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Round 1: mczackaryg Vs SwaGGer- (mczackaryg Wins Via 3-0 KO)
mczackaryg Vs SwaGGer-
Letsbeef Topical Tournament 2011 Round 1
House Rules Apply. Any questions, contact me.
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(Note: Deadlines are 1 week due to Sandman's tournament round. Other rounds will be shorter)
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GOOD LUCK
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Round 1: mczackaryg Vs SwaGGer- (mczackaryg Wins Via 3-0 KO)
mczackaryg Vs SwaGGer-
Letsbeef Topical Tournament 2011 Round 1
House Rules Apply. Any questions, contact me.
CHECK INS ARE DUE FRIDAY (09-16-11) AT 11:59PM PST. VERSES ARE DUE WEDNESDAY (09-21-11) AT 11:59PM. NO EXCEPTIONS.
(Note: Deadlines are 1 week due to Sandman's tournament round. Other rounds will be shorter)
Line Length: 20-40 lines.
Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending
GOOD LUCK
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09-16-2011, 10:44 PM
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checkkk! haha, I just got internet back, and I saw this.. 
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09-16-2011, 10:44 PM
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checkkk! haha, I just got internet back, and I saw this..
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09-17-2011, 09:12 AM
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check sorrry net was down
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09-17-2011, 09:12 AM
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check sorrry net was down
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09-17-2011, 06:16 PM
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toooooooooooo laaaaaaaaaaaaaate..deadline was yesterday.
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09-17-2011, 06:16 PM
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toooooooooooo laaaaaaaaaaaaaate..deadline was yesterday.
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^Checks were waved, wasent too late.
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09-18-2011, 12:47 AM
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^Checks were waved, wasent too late.
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09-18-2011, 12:59 AM
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o rly? I gotta get to writting then.
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09-18-2011, 12:59 AM
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o rly? I gotta get to writting then.
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09-21-2011, 01:44 PM
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It started good, good drugs, Great Sex...
but you broke my heart, like being sprayed by Eight Techs...
One day your perfect, no lies, no schemes, but I've been known to
Flow Wise, So clean, but in a Matter Of Seconds, you drained my speechcraft...
like RPGS, an exploded heart, I ain't trynna Preach Rap, your to Far From Me...
After that, I See your Evil, you removed your Two Face Mask..
Do You Hate That? When I Spew, Aim Gats? Sell keys like a BlackSmith...
Kill people when I Pack Clips? At least I'm Honest, Smokin' Chronic..
Fuck women man, they Grow up on us, like Plants or Weed..
But my Plan to See all these Whack Emcees are making them look Stupid...
When I'm Blasting These, to make you get hit more then the drums in
Sample Beats.......
But you? You've always been a con, Admit it or Don't...
Always the type to be Hittin' The Dope, you Witnessed my Gropes..
Sayin' you always loved me? But you were gone, Quicker then Ghosts..
I'm juss a Nigga that Boasts, eatin' Niggas like Toast...
I'm referring back to Square One, before I Tear'd Up the Sheets of Paper..
My Lair's Guns, will put holes in you, so I can get a Piece of Hater..
Lightwork.
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09-21-2011, 01:44 PM
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It started good, good drugs, Great Sex...
but you broke my heart, like being sprayed by Eight Techs...
One day your perfect, no lies, no schemes, but I've been known to
Flow Wise, So clean, but in a Matter Of Seconds, you drained my speechcraft...
like RPGS, an exploded heart, I ain't trynna Preach Rap, your to Far From Me...
After that, I See your Evil, you removed your Two Face Mask..
Do You Hate That? When I Spew, Aim Gats? Sell keys like a BlackSmith...
Kill people when I Pack Clips? At least I'm Honest, Smokin' Chronic..
Fuck women man, they Grow up on us, like Plants or Weed..
But my Plan to See all these Whack Emcees are making them look Stupid...
When I'm Blasting These, to make you get hit more then the drums in
Sample Beats.......
But you? You've always been a con, Admit it or Don't...
Always the type to be Hittin' The Dope, you Witnessed my Gropes..
Sayin' you always loved me? But you were gone, Quicker then Ghosts..
I'm juss a Nigga that Boasts, eatin' Niggas like Toast...
I'm referring back to Square One, before I Tear'd Up the Sheets of Paper..
My Lair's Guns, will put holes in you, so I can get a Piece of Hater..
Lightwork.
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09-22-2011, 01:12 AM
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Good versus evil lookin through ONE EYE
Shot the bird down make that fuckin GUN FLY
Pull the trigger chains holdin it BACK
One side bad other good lookin through the CRACK
Star in the eye GLISTINING as she stares an LISTENS
Looks like shes MISSIN the purpose of her mission
She must like the evil side takin the GOOD OFF
Soft hands keep the good girl she SHOULD OF
Only the naked eye can see the LIGHT
The bright flowers escaping the WHITE
Look at the SIGHT not doin anything RIGHT
Grab a hold of the mask an do deep WITHIN
Causin a SIN not ready for WILL as the crack SPILLS
DRILLS running through her HEAD
Wanted to come out with the good INSTEAD
Red lipstick punctures the LIPS
Lookin like she ready to call it QUITS
As she SITS an stares deep DOWN
Feeling empty all AROUND
Listening to the SOUND of FAITH
Hope she gets it on DAY an feels GAY
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09-22-2011, 01:12 AM
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Good versus evil lookin through ONE EYE
Shot the bird down make that fuckin GUN FLY
Pull the trigger chains holdin it BACK
One side bad other good lookin through the CRACK
Star in the eye GLISTINING as she stares an LISTENS
Looks like shes MISSIN the purpose of her mission
She must like the evil side takin the GOOD OFF
Soft hands keep the good girl she SHOULD OF
Only the naked eye can see the LIGHT
The bright flowers escaping the WHITE
Look at the SIGHT not doin anything RIGHT
Grab a hold of the mask an do deep WITHIN
Causin a SIN not ready for WILL as the crack SPILLS
DRILLS running through her HEAD
Wanted to come out with the good INSTEAD
Red lipstick punctures the LIPS
Lookin like she ready to call it QUITS
As she SITS an stares deep DOWN
Feeling empty all AROUND
Listening to the SOUND of FAITH
Hope she gets it on DAY an feels GAY
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09-23-2011, 01:28 PM
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - mc (one syllable multi scheme helped i guess)
Vocabulary - Xander
Topic/Meaning - Mc (Xander went off topic at the end)
Storytelling/Progression - Mc
Emotion - Mc
Imagery - Mc
Poetic Techniques - Mc
Ending - Mc (Again Xanders ending kinda sounded like a battle)
Mvgt - Mc
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - mc (one syllable multi scheme helped i guess)
Vocabulary - Xander
Topic/Meaning - Mc (Xander went off topic at the end)
Storytelling/Progression - Mc
Emotion - Mc
Imagery - Mc
Poetic Techniques - Mc
Ending - Mc (Again Xanders ending kinda sounded like a battle)
Mvgt - Mc
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09-23-2011, 03:01 PM
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..yeh, been kinda stumped lately. xD
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09-23-2011, 03:01 PM
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..yeh, been kinda stumped lately. xD
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