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Just different styles Even though you say you've done long bar I dont think your styles anywhere near as clean as it is SB I read some of the battle and you get dragged into using alot of cliched wording to flesh out to a more drawn out lb style where as sb you'd be alot more concise and to the point
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Just different styles Even though you say you've done long bar I dont think your styles anywhere near as clean as it is SB I read some of the battle and you get dragged into using alot of cliched wording to flesh out to a more drawn out lb style where as sb you'd be alot more concise and to the point
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Thats cuz this style is cliched jc
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Thats cuz this style is cliched jc
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it depends who's writing But yeah a lot of ppl make it feel cliched and tired because of the wording and concepts it probably doesnt hep that there isnt that big an emphasize n personals here, forces people to fall back on in direct punches which makes it ALOT harder to stay relevant and fresh
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it depends who's writing But yeah a lot of ppl make it feel cliched and tired because of the wording and concepts it probably doesnt hep that there isnt that big an emphasize n personals here, forces people to fall back on in direct punches which makes it ALOT harder to stay relevant and fresh
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That was a good battle though.
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its gotten me thus far..
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orc you had some dope punchlines but i think you should work on the wording of your multis & your flow.. your verse seemed way too forced & when the set-ups are forced/redundant it takes away from the overall punch to me
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orc you had some dope punchlines but i think you should work on the wording of your multis & your flow.. your verse seemed way too forced & when the set-ups are forced/redundant it takes away from the overall punch to me
grizz still corny tho
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appreciate the advice
i dont need advice tho im the best on this site
this style of text is retarded and redundant so i have to make my bars retarded to get votes
multies do not matter, thats newb shit
punches > flow
yall like wordplay that dont read right in a sentence. shit has to work both ways. im sick of telling idiots that
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appreciate the advice
i dont need advice tho im the best on this site
this style of text is retarded and redundant so i have to make my bars retarded to get votes
multies do not matter, thats newb shit
punches > flow
yall like wordplay that dont read right in a sentence. shit has to work both ways. im sick of telling idiots that
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