things ive noticed..

[mckiller187]

peeped a couple battles. and ive noticed, alot of dudes with runon lines... heres an example;
cause I'm bound to DEFORM-YOU, this REFORMED-FOOL/
couldn't see what was coming if he was outside a haunted house that had a sign reading 'WE WARNED YOU!!' //

^^^^^^^ is this now acceptable,, ? the first line of the bar was decent it had 11 syllables., couldve been a few syllables longer.. since the basis for a verse to have anytype of cadence or flow, is around 12-14 syllables per line. now we look at the 2nd line... 25 syllables... this is hella runoon.. i dont even consider as an actual verse already.. just long sentences put together with and end multi attached to it... is this whats passable now? has the standards of a battle verse been reduced to lazy writing, when someone cant get their same point across using less words.. just curious on everyones thoughts on this.. because even live battles, although written , the battlers all still have a nice flow and cadence to their accapella battles... meaning their multis are spaced alot closer together = less words between multis..than what ive been seeing here.... theres ways to manipulate it but the tried and true formula for a bar is about 24 to 28 syllables total.. so you can have less syllables in the first line, and draw it out in the second, as long as the bar comes close to the total line count... of 24 to 28..j

just wanted everyones opinion on this

[mckiller187]

peeped a couple battles. and ive noticed, alot of dudes with runon lines... heres an example;
cause I'm bound to DEFORM-YOU, this REFORMED-FOOL/
couldn't see what was coming if he was outside a haunted house that had a sign reading 'WE WARNED YOU!!' //

^^^^^^^ is this now acceptable,, ? the first line of the bar was decent it had 11 syllables., couldve been a few syllables longer.. since the basis for a verse to have anytype of cadence or flow, is around 12-14 syllables per line. now we look at the 2nd line... 25 syllables... this is hella runoon.. i dont even consider as an actual verse already.. just long sentences put together with and end multi attached to it... is this whats passable now? has the standards of a battle verse been reduced to lazy writing, when someone cant get their same point across using less words.. just curious on everyones thoughts on this.. because even live battles, although written , the battlers all still have a nice flow and cadence to their accapella battles... meaning their multis are spaced alot closer together = less words between multis..than what ive been seeing here.... theres ways to manipulate it but the tried and true formula for a bar is about 24 to 28 syllables total.. so you can have less syllables in the first line, and draw it out in the second, as long as the bar comes close to the total line count... of 24 to 28..j

just wanted everyones opinion on this