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  #1  
Unread 02-27-2012, 11:36 PM
Dono
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Default Since everyone else is doing their one bar....

I don't really care about the outcome, it is what it is, just curious as to the expos is all.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dono
If TALKING LOOT ya CLAIM SPOILED Ill 'BLOCK YA ROUTE' the 'NAME SOILED' The 'bark stripped' now Wish 'leaves at ground level' Im just 'FIGURE CHOPPING' Of course 'you would' lose hardness when exposed like TIMBER ROTTING
Route/root, soil, bark, leaves, you would/yew wood. You get the point.

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Originally Posted by You Wish
I "Take out these bitches" the EASY WAY so if i "Battle till the break of Don" I didn't MEAN TO SAY i wouldn't SLEEP TODAY i mean I'll "Take you out in one bar, then your fucked" like a PEACEFUL DATE with an EASY LAY
I figure the scheme change thing probably didn't work too well in my favor and I probably shoulda swapped up the TIMBER ROTTING and FIGURE CHOPPING to ROTTING TIMBER and CHOPPING FIGURES for coherency and delivery. But it is what it is. Lemme know what y'all got for me.
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Last edited by Dono; 02-28-2012 at 10:17 AM.
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Unread 02-27-2012, 11:36 PM   #1
 
Dono
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11 Won / 8 Lost
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Join Date: Apr 2011
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Default Since everyone else is doing their one bar....

I don't really care about the outcome, it is what it is, just curious as to the expos is all.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dono
If TALKING LOOT ya CLAIM SPOILED Ill 'BLOCK YA ROUTE' the 'NAME SOILED' The 'bark stripped' now Wish 'leaves at ground level' Im just 'FIGURE CHOPPING' Of course 'you would' lose hardness when exposed like TIMBER ROTTING
Route/root, soil, bark, leaves, you would/yew wood. You get the point.

Quote:
Originally Posted by You Wish
I "Take out these bitches" the EASY WAY so if i "Battle till the break of Don" I didn't MEAN TO SAY i wouldn't SLEEP TODAY i mean I'll "Take you out in one bar, then your fucked" like a PEACEFUL DATE with an EASY LAY
I figure the scheme change thing probably didn't work too well in my favor and I probably shoulda swapped up the TIMBER ROTTING and FIGURE CHOPPING to ROTTING TIMBER and CHOPPING FIGURES for coherency and delivery. But it is what it is. Lemme know what y'all got for me.
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Last edited by Dono; 02-28-2012 at 10:17 AM.
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Unread 02-28-2012, 01:59 AM
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Everybody grasps the concept you were attempting. Your wording fucked up your bar. If it was worded better you would have winning in my eyes.
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Unread 02-28-2012, 01:59 AM   #2
 
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Everybody grasps the concept you were attempting. Your wording fucked up your bar. If it was worded better you would have winning in my eyes.
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Unread 02-28-2012, 02:40 AM
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PEACEFUL DATE with an EASY LAY
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Timeless ... so age don't count in the booth
When ya flow stay submerged in the fountain of youth
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Quote:
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Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
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Unread 02-28-2012, 02:40 AM   #3
 
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PEACEFUL DATE with an EASY LAY
__________________
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Timeless ... so age don't count in the booth
When ya flow stay submerged in the fountain of youth
- Rakim


Quote:
Originally Posted by Just € View Post
Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
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Unread 02-28-2012, 10:14 AM
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11 Won / 8 Lost
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Estimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 stars
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35 Won / 37 Lost
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Originally Posted by UNKNOWN ARTIST View Post
PEACEFUL DATE with an EASY LAY
Yeah yeah...I fixed it, settle down.

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Originally Posted by Split Personality View Post
Everybody grasps the concept you were attempting. Your wording fucked up your bar. If it was worded better you would have winning in my eyes.
You have an example of how I could have done it, staying on the same concept, ect?

If not, that's cool. I'll take it for what it's worth and maybe not jam so much shit into one bar.
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11 Won / 8 Lost
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1 Won / 0 Lost

Estimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 stars
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35 Won / 37 Lost
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Quote:
Originally Posted by UNKNOWN ARTIST View Post
PEACEFUL DATE with an EASY LAY
Yeah yeah...I fixed it, settle down.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Split Personality View Post
Everybody grasps the concept you were attempting. Your wording fucked up your bar. If it was worded better you would have winning in my eyes.
You have an example of how I could have done it, staying on the same concept, ect?

If not, that's cool. I'll take it for what it's worth and maybe not jam so much shit into one bar.
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