Book had a more philosophical approach to the image. Sometimes this can get annoying when people try to say everything in the image is symbolising something different - but you kept it on point without doing that, which I liked. Nothing worse than someone searching too deep to find hidden messages that just aren't there. The seemed to be little story to it though, which I remember seeing more of when I last peeped your ish.
Dave had a more direct approach which can sometimes be seen a lazy but I think worked in this case as it was an unusual image. The story worked well and ending left you with a though. I also thought the vocab was better.
If I'm honest I remember better from both when I was last around but I thought this was a tricky image to use and that both did well in the circumstances
Vote - Dave
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