POST YOUR BEST VERSE, ANDD......

[Erupt da Monsta]

I will rate you, and put you in weight classes. Light, Middle, Heavy.

I Feel like there are texters, audio heads, etc not getting noticed for the talent, and being one of the last active HOF'rs i feel obligated to give recognition, and let some of y'all know where you stand imo.


Post ya best verse, Ill rate it, and also tell you your class, and what you do best/can improve on.

Others feel free to give your opinion as well

Ive seen some dope verses lately..... LB lives yo..

[Erupt da Monsta]

I will rate you, and put you in weight classes. Light, Middle, Heavy.

I Feel like there are texters, audio heads, etc not getting noticed for the talent, and being one of the last active HOF'rs i feel obligated to give recognition, and let some of y'all know where you stand imo.


Post ya best verse, Ill rate it, and also tell you your class, and what you do best/can improve on.

Others feel free to give your opinion as well

Ive seen some dope verses lately..... LB lives yo..

Pretty difficult to say what my best verse is. I don't remember 90% of them.

Pretty difficult to say what my best verse is. I don't remember 90% of them.

[OSKAR]

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

[OSKAR]

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

[KG The Prince]

this is one of em ...

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500568

---------- Post added at 12:54 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:53 PM ----------

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

that shit was fiyyah!!!!

---------- Post added at 12:54 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:54 PM ----------

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

that shit was fiyyah!!!!

[KG The Prince]

this is one of em ...

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500568

---------- Post added at 12:54 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:53 PM ----------

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

that shit was fiyyah!!!!

---------- Post added at 12:54 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:54 PM ----------

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

that shit was fiyyah!!!!

[Bape]

Gotta say my one against Cel was prolly my best

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500191

[Bape]

Gotta say my one against Cel was prolly my best

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500191

[exwhyzee]

can't remember

[exwhyzee]

can't remember

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

Oskar. you've come a long way audio wise, tracks as well, this was a very solid verse. I thought the punches came back to back, one or two quotables.

The delivery was cool, but thats where it lacked, you seemed to rush the bars and didn't sound as natural as you should, but that just comes with doing more battles. Punch power was good, but could be better. I fuck with the accent, you do a good job at making it understandable.

I'd say overall slow it down a lil, lil more aggression maybe simply turn up the volume. You have the structure down, just need to smooth it out with the transition from bar to bar. maybe add another rhyming multi set from the last multi set/punch before going into the next bar/multi set.

OVERALL I'D SAY YOU ARE A VERY STRONG MIDDLEWEIGHT. AND WITH A COUPLE ADJUSTMENTS COULD BE A HEAVYWEIGHT IN TIME.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

Oskar. you've come a long way audio wise, tracks as well, this was a very solid verse. I thought the punches came back to back, one or two quotables.

The delivery was cool, but thats where it lacked, you seemed to rush the bars and didn't sound as natural as you should, but that just comes with doing more battles. Punch power was good, but could be better. I fuck with the accent, you do a good job at making it understandable.

I'd say overall slow it down a lil, lil more aggression maybe simply turn up the volume. You have the structure down, just need to smooth it out with the transition from bar to bar. maybe add another rhyming multi set from the last multi set/punch before going into the next bar/multi set.

OVERALL I'D SAY YOU ARE A VERY STRONG MIDDLEWEIGHT. AND WITH A COUPLE ADJUSTMENTS COULD BE A HEAVYWEIGHT IN TIME.

[Shodan]

"I've been hearing voices" who SAY YOU'RE BITING HELLA SCRIPTS, you MAY DENY THE EVIDENCE but we see “ya strait jack-it, under wraps" like inSANE ASYLUM RESIDENTS who STAY CONFINED reSTRAINED INSIDE PROTECTIVE RIGS / Peeps who "Couldn't figure out the proof?" Should "PRACTICE DOING ADVANCED MATH," cause if "The Evidence Shows Row-Di'nt Bite", THAT’S A CLUE FROM SOME PACK RATS "Shape Up or Ship Out", "You couldn't move into my weight class" as a "TRANSFER STUDENT IN FAT CAMP!!!!” / You'll send me forced concepts then get de-PRESSED WHEN YOU’RE DEFEATED, N’ "Know light setups reflect on your failures" like "SELF CRITICAL PEOPLE WHEN they CHECK MIRRORS TO SEE THEIR SKIN!!!!” So “If he thinks he’s ill? I’ll lay hands on him,” this CLOWN’S NEXT TO CATCH A FIST, "God knows, I’ll handle this snake" like “deVOUT PRESBYTERIANS” / I'm an LBT card-topper, several-stints-in-the-finals while this NERD STAYED BASIC, we won't "Mention-him-with-a-title" you aren’t on a "FIRST NAME BASIS!” / Imitating the best is what this WORTHLESS FAGGOT TRIES TO DO, but as for heavyweights, Voters know their VERSES SMASH YOUR LINES IN TWO, Name your favorites & I'll humiliate them online...if we see "This herb'll tea-bag on the men-u list" someone “ORDERED CHAMOMILE BREWS!!”

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500338

[Shodan]

"I've been hearing voices" who SAY YOU'RE BITING HELLA SCRIPTS, you MAY DENY THE EVIDENCE but we see “ya strait jack-it, under wraps" like inSANE ASYLUM RESIDENTS who STAY CONFINED reSTRAINED INSIDE PROTECTIVE RIGS / Peeps who "Couldn't figure out the proof?" Should "PRACTICE DOING ADVANCED MATH," cause if "The Evidence Shows Row-Di'nt Bite", THAT’S A CLUE FROM SOME PACK RATS "Shape Up or Ship Out", "You couldn't move into my weight class" as a "TRANSFER STUDENT IN FAT CAMP!!!!” / You'll send me forced concepts then get de-PRESSED WHEN YOU’RE DEFEATED, N’ "Know light setups reflect on your failures" like "SELF CRITICAL PEOPLE WHEN they CHECK MIRRORS TO SEE THEIR SKIN!!!!” So “If he thinks he’s ill? I’ll lay hands on him,” this CLOWN’S NEXT TO CATCH A FIST, "God knows, I’ll handle this snake" like “deVOUT PRESBYTERIANS” / I'm an LBT card-topper, several-stints-in-the-finals while this NERD STAYED BASIC, we won't "Mention-him-with-a-title" you aren’t on a "FIRST NAME BASIS!” / Imitating the best is what this WORTHLESS FAGGOT TRIES TO DO, but as for heavyweights, Voters know their VERSES SMASH YOUR LINES IN TWO, Name your favorites & I'll humiliate them online...if we see "This herb'll tea-bag on the men-u list" someone “ORDERED CHAMOMILE BREWS!!”

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500338

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by Bape

Gotta say my one against Cel was prolly my best

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500191

Bape. Good shit in that battle man. Had some highlight points in the verse. You also had some mediocre setups multi wise where the multis seemed forced which makes the impact of the punch not as hard. Then you would shock the fuck outta me, and come out with personal yet crafty shit like this that reminds me of daddio ......

Look at both our crews, everyone KNOW'S WHO'S BETTER you had some of them boys for months and just like your maggot cock there's no GROWTH IN MEMBERS looks like Cel's tryna blow up bigger softies than putting FLOATS TOGETHER and trying to push more "lightweight through the door" than "POSTMAN LETTERS!" ...


Now, that wasn't what you would call crazy in the concept department, but very fucking solid, slightly stretched between multi sets of knows who's better.......... and growth in members...... but what makes this a heavyweight bar(s) is that its personal , the wording was very good not using like or as which makes for a smoother read, and the timing of the punches was on point for the most part on some live battling say it out loud shit.

I think if you focus more on that style, and not force as many multis which sound awkward, then you'd be a Heavyweight, I honestly feel you are right on the cusp, could be your next battle you turn up on us.

Overall i'd also say you're a strong MIDDLEWEIGHT, that is working to gain weight to transition to HEAVYWEIGHT. You're mad close. Just gotta fix those minor issues, and add consistency and slightly harder more creative concepts.

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Also on a side note, if i've given anyone here a 9 on a text verse, you're a heavyweight imo

1-6 Lightweight
7-8 -Middleweight (could be considered a heavyweight with a high 8 ranking as well)
9-10 -Heavyweight

how i rank shit not gonna get into light heavy etc etc

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by Bape

Gotta say my one against Cel was prolly my best

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500191

Bape. Good shit in that battle man. Had some highlight points in the verse. You also had some mediocre setups multi wise where the multis seemed forced which makes the impact of the punch not as hard. Then you would shock the fuck outta me, and come out with personal yet crafty shit like this that reminds me of daddio ......

Look at both our crews, everyone KNOW'S WHO'S BETTER you had some of them boys for months and just like your maggot cock there's no GROWTH IN MEMBERS looks like Cel's tryna blow up bigger softies than putting FLOATS TOGETHER and trying to push more "lightweight through the door" than "POSTMAN LETTERS!" ...


Now, that wasn't what you would call crazy in the concept department, but very fucking solid, slightly stretched between multi sets of knows who's better.......... and growth in members...... but what makes this a heavyweight bar(s) is that its personal , the wording was very good not using like or as which makes for a smoother read, and the timing of the punches was on point for the most part on some live battling say it out loud shit.

I think if you focus more on that style, and not force as many multis which sound awkward, then you'd be a Heavyweight, I honestly feel you are right on the cusp, could be your next battle you turn up on us.

Overall i'd also say you're a strong MIDDLEWEIGHT, that is working to gain weight to transition to HEAVYWEIGHT. You're mad close. Just gotta fix those minor issues, and add consistency and slightly harder more creative concepts.

---------- Post added at 04:17 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:10 PM ----------

Also on a side note, if i've given anyone here a 9 on a text verse, you're a heavyweight imo

1-6 Lightweight
7-8 -Middleweight (could be considered a heavyweight with a high 8 ranking as well)
9-10 -Heavyweight

how i rank shit not gonna get into light heavy etc etc

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500781

Here you go @Erupt

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=500781

Here you go @Erupt