Sig Critique

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[Student]

Legit dope just fix the text (too small, doesn't stand out enough, maybe a drop shadow)

[Student]

Legit dope just fix the text (too small, doesn't stand out enough, maybe a drop shadow)

[NOBLE]

Not bad. I think the figure should blend in more with the background. Perhaps use some PSD coloring layers. Right now, it just looks like a render on top of a background. The lighting is noticeably different. The smoke effect looks dope. The fire on the right side seems like it needed better inter-play with the rest of the sig as well. I would perhaps duplicate and transform it on the other side as well but place it in front (lower left corner) of the figure...then slightly blur the one on the back to give it some perspective while sharpening the one in the front. This will give the piece more depth...which the sparks kind of do, but I believe fire in then front as well would have done to a greater degree. It would also help the fact that there's red lighting under the forearms and reflected off the face mask make more sense.

EDIT: And I agree with Student about the text...looks obscure and misplaced, especially since its by the shoulder which is reflecting more lighting.

[NOBLE]

Not bad. I think the figure should blend in more with the background. Perhaps use some PSD coloring layers. Right now, it just looks like a render on top of a background. The lighting is noticeably different. The smoke effect looks dope. The fire on the right side seems like it needed better inter-play with the rest of the sig as well. I would perhaps duplicate and transform it on the other side as well but place it in front (lower left corner) of the figure...then slightly blur the one on the back to give it some perspective while sharpening the one in the front. This will give the piece more depth...which the sparks kind of do, but I believe fire in then front as well would have done to a greater degree. It would also help the fact that there's red lighting under the forearms and reflected off the face mask make more sense.

EDIT: And I agree with Student about the text...looks obscure and misplaced, especially since its by the shoulder which is reflecting more lighting.

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@Student I seriously thought about that part for like 2 hours lol I just gave up and threw it somewhere, so your assessment is duly noted sir. Props

@NOBLE I didn't even think about all of that :/ I'll definitely keep the PSD layers in mind the next time I draw something up.

Thanks guys!

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@Student I seriously thought about that part for like 2 hours lol I just gave up and threw it somewhere, so your assessment is duly noted sir. Props

@NOBLE I didn't even think about all of that :/ I'll definitely keep the PSD layers in mind the next time I draw something up.

Thanks guys!