Topical Championship FINAL! wigsplit Vs Rhetorik - Page 2 - Lets Beef

IV · #11 10-30-2011, 10:50 AM

DOPE final... you both deserved to be in the final and did an amazing job here. I'm staying away from actually voting on this, but just a couple of comments..

Wiggles- loved every verse you've done in the tourny and this was no different, my favourite of yours was the cop piece you did in the semi finals but you didn't disappoint in the final, your abstract shit didn't hide your crazy american psycho side you like to bring to topicals hahaha. Your whole style is distinct, how you manage to bring such meaning and complexity into such short lines is beyond me.

RhetoriKal- i swear that shit could actually be published. Amazing read, so much emotion and meaning to your verse makes it one of the best topicals i've read. The story was so touching and you creating so much feeling in your verse made it possible for the reader to empathise. Each 'floor' had stand out lines that i genuinely.. don't know how the hell you come up with! Pure class.

Overall this final was HOF worthy, you both deserve to be in the finals and i wouldn't like to be a voter right now, because to compare two completely different styles and approaches almost seems.. unfair. But dope battle famly. Peaceeee

IV · 10-30-2011, 10:50 AM

DOPE final... you both deserved to be in the final and did an amazing job here. I'm staying away from actually voting on this, but just a couple of comments..

Wiggles- loved every verse you've done in the tourny and this was no different, my favourite of yours was the cop piece you did in the semi finals but you didn't disappoint in the final, your abstract shit didn't hide your crazy american psycho side you like to bring to topicals hahaha. Your whole style is distinct, how you manage to bring such meaning and complexity into such short lines is beyond me.

RhetoriKal- i swear that shit could actually be published. Amazing read, so much emotion and meaning to your verse makes it one of the best topicals i've read. The story was so touching and you creating so much feeling in your verse made it possible for the reader to empathise. Each 'floor' had stand out lines that i genuinely.. don't know how the hell you come up with! Pure class.

Overall this final was HOF worthy, you both deserve to be in the finals and i wouldn't like to be a voter right now, because to compare two completely different styles and approaches almost seems.. unfair. But dope battle famly. Peaceeee

Anonymous Poet · #12 10-31-2011, 05:05 PM

Both peeps had some nice fucking meaning. I liked Rhetorikal's idea with the different floors. Vocabulary was better from rhet and i think wig's flow was a tad better...

great battle but Rhet for me

Anonymous Poet · 10-31-2011, 05:05 PM

Both peeps had some nice fucking meaning. I liked Rhetorikal's idea with the different floors. Vocabulary was better from rhet and i think wig's flow was a tad better...

great battle but Rhet for me

**Miqueas** · #13 10-31-2011, 05:13 PM

Jesus Christ... going to read both one more time before I drop my vote.

Back with a vote. I've read this battle going on the 4th time. Both had very clear concepts as to what they wanted to perceive, or have us perceive if you think about it. Wig, your entry is song worthy, I'd record it. Rhet, as Verity said, yours is very smooth flowing and more of a literature piece, I'd agree with the publishing suggestion. At the end of the day, although both had rare comparisons and completely different styles, Rhet edged it. Much love to both for a great final.

**Miqueas** · 10-31-2011, 05:13 PM

Jesus Christ... going to read both one more time before I drop my vote.

Back with a vote. I've read this battle going on the 4th time. Both had very clear concepts as to what they wanted to perceive, or have us perceive if you think about it. Wig, your entry is song worthy, I'd record it. Rhet, as Verity said, yours is very smooth flowing and more of a literature piece, I'd agree with the publishing suggestion. At the end of the day, although both had rare comparisons and completely different styles, Rhet edged it. Much love to both for a great final.

**SWAVY** · #14 10-31-2011, 06:01 PM

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: both was exceptional but Rhet took it a step further, with carring the rhyme scheme longer which also complemented the flow. (RHET)

Vocabulary: this category was not as close as the rhyme scheme n flow, Rhet showed much more advanced vocabulary and was able to execute it well in his overall drop.(RHET)

Topic/Meaning: this one was a lil difficult for me cuz i was diggin how Rhet managed to elaborate an particular situation to support his topic sucking you into the topic even more however i was impressed by wig being open minded and creative wit his drop based on the topic leaving you wonder what will come next. (WIG)

Storytelling/Progression: both were clever here, but 1 was more 1 dementional in this area while the other expressed varitiy. (WIG)

Emotion: Well this is pretty clear to me (RHET)

Imagery: i think one took a further approach with makin dis work (RHET)

Poetic Techniques: Couldnt get more poetic than dis (RHET)

Ending: Its actually hard to say who had the better ending, being that both ended great based on their drop, so i cant conclude who took dis category. (TIE)

MVGT: Damn, i havent really paid much attention to topical b4, but u can bet i will now...im very impressed by both very clever concepts with topics but back to bizz...i was feelin both but 1 gotta win so i gotta go with (RHETORIKAL)

**SWAVY** · 10-31-2011, 06:01 PM

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: both was exceptional but Rhet took it a step further, with carring the rhyme scheme longer which also complemented the flow. (RHET)

Vocabulary: this category was not as close as the rhyme scheme n flow, Rhet showed much more advanced vocabulary and was able to execute it well in his overall drop.(RHET)

Topic/Meaning: this one was a lil difficult for me cuz i was diggin how Rhet managed to elaborate an particular situation to support his topic sucking you into the topic even more however i was impressed by wig being open minded and creative wit his drop based on the topic leaving you wonder what will come next. (WIG)

Storytelling/Progression: both were clever here, but 1 was more 1 dementional in this area while the other expressed varitiy. (WIG)

Emotion: Well this is pretty clear to me (RHET)

Imagery: i think one took a further approach with makin dis work (RHET)

Poetic Techniques: Couldnt get more poetic than dis (RHET)

Ending: Its actually hard to say who had the better ending, being that both ended great based on their drop, so i cant conclude who took dis category. (TIE)

MVGT: Damn, i havent really paid much attention to topical b4, but u can bet i will now...im very impressed by both very clever concepts with topics but back to bizz...i was feelin both but 1 gotta win so i gotta go with (RHETORIKAL)

**John Dos** · #15 10-31-2011, 07:33 PM

I think Rhetorikal got this. I think his flow and rhyme schemes were killer. The imagery and emotion was there on both sides but I think Rhet's was more appealing. Both endings were solid. I'd say Rhet took that category too though.

I gotta go with Rhet on this one.

Wig's shit would make a dope ass track though.

**John Dos** · 10-31-2011, 07:33 PM

I think Rhetorikal got this. I think his flow and rhyme schemes were killer. The imagery and emotion was there on both sides but I think Rhet's was more appealing. Both endings were solid. I'd say Rhet took that category too though.

I gotta go with Rhet on this one.

Wig's shit would make a dope ass track though.