Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Erupt
Vocabulary - more towards Catharsis
Topic/Meaning -Erupt
Storytelling/Progression -Erupt
Emotion -Erupt
Imagery - Catharsis
Poetic Techniques - Catharsis
Ending -Erupt
both had some close ties.. but had to go either or one way
Overall - Erupt
fair is in guys good read
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