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Unread 02-11-2012, 12:33 AM
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 stars
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10 Won / 11 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
68 Won / 58 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 1 Lost
Exclamation Remade the Track

Took all the advice into consideration, and made some changes, better quality, lyrics + new heartbreaking melody in the last verse matching up and added a bridge. Thank you for your advice it was really helpful now I need ya to give your honest feedback on this one cuz its the final version.



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Unread 02-11-2012, 12:33 AM   #1
 
DooX
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
10 Won / 11 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
68 Won / 58 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 1 Lost
 
Join Date: Nov 2010
Voted: 47 audio / 457 text
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Exclamation Remade the Track

Took all the advice into consideration, and made some changes, better quality, lyrics + new heartbreaking melody in the last verse matching up and added a bridge. Thank you for your advice it was really helpful now I need ya to give your honest feedback on this one cuz its the final version.



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Unread 02-12-2012, 01:11 PM
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
10 Won / 11 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
68 Won / 58 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 1 Lost
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bumping appreciate some good constructive criticism
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Unread 02-12-2012, 01:11 PM   #2
 
DooX
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.6/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
10 Won / 11 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.87/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
68 Won / 58 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 1 Lost
 
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