Change Up - (Punk Track Battle) - Page 6 - Lets Beef

**J u s T C** · #51 12-17-2017, 12:02 PM

Sorry but this track is some irrelevant mixtape shit. No idea why you keep with this low budget Godbody charade when it's blatantly obvious you dropped the ball. Can't help feeling you just wanted to stir some shit but couldn't be assed committing to it. I understand because I've done that myself plenty. But don't act like this was some higher level premeditated chess move and we're all too blind by hate and or are too stupid to get it. Take this L from Punk and live to fight another day.

**J u s T C** · 12-17-2017, 12:02 PM

Sorry but this track is some irrelevant mixtape shit. No idea why you keep with this low budget Godbody charade when it's blatantly obvious you dropped the ball. Can't help feeling you just wanted to stir some shit but couldn't be assed committing to it. I understand because I've done that myself plenty. But don't act like this was some higher level premeditated chess move and we're all too blind by hate and or are too stupid to get it. Take this L from Punk and live to fight another day.

#52 12-17-2017, 05:41 PM

I really, REALLY want to go in on Erupt for this. I mean, even if we disregard that he very clearly just recycled a track he already made....the fact he didn't drop a diss in this, I really do wanna go in.

But the fact that Punk is on the receiving end of this.....too good. @Mani Mula really would get a kick out of this thread haha.

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Listened to the track.

Hate the production. Seems like some of those drum kicks are completely out of rhythm.

The chorus is absolutely abysmal. You can't sign whatsoever. When you you sing "up" it's absolutely brutal.

The rapping was much less annoying than you have been other times, but it's still fairly annoying.

Probably what's most frustrating is that you're basically Iron Man, and don't use your suit. You are a very well trained lyricists, with the ability to rap about anything with solid topics.

But instead of using these assets, you're rapping about money and haters on basic rhyme schemes. It's so annoying. I know, this is probably the way to go if you want to make it, but it's just annoying seeing you give away your only actual talents. It's like watching Jose Aldo refuse to throw a leg kick for like 10 fights in a row. You're a great lyricist and you can write for sure, why are you making popcorn shit for?

Also, your mixtape cover is the worst thing I've ever seen. Seriously, you'd be better not having a cover mate.

12-17-2017, 05:41 PM

I really, REALLY want to go in on Erupt for this. I mean, even if we disregard that he very clearly just recycled a track he already made....the fact he didn't drop a diss in this, I really do wanna go in.

But the fact that Punk is on the receiving end of this.....too good. @Mani Mula really would get a kick out of this thread haha.

---------- Post added at 05:41 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:37 PM ----------

Listened to the track.

Hate the production. Seems like some of those drum kicks are completely out of rhythm.

The chorus is absolutely abysmal. You can't sign whatsoever. When you you sing "up" it's absolutely brutal.

The rapping was much less annoying than you have been other times, but it's still fairly annoying.

Probably what's most frustrating is that you're basically Iron Man, and don't use your suit. You are a very well trained lyricists, with the ability to rap about anything with solid topics.

But instead of using these assets, you're rapping about money and haters on basic rhyme schemes. It's so annoying. I know, this is probably the way to go if you want to make it, but it's just annoying seeing you give away your only actual talents. It's like watching Jose Aldo refuse to throw a leg kick for like 10 fights in a row. You're a great lyricist and you can write for sure, why are you making popcorn shit for?

Also, your mixtape cover is the worst thing I've ever seen. Seriously, you'd be better not having a cover mate.

**Student** · #53 12-18-2017, 06:02 PM

And people say Erupt doesn't know how to troll.

This'll be referred to the time he got 30+ people on LB to listen to a rando track that was CLEARLY not a diss track albiet a metaphorical one with vague undertones.

**Student** · 12-18-2017, 06:02 PM

And people say Erupt doesn't know how to troll.

This'll be referred to the time he got 30+ people on LB to listen to a rando track that was CLEARLY not a diss track albiet a metaphorical one with vague undertones.

#54 12-19-2017, 07:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Student

And people say Erupt doesn't know how to troll.

This'll be referred to the time he got 30+ people on LB to listen to a rando track that was CLEARLY not a diss track albiet a metaphorical one with vague undertones.

You don't get shit for soundclick listens, so who cares?

12-19-2017, 07:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Student

And people say Erupt doesn't know how to troll.

This'll be referred to the time he got 30+ people on LB to listen to a rando track that was CLEARLY not a diss track albiet a metaphorical one with vague undertones.

You don't get shit for soundclick listens, so who cares?

**Erupt da Monsta** · #55 12-19-2017, 11:03 PM

I'm really a playa ass nigga fr. And the bitches have always been my weakness... so my next EP boutta be about the bitches. A nigga's getting singing lessons n shit.

The next one after that im doing with this nigga from France, is gonna be on the conscious lyrical shit that ETH loves..... That one youll love you already know.

**Erupt da Monsta** · 12-19-2017, 11:03 PM

I'm really a playa ass nigga fr. And the bitches have always been my weakness... so my next EP boutta be about the bitches. A nigga's getting singing lessons n shit.

The next one after that im doing with this nigga from France, is gonna be on the conscious lyrical shit that ETH loves..... That one youll love you already know.

#56 12-20-2017, 07:37 AM

I'm not specifically into the conscious shit, it's just that you, I, and most of the people on here are capable of writing songs better than 99.999% of people on the planet. But your track is one in a billion with absolutely nothing defining or different from the other gazillion aspiring rappers with a 2017 sound.

You can combine both. Lil Dicky, while I don't listen to him, does that 2017 shit that I hate but at least keeps it lyrical when he's not rapping about a specific topic.

Guns, money, bitches and haters....leave that type of rapping to the Soulja Boi's of the world who don't have the actual talent to elevate beyond it.

I think I only want to hear that from you cause I'll hate anything you do. Your subgenre of rap annoys the fuck out of me. So if there's lyricism that invests me, I can just listen to that over the actual musical side of it.

12-20-2017, 07:37 AM

I'm not specifically into the conscious shit, it's just that you, I, and most of the people on here are capable of writing songs better than 99.999% of people on the planet. But your track is one in a billion with absolutely nothing defining or different from the other gazillion aspiring rappers with a 2017 sound.

You can combine both. Lil Dicky, while I don't listen to him, does that 2017 shit that I hate but at least keeps it lyrical when he's not rapping about a specific topic.

Guns, money, bitches and haters....leave that type of rapping to the Soulja Boi's of the world who don't have the actual talent to elevate beyond it.

I think I only want to hear that from you cause I'll hate anything you do. Your subgenre of rap annoys the fuck out of me. So if there's lyricism that invests me, I can just listen to that over the actual musical side of it.