The 500-syllable multi.

[Askari]

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God

i always pitch this idea and everyone says "yea yea yea" but no one ever does it.


Stop trying to impress people with your lyrics and start trying to entertain them. imma tell you right now, reading your battles is fucking BORING. each and everyone one of you. you. you you. YES, YOU. check your verse for fluidity, narrative presence, original rhyme patters, punchlines, humor, effectiveness, then finally very last of all if at all syllable structure

try that out

This. Make every word relevant to a scheme or punchline, rather than filling gaps with the most random shit, and mess around with the wording for optimum impact and fluidity. No point in having a 32 line battle where 24 lines of it is bullshit filler.

[Askari]

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God

i always pitch this idea and everyone says "yea yea yea" but no one ever does it.


Stop trying to impress people with your lyrics and start trying to entertain them. imma tell you right now, reading your battles is fucking BORING. each and everyone one of you. you. you you. YES, YOU. check your verse for fluidity, narrative presence, original rhyme patters, punchlines, humor, effectiveness, then finally very last of all if at all syllable structure

try that out

This. Make every word relevant to a scheme or punchline, rather than filling gaps with the most random shit, and mess around with the wording for optimum impact and fluidity. No point in having a 32 line battle where 24 lines of it is bullshit filler.

[Phroxen]

@Askari Agreed with both your posts.

@_Lizman_ You literally aren't worth my breath. Describing how fucking delusional and out-of-place you are would take pages to explain. You might be worse than V3numb.

[Phroxen]

@Askari Agreed with both your posts.

@_Lizman_ You literally aren't worth my breath. Describing how fucking delusional and out-of-place you are would take pages to explain. You might be worse than V3numb.

[Just C]

Didnt read it. Aint my thing but some of the material Jason quoted was mad random. I can see the poibnt of the excersise but when you sacrifice on substace like that it's pointless. The real test lies in having a solid plotline or punchlines

[Just C]

Didnt read it. Aint my thing but some of the material Jason quoted was mad random. I can see the poibnt of the excersise but when you sacrifice on substace like that it's pointless. The real test lies in having a solid plotline or punchlines

[Lizman]

@Phroxen
I'll Do A Ban Battle With You. Has To Be A Showcase Of Multies
Just To Shut Your Ass Up Cause You Don't Know Who You're Messing With

[Lizman]

@Phroxen
I'll Do A Ban Battle With You. Has To Be A Showcase Of Multies
Just To Shut Your Ass Up Cause You Don't Know Who You're Messing With

[Just C]

Originally Posted by _Lizman_

@Phroxen
I'll Do A Ban Battle With You. Has To Be A Showcase Of Multies
Just To Shut Your Ass Up Cause You Don't Know Who You're Messing With

we have a loser

[Just C]

Originally Posted by _Lizman_

@Phroxen
I'll Do A Ban Battle With You. Has To Be A Showcase Of Multies
Just To Shut Your Ass Up Cause You Don't Know Who You're Messing With

we have a loser

[Lizman]

Yes
Phroxen Would Get Bodied By My Skills

[Lizman]

Yes
Phroxen Would Get Bodied By My Skills

[Just C]

You can't even make sense typing up a simple comment. How the fuck you think you'll fair w/ multies thrown in the mix?

[Just C]

You can't even make sense typing up a simple comment. How the fuck you think you'll fair w/ multies thrown in the mix?

[Lizman]

I'll Do The Ban Battle With You If You're Up To The Challenge Kiddo

[Lizman]

I'll Do The Ban Battle With You If You're Up To The Challenge Kiddo

[Just C]

Me????Okay set it up.

[Just C]

Me????Okay set it up.

[Lizman]

2 Weeks Ban? 1 Month? What Is It?
We Each Drop... Lets Say A 16/32
Showcasing Our Multie Skill
Eh Thats About It

[Lizman]

2 Weeks Ban? 1 Month? What Is It?
We Each Drop... Lets Say A 16/32
Showcasing Our Multie Skill
Eh Thats About It