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All right people, whatever. Frank, Frank, Frank, Frankity fucking Frank.
People, I SERIOUSLY need feedback.
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All right people, whatever. Frank, Frank, Frank, Frankity fucking Frank.
People, I SERIOUSLY need feedback.
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Do you want us to sugar coat or responses? Or...
Do you want us to be Frank?
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Do you want us to sugar coat or responses? Or...
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@ DooX pm me the song I'll give u feedback on it
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@ DooX pm me the song I'll give u feedback on it
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Forgive the children @ DooX
You could work on following the cadence of the beat...I understand the lyrics was supposed to be uplifting and shit, but people really don't want to hear stuff like that (the ones that want to hear rap and hip hop anyways)Towards the beginning you was really off beat...The lyrics could be a little better. Also you could of found a beat this nice if not better from youtube and used a converter site to download the beat as an Audio file...instead of paying $30 that comes with a hook on it. You got ripped off, Specially if you're not trying to sell this track to make money. By the way, there is no "Frank" they're just fucking with you.
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Forgive the children @ DooX
You could work on following the cadence of the beat...I understand the lyrics was supposed to be uplifting and shit, but people really don't want to hear stuff like that (the ones that want to hear rap and hip hop anyways)Towards the beginning you was really off beat...The lyrics could be a little better. Also you could of found a beat this nice if not better from youtube and used a converter site to download the beat as an Audio file...instead of paying $30 that comes with a hook on it. You got ripped off, Specially if you're not trying to sell this track to make money. By the way, there is no "Frank" they're just fucking with you.
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Forgive the children @ DooX
You could work on following the cadence of the beat...I understand the lyrics was supposed to be uplifting and shit, but people really don't want to hear stuff like that (the ones that want to hear rap and hip hop anyways)Towards the beginning you was really off beat...The lyrics could be a little better. Also you could of found a beat this nice if not better from youtube and used a converter site to download the beat as an Audio file...instead of paying $30 that comes with a hook on it. You got ripped off, Specially if you're not trying to sell this track to make money. By the way, there is no "Frank" they're just fucking with you. |
Thank you @ UhMAZING for the feedback this is what I was looking for. I'm going to be re recording and re writing the lyrics, because you've confirmed my own thoughts that I was off beat.
As for the song not reaching a specific audience I'd disagree because It wasn't geared towards the typical "Drink, fuck, party" types of songs and the people who like them.
I really don't get what is funny about creating a fictional character/story at a thread requesting feedback.
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Forgive the children @ DooX
You could work on following the cadence of the beat...I understand the lyrics was supposed to be uplifting and shit, but people really don't want to hear stuff like that (the ones that want to hear rap and hip hop anyways)Towards the beginning you was really off beat...The lyrics could be a little better. Also you could of found a beat this nice if not better from youtube and used a converter site to download the beat as an Audio file...instead of paying $30 that comes with a hook on it. You got ripped off, Specially if you're not trying to sell this track to make money. By the way, there is no "Frank" they're just fucking with you. |
Thank you @ UhMAZING for the feedback this is what I was looking for. I'm going to be re recording and re writing the lyrics, because you've confirmed my own thoughts that I was off beat.
As for the song not reaching a specific audience I'd disagree because It wasn't geared towards the typical "Drink, fuck, party" types of songs and the people who like them.
I really don't get what is funny about creating a fictional character/story at a thread requesting feedback.
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No Problem.
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All right people, whatever. Frank, Frank, Frank, Frankity fucking Frank.
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Jeez, You Don't Have To Be All "Frank" About It. Quit Frank'in Out.
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