Dono vs _Lizman_ OPEN FOR VOTES!!!

[IV]

Dono vs _Lizman_

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Saturday (March 24th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Tuesday (March 27th) at 11.59PM EST

A BIRDS PERSPECTIVE

As we're approaching the final stages the topics are getting more challenging. Your task is to write a 20-60 lines verse about anything you like from the perspective of a bird.

Topic chosen by previous Topical Champion Jason!

Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

[IV]

Dono vs _Lizman_

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Saturday (March 24th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Tuesday (March 27th) at 11.59PM EST

A BIRDS PERSPECTIVE

As we're approaching the final stages the topics are getting more challenging. Your task is to write a 20-60 lines verse about anything you like from the perspective of a bird.

Topic chosen by previous Topical Champion Jason!

Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

[Dono]

Checkit....

[Dono]

Checkit....

[IV]

@_Lizman_ check in before midnight or you will be replaced

[IV]

@_Lizman_ check in before midnight or you will be replaced

[Lizman]

Check In

[Lizman]

Check In

[Dono]

A BIRDS PERSPECTIVE

They call me bird but I don't really feel bird like
This place I'm in feels more oppressive than the Third Reich
See they clipped both my wings, now I'm unable to fly
And really at this point it would be fatal to try
Never thought about the details or why I'm alive
I was doing my own thing, I just try to survive
But I guess it was too much, caught the eye of someone
The moment The Man saw me there, I was undone
He caught me, knocked me down, I was placed in captivity
Forced in with others, the place raced with activity
The birds living here were mixed and different colors
There were cool cats, big dogs, and dissonant others
My ignorant brothers attempt violence down the chain
So we're strictly confined and that's how we shall remain
Stuck, immobile, powerless, helpless, trapped, contained
The basic desire for freedom, even that's constrained
The others assimilate, find paths to integrate
I watch the bird group, to live I have to imitate
It's just......sometimes this cage rattles my nerves
See circular bars and wanna battle the curves
Frustrated, feel like exploding from the mental pressure
The ability to speak is my central pleasure
I'm skilled at it, better than most in this lock down
Talk now! The Man tells me when and lets me walk 'round
But I'm getting tired, sick of saying the words I know
They don't listen they just think that this -bird's a show-
The man wants me to work at petty acts, give then give more
My future, empty and bleak, got nothing to live for
So I'm tying a noose, suicide my only elective
I'm sick of lookin at life from a jail bird's perspective

[Dono]

A BIRDS PERSPECTIVE

They call me bird but I don't really feel bird like
This place I'm in feels more oppressive than the Third Reich
See they clipped both my wings, now I'm unable to fly
And really at this point it would be fatal to try
Never thought about the details or why I'm alive
I was doing my own thing, I just try to survive
But I guess it was too much, caught the eye of someone
The moment The Man saw me there, I was undone
He caught me, knocked me down, I was placed in captivity
Forced in with others, the place raced with activity
The birds living here were mixed and different colors
There were cool cats, big dogs, and dissonant others
My ignorant brothers attempt violence down the chain
So we're strictly confined and that's how we shall remain
Stuck, immobile, powerless, helpless, trapped, contained
The basic desire for freedom, even that's constrained
The others assimilate, find paths to integrate
I watch the bird group, to live I have to imitate
It's just......sometimes this cage rattles my nerves
See circular bars and wanna battle the curves
Frustrated, feel like exploding from the mental pressure
The ability to speak is my central pleasure
I'm skilled at it, better than most in this lock down
Talk now! The Man tells me when and lets me walk 'round
But I'm getting tired, sick of saying the words I know
They don't listen they just think that this -bird's a show-
The man wants me to work at petty acts, give then give more
My future, empty and bleak, got nothing to live for
So I'm tying a noose, suicide my only elective
I'm sick of lookin at life from a jail bird's perspective

[TalkSick]

Or DONT PM it to me you wench!!!!!!

[TalkSick]

Or DONT PM it to me you wench!!!!!!

[Lizman]

I Had My Verse In Time But I Forgot To Submit
Ah Well

[Lizman]

I Had My Verse In Time But I Forgot To Submit
Ah Well

[IV]

the round is extended until 11.59pm gmt tonight

[IV]

the round is extended until 11.59pm gmt tonight

[Lizman]

Ah Shit
I Cant Find My Submission
And Its Like 5 Minutes To Go
Fuck It; Ill Drop Smtn Else In A Sec

[Lizman]

Ah Shit
I Cant Find My Submission
And Its Like 5 Minutes To Go
Fuck It; Ill Drop Smtn Else In A Sec

[IV]

This round will open until i'm home from college tomorrow at 7PM my time. Please submit your verse by then.

[IV]

This round will open until i'm home from college tomorrow at 7PM my time. Please submit your verse by then.