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[TrillyTREAL]

i ain't go lie man, my first battl was trash... i ain't really been writing shit... i had just found this site and threw some random shit out there... cuddy challenged me doe on some other shit, checc out this new battle. http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=465202

[TrillyTREAL]

i ain't go lie man, my first battl was trash... i ain't really been writing shit... i had just found this site and threw some random shit out there... cuddy challenged me doe on some other shit, checc out this new battle. http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=465202

[Obey]

I'm going to be brutally honest for your own benefit. Read other battles, check these peoples battles out for how it SHOULD be done. @Manhattan @GRizzEAT @RULE @Dissizit @Black Book @Godbody .. cus the shit you working w/ not ain't gonna get you anywhere. And sugar coating definitely wont work. Take my advice, click them links.. Study youngin. You'll get there.

[Obey]

I'm going to be brutally honest for your own benefit. Read other battles, check these peoples battles out for how it SHOULD be done. @Manhattan @GRizzEAT @RULE @Dissizit @Black Book @Godbody .. cus the shit you working w/ not ain't gonna get you anywhere. And sugar coating definitely wont work. Take my advice, click them links.. Study youngin. You'll get there.

[V3numb]

@Obey is correct.. sugarcoating gets people nowhere.. and most deff recommend what he suggested.. CnC (comment and Critique) is the best way of elevation in anything one does

[V3numb]

@Obey is correct.. sugarcoating gets people nowhere.. and most deff recommend what he suggested.. CnC (comment and Critique) is the best way of elevation in anything one does

[TrillyTREAL]

preciate the honesty kinfolk. i'll look into that.

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yea, i don't take criticism offensively. I'm always looking for new ways to better my craft, and if somebody keeping it 100 with me, I always take heed to it.

[TrillyTREAL]

preciate the honesty kinfolk. i'll look into that.

---------- Post added at 12:45 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:44 AM ----------

yea, i don't take criticism offensively. I'm always looking for new ways to better my craft, and if somebody keeping it 100 with me, I always take heed to it.