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Topical Tournament #5
Length: 40 Lines

AfterThought (20%) Lost

Ranked #-- This Month (#64 All Time)

Crew: Murda Muzik

Reppin: New York, United States

Revan (80%) Won

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Ranked #-- This Month (#585 All Time)

Crew: The Regulators

Reppin: A Galaxy Far Far Away

AfterThought

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                                                              The Family Crash Landin
     Meet Ron, ex-criminal, spent his youth side by side with crips, stayed thuggin for five or six 
       but then came along Keyana, who he married, then stopped ridin', knew it was time to quit
                      Started mapping out their future to dedicate his life to his wife & kids 
October 13th was the travel day, Ron's on the doorstep of his mother's house with Keyana inside screamin "You have to stay" He didn't know she was pregnant, and needed him to grasp the pain, hold her hands through the process till the struggle lashed away, he was gone & she was alone, sacrifice for their children's cash, they want em living stacked, tears fall down Ron's face on the way to his plane to the Emirates
 He starts thinkin, it's amazing how he'd forfeit his clique, change his lifestye all for his kids, he hears voices sayin "Shoot that nigga, that phony a snitch & wipe them tears off ya face Ron, don't be a bitch"
   He closes his eyes during the take off, like someone who's sentenced to death, catchin his breath,                 
  thinkin bout his wife's smile that's heavenly sent, tellin him "Next time you're back, it'll be better again" 
 He got off the plane after a few hours, for him it took alot longer than it's supposed to, his plan was to look for a marketing sponsor that he could go to, but that didn't work, he thought he was gonna make              
               easy cheese but ended up meetin some smugglers going door-to-door sellin DVDs 
  He grabs his bag & starts knockin on a few doors, and before he knocks each time, he's thinkin about his     
 new born, he's gone across seas & is willing to do more, just to see his family living with some food stored
         First day of work's done, he's passin in the test, most DVDs sold & the manager's impressed
A year later, he's comin back from work, gazing at the ocean, bumps into the boss, who greeted him with a hug as he told him: "I'm getting too old for this, so I'm leaving somewhere far, and judging on your                  
                              performance, it's time for a promotion, I'm leaving you in charge"
                                   Ron borrows a colleague's phone thrilled to call home
                       the phone rings, but nobody answers, all he hears is the call tone
He gives back the cell, the feeling is worrying & stressin, picks up his own phone & quickly sends her a message that said: "Baby we need to talk, I got some great news, includes me coming back home for a couple days too! In a few months we'll be able to afford our own house, just picture your own backyard, and us living alone now! I gotta go now, but call me as soon as you can, until then, I'll have my cell phone glued to my hand!" Ron gets an idea, he's makin it a surprise, he going to buy a ticket & take the first plane up to where she lies, packs his bag, and speeds to the airport, he forgot the ticket, but it's computerized & they gracious to let it ride! His spirit's high & that brung laughter, this was not like the last time, this was much faster! Close to landing, the plane starts to wiggle & bounce, it was all good till fire started gettin around! The engines down! Everybody's hearts feeling the pound! Boom! Crash! Body & engine parts split on the ground. Inside the plane there was no motion inside, but Ron's last breath sayin "Keyana" before he closes his eyes. Meanwhile, Keyana's with another dude, and they gettin near, he asks about her husband she says "Fuck em, he was never here."

Revan

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                     MI5 Dossier: The Disappearance Of Agent C.R.A.S.H. (Compiled 15/4/2002)
Well where to begin. Agent C.R.A.S.H. was on the path from Qatar to Beijing, on the trail of Kay Lim. But when C.R.A.S.H. landed, C.R.A.S.H. vanished. No hailing the team or communicating it seems. Agent C.R.A.S.H, well i'll call him Agent C for short, was supposed to track Lim from the supreme key court where he seeked divorce. Kay Lim was an important member of the Chinese goverment, with who we'd signed a covenant for supplies and other things. But we suspected Lim of leaking state secrets for profit, and we had to stop it. Thats the short version anyway, but never under-estimate the delicate nature of present days political tensions in nearly every way. Back to Agent C who (last we knew) had landed in Beijing just before six. Agent D.E.M.O. saw him, boarding the plane in Qatar, so we know he was on-board, but as to why he didnt make contact at the Beijing Airport, we remain unsure. After 72 hours Agent G.O.L.D.E.N. was dispatched to begin investigation. He went to the Hotel where Agent C had made a reservation, he spoke to the receptionist and the chambermaid, who confirmed he hadnt arrived and they hadnt seen his face. He asked about Kay Lim, and to his surprise, the man had arrived three days ago and checked in room fifty-five. Agent G relayed this information, and intended to proceed, but that was the last time that ever he would speak. Agent G was found dead, in the hotels parking-lot. There was no visable signs of violence but it seemed his heart had stopped. The coroner declared a week later that the ruling was: Death by natural causes. But at the time and even afterward we decided that was nonsense. The irony that this disaster happened after C.R.A.S.H. landed i cant fathom. So ive decided to take up the case, i'll report back with my findings - Agent F.A.I.T.H. 

                     Phone Call Log: Agent F.A.I.T.H To Command Six (Transcripted 21/4/2002)
[Agent F:] Command Six, this is Agent F. Verbal confirmation - Patience death. [Command Six:] Confirmation accepted. Proceed Agent F. [Agent F:] Ive spoken to Beijing airport, the manager of transport to be precise, who confirmed to me that Agent C never boarded on his flight. But Agent D had stated otherwise, so im truly at a loss. [Command Six:] Faith i must explain, contact with Demo has been lost. [Agent F:] What do you mean? Is he K.I.A? M.I.A? Im really amazed. Agent D has always been so reliable. [Command Six:] Thats undeniable. And yes we believe he's M.I.A. He was to go from Qatar to Kuwait. but missed his rendezvousing date. [Agent F:] Command Six i have to go, i see Lim, i have to race! I'll report back ASAP, Out. Agent F.A.I.T.H.

                  Recording From Agent F.A.I.T.H's On-Person Wire (Transcripted 22/4/2002)
[Agent F:] *sounding out of breathe* "Lim FREEZE! Keep your hands up, palms towards me. now slowly 
turn aroun... *Two gun shots, Agent F exhales audibly. Most likely struck by at least one bullet.* [Agent F:] Demo!?! what?... why? *another gunshot, impacting Agent D.E.M.O* what??? who is out there? C.R.A.S.H??? Thank god! Quick ive been shot! Im bleeding and stemming the flow! I think Demos gone rogue! [Agent C:] "You always were fool! my god, what were you believing faith? that demo was rogue alone? I just used him as hidden bait so i could make a quick escape. You wouldnt believe what Lim has paid, now i can afford that real estate by a fishing lake and *another gun shot, impacting Agent C.R.A.S.H* [Agent F:] "Lim??" [Kay Lim:] How poetic is this feature? your little agency will lose faith, when they see where crash has landed & i escape with the black box full of all your secrets. That gun wound is terminal, like where you board to explore the skies, while i plotted the whole course, as the captain in disguise."                                       [End Of Transmission].

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AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Claaaaaaaaaaaassick! Posted on: 2012-11-12 02:32:51
Revan <iRULE> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Topical Champion	oppa classick style! Posted on: 2012-11-12 04:33:16
GRizzEAT <CHALKLINED> Scheme Champion	yall niggas kno. Posted on: 2012-11-12 12:49:32
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Topic: Crash Landing. Goodluck fam! Posted on: 2012-11-12 15:58:11
NOBLE <FITTEST> Premium Member	Good luck fellas! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-12 16:47:21
The Kid Eddie T	Gonna be dope. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-12 19:20:42
Aggo <AC's> One Bar Champion Tag Team Champion	Ha! Lookin forward to this. Posted on: 2012-11-14 16:10:08
Aggo <AC's> One Bar Champion Tag Team Champion	dope Posted on: 2012-11-17 08:59:49
Black Book <GSchemeSho>	Both were sick. While I give one the edge in flow & complexity of the rhymes, the other had the better storyline & more depth to their story. And with that being said, the other had a great storyline too but the other just went so much deeper with literal & metaphorical meaning. If you get what I'm saying? Lol. So fair is in & the deeper storyline wins it for me cuz I'm a sucker for a good story lol. Both did their thing though for sure! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-17 10:12:06
The Kid Eddie T	Those were dope reads. Props to the winner, after alls said n done Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-17 13:06:38
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	Close as fuck Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-18 12:05:39
Racs Basic Member	Nice one to the winner fv for sure! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-18 13:26:24
NOBLE <FITTEST> Premium Member	Wow! This battle was very interesting! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-18 21:18:33
Dono <CHALKLINED> 2x ATT Champion 2x One Bar Champion Topical Champion	Full breakdown coming soon. Hit me in the chat box and remind me. Posted on: 2012-11-19 03:25:07

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