2013 GC: RD1 - WHITZ Vs LadyV - (LadyV Wins 6-2)

[Babylon]

Honestly I wasn't overtly impressed with either, Whitz had some rhyming issues and the story wasn't very interesting. Usually the end packs a punch or a surprising twist but this one was just bland. LadyV's rhyming was better, but it still lacked in some places. The flow was choppy at some points but in others it was fluent... wait I'm basically saying everything eth did. All in all I just enjoyed LadyV's verse more, it didn't seem as rushed to me.

Vote - LadyV

[Babylon]

Honestly I wasn't overtly impressed with either, Whitz had some rhyming issues and the story wasn't very interesting. Usually the end packs a punch or a surprising twist but this one was just bland. LadyV's rhyming was better, but it still lacked in some places. The flow was choppy at some points but in others it was fluent... wait I'm basically saying everything eth did. All in all I just enjoyed LadyV's verse more, it didn't seem as rushed to me.

Vote - LadyV

[RULE]

Ok, i thought Whitz verse was very track-esque. There wasnt much in the way of poetic substance or creativity. I thought the rhyming structure was fairly basic also, which made the overall piece feel kind of simplistic. I think you created a story that had the potential, but in the end you jut didnt delve deep enough. LadyV the feed for you is somewhat similar to that of Whitz, i think your flow was strong although inconsistant, but like your opponent i think you only scratched the surface of what you could of delivered.

Overall i think both verses seemed a bit rushed and not as fleshed out as they should/could of been. But still solid enough, the winner gets my vote due to a better performance in the flow catagory, as otherwise the pieces were somewhat neck and neck.

MVGT: LadyV.

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[RULE]

Ok, i thought Whitz verse was very track-esque. There wasnt much in the way of poetic substance or creativity. I thought the rhyming structure was fairly basic also, which made the overall piece feel kind of simplistic. I think you created a story that had the potential, but in the end you jut didnt delve deep enough. LadyV the feed for you is somewhat similar to that of Whitz, i think your flow was strong although inconsistant, but like your opponent i think you only scratched the surface of what you could of delivered.

Overall i think both verses seemed a bit rushed and not as fleshed out as they should/could of been. But still solid enough, the winner gets my vote due to a better performance in the flow catagory, as otherwise the pieces were somewhat neck and neck.

MVGT: LadyV.

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I enjoyed both reads and stories. I just felt there was something more that can be added to both. You both rhymed decently and the flow of both pieces were here and there. I feel like both could of done more in terms of story content and story progression, like some of the ideas you had could of been brought to fruition better. Overall, one has to walk away with this win and my winner took it with just a small margin in a few categories.

MVGT - Lady V

I enjoyed both reads and stories. I just felt there was something more that can be added to both. You both rhymed decently and the flow of both pieces were here and there. I feel like both could of done more in terms of story content and story progression, like some of the ideas you had could of been brought to fruition better. Overall, one has to walk away with this win and my winner took it with just a small margin in a few categories.

MVGT - Lady V

[UhMAZING]

Honestly, when I first read Whitz verse I was confused...Was the characters from the Movie going to the movie they was starring in? and who are the people watching the movie and who are the people racing at the end? it seemed simplistic, but got the job done. Maybe just needed a bit more clarity.

Lady V's verse wasn't structured very well..but in a way I felt it was lyrical as shit. A notch above in complexity than Whitz verse, and I could visually picture the story she was telling which helps. I couldn't really visualize what was happening in the other verse because I was confused and thrown off tracc a couple times.

With that being said, My Honest and Fair vote goes to: Lady V

[UhMAZING]

Honestly, when I first read Whitz verse I was confused...Was the characters from the Movie going to the movie they was starring in? and who are the people watching the movie and who are the people racing at the end? it seemed simplistic, but got the job done. Maybe just needed a bit more clarity.

Lady V's verse wasn't structured very well..but in a way I felt it was lyrical as shit. A notch above in complexity than Whitz verse, and I could visually picture the story she was telling which helps. I couldn't really visualize what was happening in the other verse because I was confused and thrown off tracc a couple times.

With that being said, My Honest and Fair vote goes to: Lady V

LadyV Wins 6 (2 votes removed)-2.

LadyV Wins 6 (2 votes removed)-2.

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