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newbie rapper needs help
I'll more than likely get trolled when I post these 4 video links of me, but I want someone to like proof these videos as in tell me what I need to do and work on to be better!! let me know if y'all want me to post the links for the vids
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02-16-2020, 05:24 PM
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newbie rapper needs help
I'll more than likely get trolled when I post these 4 video links of me, but I want someone to like proof these videos as in tell me what I need to do and work on to be better!! let me know if y'all want me to post the links for the vids
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02-16-2020, 05:27 PM
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I’m always down to listen to music. What you got miss?
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02-16-2020, 05:27 PM
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I’m always down to listen to music. What you got miss?
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02-16-2020, 05:36 PM
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I don't trust anyone who uses goo.gl. This screams phishing scam.
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02-16-2020, 05:36 PM
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I don't trust anyone who uses goo.gl. This screams phishing scam.
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02-16-2020, 05:46 PM
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Yeah. this shit doesnt sound right miss renae...... looks fishy....... post soundcloud, youtube or other links
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02-16-2020, 05:46 PM
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Yeah. this shit doesnt sound right miss renae...... looks fishy....... post soundcloud, youtube or other links
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02-16-2020, 06:11 PM
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Somebody click them shits, see if they're safe for the rest of us
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02-16-2020, 06:11 PM
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Somebody click them shits, see if they're safe for the rest of us
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02-16-2020, 06:13 PM
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@ Bnas to take one for the team.....
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02-16-2020, 06:13 PM
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02-16-2020, 06:20 PM
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Slow down a little, you're slurring your words
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02-16-2020, 06:20 PM
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Slow down a little, you're slurring your words
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You know i have to commend you for actually trying to rap.
You sound like one of those country chicks that were raised around guns and hunting and shit and actually might be about that life lol
with that said, do you write while listening to the beat? You should write one line at a time, but your bars actually towards the end were pretty good, just need to work on riding the beat.
I like how you rap about what you know, but you gotta work on staying on beat and slowing down.
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You know i have to commend you for actually trying to rap.
You sound like one of those country chicks that were raised around guns and hunting and shit and actually might be about that life lol
with that said, do you write while listening to the beat? You should write one line at a time, but your bars actually towards the end were pretty good, just need to work on riding the beat.
I like how you rap about what you know, but you gotta work on staying on beat and slowing down.
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02-16-2020, 06:29 PM
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do yall wanna here my 2nd rap im workin on ?
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Go on
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02-16-2020, 06:29 PM
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do yall wanna here my 2nd rap im workin on ?
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02-16-2020, 07:35 PM
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This is cringe
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I got a 1.73¢,made 3$dollars twooday and bought some tobacco smoke with 2$dollars haha my bank account empty no credit cards i m freestyle the money,since young money
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This is cringe
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I got a 1.73¢,made 3$dollars twooday and bought some tobacco smoke with 2$dollars haha my bank account empty no credit cards i m freestyle the money,since young money
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