Madness: BLNK's Memorial. - Lets Beef

#1 10-15-2013, 11:52 AM

This is a story about right and wrong... And one man caught in the middle of the two.

"Let me in...
I need control, or you're finished. You couldn't be here if your soul wasn't twisted
..
Sorry folks, but the goal is the business. Just sign here, on this notice of kinship."
Swing along... When the needle's on? A beast is spawned.
"A demon's thought,"
And for a price, you could keep it, dawg.
"Deter off, just stop coping with obsession."
You see the block, and know you're floating towards a dead end.
Distortion of perception, playing chess with unholy swords with red tips.
"Check list: It's a proposition offered with a doctorate in quantum physics, but... Only if you lost all logic in the thought you lived with...
I'll take you over, you'll beholden to a somber vision.
I'll unlock your vengeance so you'll focus on your competition..."

It's comprehension without rational thought.
The monster in him started scratching the walls.
An evil smile cracked his ravenous jaws,
And all that he could think of was the passion involved...

"Wait... That's a travesty, frankly. It saddens me greatly to inform you that I would be living in apathy, hazy, gasping and waving with happiness fading."
You see, he's a great stoic philosopher.
Not Caring, was his hideous name.
Shackled by his obsessive nature, he lived in a cage... His limited days: Dwindling, gray.
"Idiots? Prey. I simply scribble the phrase: 'Is Morality Immoral?' "
From an ethical stand point? Eh, it's a bland coy.
There's no right, or wrong etched into man's joints.
"To be, or not to be?" It was said in a damp voice... The root of all evil. Embedded? A damned choice.
Because either way? Well, read the play.
"See the stage greed has paved on the road to redemption.
The seasons change, it's colder in winter."

It's comprehension without rational thought.
The monster in him started scratching the walls.
An evil smile cracked his ravenous jaws,
And all that he could think of was the passion involved.

"Do the right thing." He flew a kite string..
Beautifully time framed. "Smile through this fluid tune that you and I sing."
But would it really be just as sweet, if you remove the icing?(Justice, sweet?)
"You knew it'd be enticing... But stead fast to your firmest beliefs.
The courage to lead, is learned in your sleep... Hurried elite scurry to meet the birds in the street with fervent disease burned in their wings.
Do the right thing..."

Inspired by SoulEater.

10-15-2013, 11:52 AM

This is a story about right and wrong... And one man caught in the middle of the two.

"Let me in...
I need control, or you're finished. You couldn't be here if your soul wasn't twisted
..
Sorry folks, but the goal is the business. Just sign here, on this notice of kinship."
Swing along... When the needle's on? A beast is spawned.
"A demon's thought,"
And for a price, you could keep it, dawg.
"Deter off, just stop coping with obsession."
You see the block, and know you're floating towards a dead end.
Distortion of perception, playing chess with unholy swords with red tips.
"Check list: It's a proposition offered with a doctorate in quantum physics, but... Only if you lost all logic in the thought you lived with...
I'll take you over, you'll beholden to a somber vision.
I'll unlock your vengeance so you'll focus on your competition..."

It's comprehension without rational thought.
The monster in him started scratching the walls.
An evil smile cracked his ravenous jaws,
And all that he could think of was the passion involved...

"Wait... That's a travesty, frankly. It saddens me greatly to inform you that I would be living in apathy, hazy, gasping and waving with happiness fading."
You see, he's a great stoic philosopher.
Not Caring, was his hideous name.
Shackled by his obsessive nature, he lived in a cage... His limited days: Dwindling, gray.
"Idiots? Prey. I simply scribble the phrase: 'Is Morality Immoral?' "
From an ethical stand point? Eh, it's a bland coy.
There's no right, or wrong etched into man's joints.
"To be, or not to be?" It was said in a damp voice... The root of all evil. Embedded? A damned choice.
Because either way? Well, read the play.
"See the stage greed has paved on the road to redemption.
The seasons change, it's colder in winter."

It's comprehension without rational thought.
The monster in him started scratching the walls.
An evil smile cracked his ravenous jaws,
And all that he could think of was the passion involved.

"Do the right thing." He flew a kite string..
Beautifully time framed. "Smile through this fluid tune that you and I sing."
But would it really be just as sweet, if you remove the icing?(Justice, sweet?)
"You knew it'd be enticing... But stead fast to your firmest beliefs.
The courage to lead, is learned in your sleep... Hurried elite scurry to meet the birds in the street with fervent disease burned in their wings.
Do the right thing..."

Inspired by SoulEater.

**Lizman** · #2 11-11-2013, 01:13 PM

Dunno Who You Are But This Is Really Good.
If This Is Your First Topical You Are A Genius.
If Not; Still Good. Dunno Know What To Give It Tbph.
Did You Use The Burger Scheme Strategy Unintentionally?

**Lizman** · 11-11-2013, 01:13 PM

Dunno Who You Are But This Is Really Good.
If This Is Your First Topical You Are A Genius.
If Not; Still Good. Dunno Know What To Give It Tbph.
Did You Use The Burger Scheme Strategy Unintentionally?