Tickets Official Track Breakdown Thread..

So since I have been too busy for actually doing anything decently productive and have been uninterested in making music myself.. I will provide full breakdowns to tracks with a few stipulations...

Thread Rules...

-Only post one track at a time for feedback... posting more than one will get your post deleted

Please do not argue with my constructive criticism or rating.. this thread is meant to keep it real about track rating...

Be at least decent on your tracks... ( I know this one is A LOT to ask )

So since I have been too busy for actually doing anything decently productive and have been uninterested in making music myself.. I will provide full breakdowns to tracks with a few stipulations...

Thread Rules...

-Only post one track at a time for feedback... posting more than one will get your post deleted

Please do not argue with my constructive criticism or rating.. this thread is meant to keep it real about track rating...

Be at least decent on your tracks... ( I know this one is A LOT to ask )

[Krhyme Killz]

geeezus christ Blank got better!!!!!
flow is much more confident and you have loosened up and shown more of you on the mic

RULE...damn man i was supposed to be the one leading us into audio!!! lol...the verse was amazingly written and the flow change ups and repeating that line was fresh goddam im impressed here

[Krhyme Killz]

geeezus christ Blank got better!!!!!
flow is much more confident and you have loosened up and shown more of you on the mic

RULE...damn man i was supposed to be the one leading us into audio!!! lol...the verse was amazingly written and the flow change ups and repeating that line was fresh goddam im impressed here

@hulKK this was my first track. Lol. It came before the track I did with you.

Also, @Ticket, does one at a time mean seperate posts, or once you've broken down a single post?

@hulKK this was my first track. Lol. It came before the track I did with you.

Also, @Ticket, does one at a time mean seperate posts, or once you've broken down a single post?

[Krhyme Killz]

then dude...you should go back to the drawing board!! lol

[Krhyme Killz]

then dude...you should go back to the drawing board!! lol

http://www.hulkshare.com/9fr7lhcvfsy..._feat_Jack.mp3

^ The track I believe Krhyme is referencing. @hulKK, the difference between the two is this: Track with RULE, I wrote specifically to. That beat. Track I did with you, were bars I had jotted down in my spare time, with no beat.

http://www.hulkshare.com/9fr7lhcvfsy..._feat_Jack.mp3

^ The track I believe Krhyme is referencing. @hulKK, the difference between the two is this: Track with RULE, I wrote specifically to. That beat. Track I did with you, were bars I had jotted down in my spare time, with no beat.

[Dono]

When you get a minute, and could you @ me or drop the feedback in the track page itself?

That way I know when it comes up. Thanks.

[Dono]

When you get a minute, and could you @ me or drop the feedback in the track page itself?

That way I know when it comes up. Thanks.