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Normally I'm pretty level headed and actually quite silent in the forums when it comes to critiquing other people, I ain't got no problems with no one so I don't see the need to shit on people. But...
What the FUCK is going on in this thread? there might be 1 or 2 half decent lines in here. People have no idea what a good line is, Jesus christ. No wonder the site is struggling. Row's opening post had some good lines and the BJ penn is pretty slick. But, Den ima / Denim a? doesn't make any sense at all. Ditto for BERRY YOUR PEOPLE (LOL). Pig/Hog her? Are you fucking kidding me? that wouldn't impress a 4th grader. That "head covered" line is so generic and it could be flipped a buncha different ways (umbrellas, masks, hats, burqas, a face on the front of a magazine, whatever other reachy shit). It's like saying something is red like a fire truck. You could say it's red like any of the other million things that are red, it's not creative whatsoever.
If this is the shit that passes for good bars around here, you're going to scare off all the real talent.
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Haha! I love this guy
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Normally I'm pretty level headed and actually quite silent in the forums when it comes to critiquing other people, I ain't got no problems with no one so I don't see the need to shit on people. But...
What the FUCK is going on in this thread? there might be 1 or 2 half decent lines in here. People have no idea what a good line is, Jesus christ. No wonder the site is struggling. Row's opening post had some good lines and the BJ penn is pretty slick. But, Den ima / Denim a? doesn't make any sense at all. Ditto for BERRY YOUR PEOPLE (LOL). Pig/Hog her? Are you fucking kidding me? that wouldn't impress a 4th grader. That "head covered" line is so generic and it could be flipped a buncha different ways (umbrellas, masks, hats, burqas, a face on the front of a magazine, whatever other reachy shit). It's like saying something is red like a fire truck. You could say it's red like any of the other million things that are red, it's not creative whatsoever.
If this is the shit that passes for good bars around here, you're going to scare off all the real talent.
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Haha! I love this guy
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01-09-2019, 06:29 PM
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I mean dope is subjective right to a certain extent?
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...but there's a point where we gotta be objective about it.
Pig / Hog lines ain't really gonna cut it, maybe back then? The lines look filler-ish, with weak flips at the end of them. The rhyming / flow of the bars are good though... so I can see why someone would appreciate the lines.
Just to clarify, this wasn't a shot at your taste in bars. It's more so a shot at Jason, cause he's considered a GOAT and those lines aren't good.
It could of just been that he was against a weak opponent, & went light... I don't know.
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I mean dope is subjective right to a certain extent?
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...but there's a point where we gotta be objective about it.
Pig / Hog lines ain't really gonna cut it, maybe back then? The lines look filler-ish, with weak flips at the end of them. The rhyming / flow of the bars are good though... so I can see why someone would appreciate the lines.
Just to clarify, this wasn't a shot at your taste in bars. It's more so a shot at Jason, cause he's considered a GOAT and those lines aren't good.
It could of just been that he was against a weak opponent, & went light... I don't know.
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01-09-2019, 06:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Seul
...but there's a point where we gotta be objective about it.
Pig / Hog lines ain't really gonna cut it, maybe back then? The lines look filler-ish, with weak flips at the end of them. The rhyming / flow of the bars are good though... so I can see why someone would appreciate the lines.
Just to clarify, this wasn't a shot at your taste in bars. It's more so a shot at Jason, cause he's considered a GOAT and those lines aren't good.
It could of just been that he was against a weak opponent, & went light... I don't know.
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Jason's lines prior to this when he tried harder were probably better.
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Originally Posted by Seul
...but there's a point where we gotta be objective about it.
Pig / Hog lines ain't really gonna cut it, maybe back then? The lines look filler-ish, with weak flips at the end of them. The rhyming / flow of the bars are good though... so I can see why someone would appreciate the lines.
Just to clarify, this wasn't a shot at your taste in bars. It's more so a shot at Jason, cause he's considered a GOAT and those lines aren't good.
It could of just been that he was against a weak opponent, & went light... I don't know.
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Jason's lines prior to this when he tried harder were probably better.
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01-09-2019, 06:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Seul
...but there's a point where we gotta be objective about it.
Pig / Hog lines ain't really gonna cut it, maybe back then? The lines look filler-ish, with weak flips at the end of them. The rhyming / flow of the bars are good though... so I can see why someone would appreciate the lines.
Just to clarify, this wasn't a shot at your taste in bars. It's more so a shot at Jason, cause he's considered a GOAT and those lines aren't good.
It could of just been that he was against a weak opponent, & went light... I don't know.
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And that's fair, that line is what..7-8 years old. I understand that naturally people got better at this shit and the bar is set much higher.
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01-09-2019, 06:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Seul
...but there's a point where we gotta be objective about it.
Pig / Hog lines ain't really gonna cut it, maybe back then? The lines look filler-ish, with weak flips at the end of them. The rhyming / flow of the bars are good though... so I can see why someone would appreciate the lines.
Just to clarify, this wasn't a shot at your taste in bars. It's more so a shot at Jason, cause he's considered a GOAT and those lines aren't good.
It could of just been that he was against a weak opponent, & went light... I don't know.
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And that's fair, that line is what..7-8 years old. I understand that naturally people got better at this shit and the bar is set much higher.
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That BJ Penn bar was dope.
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That BJ Penn bar was dope.
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Just gonna point out that in like 3 years, if LB is still up, dude's are gonna be posting Seul lines like "THIS is what you guys considered dope?".
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Just gonna point out that in like 3 years, if LB is still up, dude's are gonna be posting Seul lines like "THIS is what you guys considered dope?".
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Just gonna point out that in like 3 years, if LB is still up, dude's are gonna be posting Seul lines like "THIS is what you guys considered dope?".
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This too
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Just gonna point out that in like 3 years, if LB is still up, dude's are gonna be posting Seul lines like "THIS is what you guys considered dope?".
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This too
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Just gonna point out that in like 3 years, if LB is still up, dude's are gonna be posting Seul lines like "THIS is what you guys considered dope?".
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This too
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Hmmm... doubt it, maybe by the people that think Jason and Daddio are Ledge Ends. (Legends).
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Just gonna point out that in like 3 years, if LB is still up, dude's are gonna be posting Seul lines like "THIS is what you guys considered dope?".
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This too
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Hmmm... doubt it, maybe by the people that think Jason and Daddio are Ledge Ends. (Legends).
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haven't seen what you consider as good js
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Honestly? Practically anything I said in the Rookie tournament is infinitely better than the bars I picked on. Sure, I may have had a line of filler here or there in the Ginge battle. So nearly all - but probably just all - of my punches in that tournament were way better than the stuff I picked out.
Here's some stuff some other people have said that I liked, just what I could recall off the top of my head. I've liked quite a few lines on here recently but just can't even remember what battle they were from to pull them up. I vote on too much shit to really keep a clean memory of that in my head, and I don't need to spend the time digging. These aren't my 4 favourite punches or anything, just examples of stuff I was able to quickly remember off top.
I'll have ya relatives scared when I “Centre-Da-Squares” an Blast-glocks w/ a “Snap-Shot”. That'll BULLDOZE & SLAM YA RIBS then I'll get ya “Whole Fam Hung Up” like “PHOTOS AT GRANDMA'S CRIB!”
this tourney they saw their CHANCE SMOKED LIKE A DAMN CIG they “Reached A Brick Wall n Cant Bring The House Down” like the BAD WOLF WITH THE LAST PIG!
Sho, we see your “Style Is Worn Out...” which got you doin' COKE 'N METH WITH SOME FIENDS that “Needle Has You Repeating Yourself” like a BROKEN RECORD'S ROUTINE! (Stylus)
it wouldn't surprise me if we saw that SHO'S A RACIST GOOF that stands CLOSE WITH DAVID DUKE! He'll rhyme shit, saying he'll “ROLL WITH K'S AND GOONS” but if I see “The Fire Cross In My Neighborhood?” Its after his speeches to MOTIVATE THE KU to CULTIVATE A COUP!! --- Fire as in Fire Nation.
If someone can't see that this stuff is way better than any of that other garbage I mentioned in my first post, then I don't know what to say to that person and honestly have no interest in talking with them about battle rap.
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haven't seen what you consider as good js
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Honestly? Practically anything I said in the Rookie tournament is infinitely better than the bars I picked on. Sure, I may have had a line of filler here or there in the Ginge battle. So nearly all - but probably just all - of my punches in that tournament were way better than the stuff I picked out.
Here's some stuff some other people have said that I liked, just what I could recall off the top of my head. I've liked quite a few lines on here recently but just can't even remember what battle they were from to pull them up. I vote on too much shit to really keep a clean memory of that in my head, and I don't need to spend the time digging. These aren't my 4 favourite punches or anything, just examples of stuff I was able to quickly remember off top.
I'll have ya relatives scared when I “Centre-Da-Squares” an Blast-glocks w/ a “Snap-Shot”. That'll BULLDOZE & SLAM YA RIBS then I'll get ya “Whole Fam Hung Up” like “PHOTOS AT GRANDMA'S CRIB!”
this tourney they saw their CHANCE SMOKED LIKE A DAMN CIG they “Reached A Brick Wall n Cant Bring The House Down” like the BAD WOLF WITH THE LAST PIG!
Sho, we see your “Style Is Worn Out...” which got you doin' COKE 'N METH WITH SOME FIENDS that “Needle Has You Repeating Yourself” like a BROKEN RECORD'S ROUTINE! (Stylus)
it wouldn't surprise me if we saw that SHO'S A RACIST GOOF that stands CLOSE WITH DAVID DUKE! He'll rhyme shit, saying he'll “ROLL WITH K'S AND GOONS” but if I see “The Fire Cross In My Neighborhood?” Its after his speeches to MOTIVATE THE KU to CULTIVATE A COUP!! --- Fire as in Fire Nation.
If someone can't see that this stuff is way better than any of that other garbage I mentioned in my first post, then I don't know what to say to that person and honestly have no interest in talking with them about battle rap.
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Hmmm... doubt it, maybe by the people that think Jason and Daddio are Ledge Ends. (Legends).
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The whole idea of his comment wasn’t saying that you’re garbage. It’s just saying that what people look for in battles might change/improve a lot as time goes.
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Hmmm... doubt it, maybe by the people that think Jason and Daddio are Ledge Ends. (Legends).
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The whole idea of his comment wasn’t saying that you’re garbage. It’s just saying that what people look for in battles might change/improve a lot as time goes.
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