Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Erupt
Vocabulary - Im going to say Erupt got this
Topic/Meaning - Erupt
Storytelling/Progression - Erupt
Emotion - IMO Fiji
Imagery - Both did their thing here ..real talk so im going with a TIE
Poetic Techniques - Erupt
Ending - Erupt
Both were good and worth reading i just think that Erupt was better here.. respect to both dudes though. On another day ..this could of went to Fiji nah mean but off of this right here Erupt gets my vote. Peace!
Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Erupt
Vocabulary - Im going to say Erupt got this
Topic/Meaning - Erupt
Storytelling/Progression - Erupt
Emotion - IMO Fiji
Imagery - Both did their thing here ..real talk so im going with a TIE
Poetic Techniques - Erupt
Ending - Erupt
Both were good and worth reading i just think that Erupt was better here.. respect to both dudes though. On another day ..this could of went to Fiji nah mean but off of this right here Erupt gets my vote. Peace!