recorded history/ Uncertain causes of death added to assorted misery/ Their small town wasn't too religious, but superstitious/people had the sole explanation as to who had did this/ A demon, a devil, so tainted even evil would tremble/ Screaming and dreadful until people were seen in a temple/  Over time, memories of those long lost slowly faded/ While the banshee's renown grew in bounds to be wholly hated/ Solely fated to only make a mockery of truth/ But it's hard to procure answers with a poverty of proof
The Truth: The first one was a girl, Annabelle, in a manic spell/  Hid alone in the forest without any plan to tell/Fourteen, she was sick of school and all the tricks of fools/  Bullies exposed weak spots with a constant pick and pull/That day was overboard, she was so pissed and harnessed it/  Found a branch, sharpened it, then her own wrists were targeted/  Blood slid down her hands, too late to decide different/She lay down, the last phase of suicide, deliberate/  Scavenging animals ruin the corpse, bugs and maggots/Nature shrugs at malice, no oddities, just a balance/
The second was a boy, David out with his girlfriend/Unbeknownst to them, the prelude to how his world ends/Out chatting, having some late night summer seasonal fun/He went off to pee, then suddenly yelled she should run/She looked but only saw a black mass staring back/Thought it was a wraith but it was really a bear attack/A search party was sent to the same place in the wilderness/  But the boy was long gone with no trace of deliverance/ 
The third was a girl, Lisa, out with her current lover/A heartless guy who could pass as the serpent's brother/He brought this dame out there to get laid, plain and simple/So he could back up what he said and claim her dimples/She was stunning, gorgeous, but defined as a prude/  Practically impossible anyone was finding her nude/He kept trying his moves, denial at each attempt/Until his frustrations became vile and reached contempt/Deep in the trees, he told her to steep to her knees/To which she replied he wasn't even intriguing her, geeze/An insane mighty blackout rage enveloped his psyche/ Plus his persona made deadly developments likely/Scary, then madder, her body apparently shattered/  Pure wrong and before long bones were buried and scattered/ He took advantage of the stories of other missing people/Fabricating a fable about barely missing evil/
Reality is a fickle thing too delicate to mention/ The legend was a lie since the second of inception

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AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Claaaaaaaaaaassick! Posted on: 2012-11-26 13:47:38
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	Topic: Inception Goodluck to both you niggs! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-26 14:29:46
Revan <iRULE> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Topical Champion	CLASSICK u BASTIDS!!! Posted on: 2012-11-26 15:26:34
Black Book <GSchemeSho>	This was close. Both had good flow and story lines. One had better vocabulary. One wasn't as drawn out and flowed a little better. However, one's ending was predictable from the beginning while the other's ending wasn't expected. I personally love the story line the most so the surprise ending is what got my vote. Great battle though. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-02 17:05:37
Letum <AC's>	I found one more enjoyable to read through. fairs in and good luck guy. Both did well. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 02:55:57
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	thought one displayed a better overall understanding of the poetic techniques here, both did good, best battle of the round, still there is somthing missing here aswell.... Both storylines seemed rushed, not going to sway but Ive seen better from both. Def a good read tho, winner should pick it up, after the round closes , whoever wins, hit me with a PM. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 11:23:55
Phoenix	I haven't been following this topical tourney battles. But this was dope, both had a nice flow and dope lines. I voted for the one I enjoyed his verse more. Mad props for both for this. Goodluck to both. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 11:37:05
NOBLE <FITTEST> Premium Member	Pretty interesting verses. I felt one took it a bit further though. Fairs. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 12:09:55
Student Staff Hall of Famer LB Historian LetsBeef Patriarch Creative Genius	I Felt One's Imagery Was On Another Level Compared To The Other One. Both Were Good Reads Though, I Just Felt One Verse Was More Consistent Throughtout The Piece And The End Was Impressively Unexpected. Nice Drops To Both, Fair's In. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 14:01:26
Dirty Work <AC's>	fuuuuuck this is so tough! one's story idea was better to me, pretty philosohical and well thought out, but a bit predictable, and was written more smoothly with better schemes, and a nice vocab. the other was a good story too, and i think i'm agreeing with ppl here though their votes are concealed when i say the ending was unexpected, also a couple of the lines really hit me like "damn, now THAT'S imagery, but it also had some lines that felt very awkward to me, and it didnt flow quite as well so thats why it doesnt get my vote FV all day fellas P.S. to the one who didnt get my vote, there's one line in there that i won't ever forget, it wasnt enough to get you my vote, but that line was top notch poetic imagery Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 21:31:42
Phe <AC's>	CONCEALED VOTE... Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-04 00:38:04

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