Hard - Another Song

[OSKAR]

tell me what ya think

[OSKAR]

tell me what ya think

[SoupErb]

Ayo real talk fam, stop rushing ya shit; I only listened to the first few bars coz I'm in work, but you need to take abit more time to perfect your flow, shit is mad choppy.. I'm guilty of that ish at times too, but you have the potential to be nice as hell but the flow lets you down.. Chill man - Sounds like you either tryna spit your shit too fast, or you just need to restructure your bars a little.

Im'a listen fully when I get home.. Good to see the track section poppin though.

[SoupErb]

Ayo real talk fam, stop rushing ya shit; I only listened to the first few bars coz I'm in work, but you need to take abit more time to perfect your flow, shit is mad choppy.. I'm guilty of that ish at times too, but you have the potential to be nice as hell but the flow lets you down.. Chill man - Sounds like you either tryna spit your shit too fast, or you just need to restructure your bars a little.

Im'a listen fully when I get home.. Good to see the track section poppin though.

[OSKAR]

good shit soup. I'll work on tht

[OSKAR]

good shit soup. I'll work on tht

[Erupt da Monsta]

Soup summed it up but this ones a little better than the other my g. I could hear you better... One tip I think would help would be to memorize the bars before you record that might make the flow come across smoother... Also try writing the bars differently , maybe after each rhyming end line start a new line on the page...

[Erupt da Monsta]

Soup summed it up but this ones a little better than the other my g. I could hear you better... One tip I think would help would be to memorize the bars before you record that might make the flow come across smoother... Also try writing the bars differently , maybe after each rhyming end line start a new line on the page...

[OSKAR]

Thanks for the tips guys. I'll try everything u said on my next track

[OSKAR]

Thanks for the tips guys. I'll try everything u said on my next track