I need Help - Lets Beef

JussA Mazing · #1 01-26-2010, 04:39 PM

Hello. I am JussA Mazing and simply need help with one thing.

My Text

I will take constuctive Critisim or whatever. Just please take a lot at my verses and let me know what I can work on .

Please and thank you

JussA Mazing · 01-26-2010, 04:39 PM

Hello. I am JussA Mazing and simply need help with one thing.

My Text

I will take constuctive Critisim or whatever. Just please take a lot at my verses and let me know what I can work on .

Please and thank you

**Erupt da Monsta** · #2 01-26-2010, 04:57 PM

i only read your last verse, but mainly you should try and work on the delivery/swagg.. the multis are average but those will come in time, try not to force the multis and work on having relative multis to the punches.

the punches werent too clear and the delivery wasnt very smooth, with that said i think youve deff. got potential. you just cant think youre gonna be great overnight, everyone on here can always improve, id advise you to read some verses of others and pinpoint the swag they have, even if you have to swagger jack for awhile until you find youre own style.

potential for sure though homie.

**Erupt da Monsta** · 01-26-2010, 04:57 PM

i only read your last verse, but mainly you should try and work on the delivery/swagg.. the multis are average but those will come in time, try not to force the multis and work on having relative multis to the punches.

the punches werent too clear and the delivery wasnt very smooth, with that said i think youve deff. got potential. you just cant think youre gonna be great overnight, everyone on here can always improve, id advise you to read some verses of others and pinpoint the swag they have, even if you have to swagger jack for awhile until you find youre own style.

potential for sure though homie.