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Kasper's Revenge fuck you all
if he aint gon tell yall shit i will looool fuck all yall
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02-09-2013, 03:03 PM
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damn dawg that's what up track goes hard as shit.. best on LB hands down
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damn dawg that's what up track goes hard as shit.. best on LB hands down
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02-09-2013, 03:08 PM
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damn that pic is dope as fuck
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damn that pic is dope as fuck
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100 ..theres all kinds of uncomfortable pauses... stretched bars... maybe thats more like it... not so much off beat, but your bars are stretched on multiple occassions , atleast 15 times throughout the track, which messes up your flow which in turn makes it sound off beat... do you write to the beat? please tell me you dont.....
moral of the story... stop stretching your bars... you come across as a textcee bars were good but the flow was choppy in alot of places due to the stretched bars...
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Ive been trying to find a way to explain to you the "off beat" ish ive been saying, but its not really off beat, youre still slick on beat, but the bars are stretched so it throws off the flow ,you gotta cut that out pimp. Still a solid track, some funny bars, i liked the intro, just fix the stretched bars.
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if you want, 2mrw when i get from church, i will go through the track and pick out every stretched bar just so you can see what im saying, you have talent, and mad cadence, but the stretched bars are the only thing hurting you, and the uncomfortable pauses. other than that , you have mad potential.. 100
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100 ..theres all kinds of uncomfortable pauses... stretched bars... maybe thats more like it... not so much off beat, but your bars are stretched on multiple occassions , atleast 15 times throughout the track, which messes up your flow which in turn makes it sound off beat... do you write to the beat? please tell me you dont.....
moral of the story... stop stretching your bars... you come across as a textcee bars were good but the flow was choppy in alot of places due to the stretched bars...
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Ive been trying to find a way to explain to you the "off beat" ish ive been saying, but its not really off beat, youre still slick on beat, but the bars are stretched so it throws off the flow ,you gotta cut that out pimp. Still a solid track, some funny bars, i liked the intro, just fix the stretched bars.
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if you want, 2mrw when i get from church, i will go through the track and pick out every stretched bar just so you can see what im saying, you have talent, and mad cadence, but the stretched bars are the only thing hurting you, and the uncomfortable pauses. other than that , you have mad potential.. 100
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it's on purpose I assume @ Black Moses
unorthodox playing around ont he beat I think it shows off more personality and versatility since it's on beat still he just chilling on the beat made it his not just stuck to one flow but consciously picked the beat apart, I listened to it a few times and I see what you mean but they are like thought spots to show the aggression he's trying to portray
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it's on purpose I assume @ Black Moses
unorthodox playing around ont he beat I think it shows off more personality and versatility since it's on beat still he just chilling on the beat made it his not just stuck to one flow but consciously picked the beat apart, I listened to it a few times and I see what you mean but they are like thought spots to show the aggression he's trying to portray
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flow is dope wasn't feeling the beat at all
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flow is dope wasn't feeling the beat at all
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A whole thing on England, my name fitted your opening scheme, and still not a mention? Wow, I'm quitting rap, I'm actually THAT irrelevant.
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A whole thing on England, my name fitted your opening scheme, and still not a mention? Wow, I'm quitting rap, I'm actually THAT irrelevant.
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no @ Illy Savage your important to this site most are lames here your cool I only come here to fuck with you anyway
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no @ Illy Savage your important to this site most are lames here your cool I only come here to fuck with you anyway
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This just makes it all the more embarrassing.
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This just makes it all the more embarrassing.
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