MadVerbs vs Phroxen (Round 1) Phroxen wins!

[IV]

MadVerbs vs Phroxen

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Monday (March 5th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Friday (March 9th) at 11.59PM EST

Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Your picture is from Drag Me To Hell. Interpret your topic in any way you see fit!

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

[IV]

MadVerbs vs Phroxen

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Monday (March 5th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Friday (March 9th) at 11.59PM EST

Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Your picture is from Drag Me To Hell. Interpret your topic in any way you see fit!

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

[B U R D E N]

Checkin In.. good luck Phro, should be hella dope!

[B U R D E N]

Checkin In.. good luck Phro, should be hella dope!

[Phroxen]

Check... this is gonna be fun.

[Phroxen]

Check... this is gonna be fun.

[IV]

@MadVerbs @Phroxen there will be an extension til 11.59PM on Sunday, please drop your verses by then.

[IV]

@MadVerbs @Phroxen there will be an extension til 11.59PM on Sunday, please drop your verses by then.

[IV]

@MadVerbs the extension across the board was for you, will you be posting?
@Phroxen same question haha

[IV]

@MadVerbs the extension across the board was for you, will you be posting?
@Phroxen same question haha

[Phroxen]

Yup. I'll write something today.

[Phroxen]

Yup. I'll write something today.

[IV]

In the event of a double no-show the person who checked in first will go through to the next round. Unless the participants decide otherwise.

Hopefully this won't happen though!! Get it in guys!!

[IV]

In the event of a double no-show the person who checked in first will go through to the next round. Unless the participants decide otherwise.

Hopefully this won't happen though!! Get it in guys!!

[B U R D E N]

-Brook's Brother-''..She hasn't been sleeping, eating and some of the shit she has been saying.. is strange''

-Brook's Husband-''..I know what you mean, if n when she does sleep though it looks like shes having one hell of a dream''

-Brother-'' Well when we were kids our mother told us a story.. about when she was little. The story was weird, nothing i ever understand but Brook seemed to understand exactly what was being said.''

-Husband-'' You know ..she never really speaks of your mother, the one time she spoke about her she said the words ..i remember my mother, we weren't friends, we never really saw eye to eye but we did have the same dreams when we were little kids. I never thought anything of it but do you think its possible that 'story' was more then just a bedtime story? .......*later that night*

*There's One Month Every Year..*
Ever since i was a kid i would have thoughts that kept me up at night
On some Feddy shit.. couldn't sleep and if i did i was risking my life

I'd stay up.. nights at a time, so awake or asleep it was killing me but why
Then one day i gave up, my life was on the line but at that time i was willing to die

I remember as i looked to my side she was hideous and very much alive
i remember my mother saying she'd by getting rid of us or at least she'll try

she got up real slow n said ''I've been waiting for you to sleep, don't you see.. you're the last one left''
then her eyes started to glow red, but suddenly i feel as if I'm fading out of my sleep.. i can breathe! but no she screams ''you cant out last death!''

*A Bright Light Then Nothing.....*
What happened? Am i dreaming.. where is ..that ..that beast? Where am I?
Suddenly i heard a loud cracking, things started steaming and i knew i was about to die

Then a loud laugh out of nowhere.. she was defiantly still with me
or i was with her.. in her trap but i just need to start thinking, i need to awake from this nap!!

-The Beast- ''I cant let you survive!! NO! Tonight is my last chance n i WILL NOT wait another year, you can say goodbye!''

-Brook- ''I can bet you tonight you'll die! Not me, NO! Tonight is my chance n i will not fear, you cant save ya life!''

As she yells i cant be killed ..she rushes me and with the words playing back in my mind...
i can tell she can be killed.. my mother didn't lie to me, with the words she was saying she was saving me!

I quickly said the words the way my mother had taught me then the beast screams as she rots
then just as fast as i fell asleep i found myself rocking in the arms of family on my way to my pops.

Everyone was frightened and had no clue.. i was still fighting and trying to pull through
The dream was over, so was she.. my mother told me how to defeat that beast and now just like my mom shes gone too.

''Will she be back? Why was she trying to kill me? Those are only two of many questions i don't have answers to. Like why now? She waited so many years.. i mean IT waited so many years, it doesn't matter because shes gone for now and if she wants to return i'll be ready.''


............Aiight this isn't as good as i was hoping, i thought i'd have more free time to type for this but i was wrong. @Verity thank you for giving me the extra two days though. its better then a no show even though i know it could have been better etc etc so just don't hate nah mean. good luck Phro. oh and if you're wondering this is 53 lines and i just went with The Beast, Brook, Brook's Brother and Brook's Husband for the names nah mean.

[B U R D E N]

-Brook's Brother-''..She hasn't been sleeping, eating and some of the shit she has been saying.. is strange''

-Brook's Husband-''..I know what you mean, if n when she does sleep though it looks like shes having one hell of a dream''

-Brother-'' Well when we were kids our mother told us a story.. about when she was little. The story was weird, nothing i ever understand but Brook seemed to understand exactly what was being said.''

-Husband-'' You know ..she never really speaks of your mother, the one time she spoke about her she said the words ..i remember my mother, we weren't friends, we never really saw eye to eye but we did have the same dreams when we were little kids. I never thought anything of it but do you think its possible that 'story' was more then just a bedtime story? .......*later that night*

*There's One Month Every Year..*
Ever since i was a kid i would have thoughts that kept me up at night
On some Feddy shit.. couldn't sleep and if i did i was risking my life

I'd stay up.. nights at a time, so awake or asleep it was killing me but why
Then one day i gave up, my life was on the line but at that time i was willing to die

I remember as i looked to my side she was hideous and very much alive
i remember my mother saying she'd by getting rid of us or at least she'll try

she got up real slow n said ''I've been waiting for you to sleep, don't you see.. you're the last one left''
then her eyes started to glow red, but suddenly i feel as if I'm fading out of my sleep.. i can breathe! but no she screams ''you cant out last death!''

*A Bright Light Then Nothing.....*
What happened? Am i dreaming.. where is ..that ..that beast? Where am I?
Suddenly i heard a loud cracking, things started steaming and i knew i was about to die

Then a loud laugh out of nowhere.. she was defiantly still with me
or i was with her.. in her trap but i just need to start thinking, i need to awake from this nap!!

-The Beast- ''I cant let you survive!! NO! Tonight is my last chance n i WILL NOT wait another year, you can say goodbye!''

-Brook- ''I can bet you tonight you'll die! Not me, NO! Tonight is my chance n i will not fear, you cant save ya life!''

As she yells i cant be killed ..she rushes me and with the words playing back in my mind...
i can tell she can be killed.. my mother didn't lie to me, with the words she was saying she was saving me!

I quickly said the words the way my mother had taught me then the beast screams as she rots
then just as fast as i fell asleep i found myself rocking in the arms of family on my way to my pops.

Everyone was frightened and had no clue.. i was still fighting and trying to pull through
The dream was over, so was she.. my mother told me how to defeat that beast and now just like my mom shes gone too.

''Will she be back? Why was she trying to kill me? Those are only two of many questions i don't have answers to. Like why now? She waited so many years.. i mean IT waited so many years, it doesn't matter because shes gone for now and if she wants to return i'll be ready.''


............Aiight this isn't as good as i was hoping, i thought i'd have more free time to type for this but i was wrong. @Verity thank you for giving me the extra two days though. its better then a no show even though i know it could have been better etc etc so just don't hate nah mean. good luck Phro. oh and if you're wondering this is 53 lines and i just went with The Beast, Brook, Brook's Brother and Brook's Husband for the names nah mean.

[Phroxen]

This is a dream sequence.. a reprieve of unleashed demons
that cease breathin from everything the heathens can sink teeth in.
They pry at my mind.. rabid animals with rather intangible acts of malice trapped in a shrapnel mandible.
With a heave of rage, one breaks from the cerebral cage..
my face twitches slightly.. as the inner beast engages an evil plague.
My world changes. Tree limbs made of broken femurs, acid for sap & sprouts are corroded fingers.
The sky is a bloodbath raining pure hell.. bile and ligaments.. a steady reminder of every life's worth from guile decisions spent.
The lawn's infested with small intestine segments.. garnished with sawed arms for hedges with a side of rotten head bits.
And it's all infected.. even a slight graze on the smallest section would cause infection. Skin gone in seconds.
Dripping off like warm gelatin, exposing sections with a deformed skeleton.. side effects when the swarm settles in.
Slowly your lungs fill with hyperactive pus.. until it's lined with scabs so it's likely that you'd suffocate.
Coughing up skin chunks from the flesh eating disease.. and your face drips.. looking like your neck's eating your teeth.
But the nightmare slowly fades as I regain consciousness.. awake.. releasing my mind and the monster locked in it.

My eyes are locked on it.

[Phroxen]

This is a dream sequence.. a reprieve of unleashed demons
that cease breathin from everything the heathens can sink teeth in.
They pry at my mind.. rabid animals with rather intangible acts of malice trapped in a shrapnel mandible.
With a heave of rage, one breaks from the cerebral cage..
my face twitches slightly.. as the inner beast engages an evil plague.
My world changes. Tree limbs made of broken femurs, acid for sap & sprouts are corroded fingers.
The sky is a bloodbath raining pure hell.. bile and ligaments.. a steady reminder of every life's worth from guile decisions spent.
The lawn's infested with small intestine segments.. garnished with sawed arms for hedges with a side of rotten head bits.
And it's all infected.. even a slight graze on the smallest section would cause infection. Skin gone in seconds.
Dripping off like warm gelatin, exposing sections with a deformed skeleton.. side effects when the swarm settles in.
Slowly your lungs fill with hyperactive pus.. until it's lined with scabs so it's likely that you'd suffocate.
Coughing up skin chunks from the flesh eating disease.. and your face drips.. looking like your neck's eating your teeth.
But the nightmare slowly fades as I regain consciousness.. awake.. releasing my mind and the monster locked in it.

My eyes are locked on it.

[TalkSick]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Phroxen
Vocabulary- Phroxen
Topic/Meaning- MadVerbs
Storytelling/Progression- MadVerbs
Emotion- Phroxen
Imagery- Phroxen
Poetic Techniques- Phroxen
Ending-Phroxen

Winner: Phroxen

[TalkSick]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Phroxen
Vocabulary- Phroxen
Topic/Meaning- MadVerbs
Storytelling/Progression- MadVerbs
Emotion- Phroxen
Imagery- Phroxen
Poetic Techniques- Phroxen
Ending-Phroxen

Winner: Phroxen