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^Lmao.
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^Lmao.
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All I know is that the wording on this site is fucking horrific.
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Yes Yes Ya'll, an it don't stop....
Seems like me an' you bout had enough,
Cause man, it's tough to keep the fam in touch,
And to add it up, this rappin stuff got me flippin out like a blackjack bust
Don't give a fuck if you sound like Master P, Mobb Deep or Remy Martin,
Cuz even if the next to try us is the best of rhymers?
Still get bodied on plates like Jeffery Dahmer
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All I know is that the wording on this site is fucking horrific.
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Yes Yes Ya'll, an it don't stop....
Seems like me an' you bout had enough,
Cause man, it's tough to keep the fam in touch,
And to add it up, this rappin stuff got me flippin out like a blackjack bust
Don't give a fuck if you sound like Master P, Mobb Deep or Remy Martin,
Cuz even if the next to try us is the best of rhymers?
Still get bodied on plates like Jeffery Dahmer
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I'm mainly simple, straightforward punchlines with the occasional long setup/haymaker. I try to incorporate concept builds but, a lot of times, wording issues arise because of it.
Here's my style to a tee:
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=477684
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I'm mainly simple, straightforward punchlines with the occasional long setup/haymaker. I try to incorporate concept builds but, a lot of times, wording issues arise because of it.
Here's my style to a tee:
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=477684
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I admit... I fathered this style
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Niggas just can't do it .. Because they can't word a punch line to save their life.. Even the best live battlers have dope wording.. And sometimes even doper setups... Ez
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I admit... I fathered this style
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Niggas just can't do it .. Because they can't word a punch line to save their life.. Even the best live battlers have dope wording.. And sometimes even doper setups... Ez
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Niggaz need to go back to the fundamentals... shortbar style... 14 syllable each line.. 1 idea broken down into 2 lines... how fuckin hard is it to maintain a concept thru two non wordy lines...?witout going so complex niggaz be scratchin dey head think wtf did i jus read?
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Niggaz need to go back to the fundamentals... shortbar style... 14 syllable each line.. 1 idea broken down into 2 lines... how fuckin hard is it to maintain a concept thru two non wordy lines...?witout going so complex niggaz be scratchin dey head think wtf did i jus read?
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Example of a relavent bar: .....setup: this geek is peepin pornos, wit both HANDS ON HIS COCK,
Punchline:and just 'imaginin pussy', but aint CALVIN AND HOBBES/14 syllables per line..typical shortbar style
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Example of a relavent bar: .....setup: this geek is peepin pornos, wit both HANDS ON HIS COCK,
Punchline:and just 'imaginin pussy', but aint CALVIN AND HOBBES/14 syllables per line..typical shortbar style
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On one hand I'm feeling Hat but on the other hand I do think if it's possible and flows nice will impact the overall verse well. However I can see where hat is coming from its like Auto tune. When one person started using it successfully (i hate Auto tune but it caught somehow ) but everyone started imitating and couldn't it also. Like i think everyone respects that style done properly but not everyone can do it. But if someone can drop sick ass punches even if not relating to the final concept I may vote up on it. I've seen a few use this style. Lockhart is good at that.
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Niggaz need to go back to the fundamentals... shortbar style... 14 syllable each line.. 1 idea broken down into 2 lines... how fuckin hard is it to maintain a concept thru two non wordy lines...?witout going so complex niggaz be scratchin dey head think wtf did i jus read?
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Exactly Illo. Perfect summation
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On one hand I'm feeling Hat but on the other hand I do think if it's possible and flows nice will impact the overall verse well. However I can see where hat is coming from its like Auto tune. When one person started using it successfully (i hate Auto tune but it caught somehow ) but everyone started imitating and couldn't it also. Like i think everyone respects that style done properly but not everyone can do it. But if someone can drop sick ass punches even if not relating to the final concept I may vote up on it. I've seen a few use this style. Lockhart is good at that.
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Niggaz need to go back to the fundamentals... shortbar style... 14 syllable each line.. 1 idea broken down into 2 lines... how fuckin hard is it to maintain a concept thru two non wordy lines...?witout going so complex niggaz be scratchin dey head think wtf did i jus read?
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Exactly Illo. Perfect summation
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