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This is about me. And your five minute keystyle was garbage that didn't rhyme. And don't say shit about slant rhymes cuz you'd have to be forcing the shit out of those slants, my dude.
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Actually wasnt...But since u consider a slant rhyme being forced then u can take it how ya wanna...I just honestly never thought little Black Book would be criticizing a verse thats better than 90 percent of what hes ever wrote...a "5 minute keystyle" at that...But UKno...Im just Bullshittin til the tourney...You know just like the rest that if I put thought into a verse its.....MURDA! Lol....But aight Book...when shit keeps spinnin we should be exchanging hands in the box...look forward to it... 
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This is about me. And your five minute keystyle was garbage that didn't rhyme. And don't say shit about slant rhymes cuz you'd have to be forcing the shit out of those slants, my dude.
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Actually wasnt...But since u consider a slant rhyme being forced then u can take it how ya wanna...I just honestly never thought little Black Book would be criticizing a verse thats better than 90 percent of what hes ever wrote...a "5 minute keystyle" at that...But UKno...Im just Bullshittin til the tourney...You know just like the rest that if I put thought into a verse its.....MURDA! Lol....But aight Book...when shit keeps spinnin we should be exchanging hands in the box...look forward to it...
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You tried to rhyme Inner-G with Dentist n... Or something like that. But I'll catch you in the box, dude.
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You tried to rhyme Inner-G with Dentist n... Or something like that. But I'll catch you in the box, dude.
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You tried to rhyme Inner-G with Dentist n... Or something like that. But I'll catch you in the box, dude.
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INNA-G THRILL(IN-A-G THRILL)..DENTIST N DRILL(DEN-TEST-N-DRILL) Iono...lol aight brah brah
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You tried to rhyme Inner-G with Dentist n... Or something like that. But I'll catch you in the box, dude.
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INNA-G THRILL(IN-A-G THRILL)..DENTIST N DRILL(DEN-TEST-N-DRILL) Iono...lol aight brah brah
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How does that rhyme?
Den and In. Alright that works.
Tist and A? Nope.
N and G? Hell no.
Thrill and Drill rhyme though.
1/2 the syllables rhyme. Good work.
Like say Inner-G and Dentist n.. Nowhere close to working.
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How does that rhyme?
Den and In. Alright that works.
Tist and A? Nope.
N and G? Hell no.
Thrill and Drill rhyme though.
1/2 the syllables rhyme. Good work.
Like say Inner-G and Dentist n.. Nowhere close to working.
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How does that rhyme?
Den and In. Alright that works.
Tist and A? Nope.
N and G? Hell no.
Thrill and Drill rhyme though.
1/2 the syllables rhyme. Good work.
Like say Inner-G and Dentist n.. Nowhere close to working.
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INNA not INNER but its All good...You honestly shoulda took notice that I commented sayin I keystyled it...I mean if you read it wit quick flow its not as ez noticed but I do appreciate the break-down but you being in your position should know it was a keystyle and was no need to break it down like that ya digs? All it took was a comment saying for Ex... "Flow shouldnt have keystyled it-Didnt work out"....feel me? Iono...Is all good though its still my fault in the end for not taking time out to actually type up a verse....i dont mind the criticism even though I dont need it...But like I said Im just Bs'n til tourney time...
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How does that rhyme?
Den and In. Alright that works.
Tist and A? Nope.
N and G? Hell no.
Thrill and Drill rhyme though.
1/2 the syllables rhyme. Good work.
Like say Inner-G and Dentist n.. Nowhere close to working.
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INNA not INNER but its All good...You honestly shoulda took notice that I commented sayin I keystyled it...I mean if you read it wit quick flow its not as ez noticed but I do appreciate the break-down but you being in your position should know it was a keystyle and was no need to break it down like that ya digs? All it took was a comment saying for Ex... "Flow shouldnt have keystyled it-Didnt work out"....feel me? Iono...Is all good though its still my fault in the end for not taking time out to actually type up a verse....i dont mind the criticism even though I dont need it...But like I said Im just Bs'n til tourney time...
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Inna and Inner doesn't change anything.
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Inna and Inner doesn't change anything.
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Come on Book now you trollin...Most dont go Rhyme for Rhyme like CAT N THE HAT...Fkit tho...
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Come on Book now you trollin...Most dont go Rhyme for Rhyme like CAT N THE HAT...Fkit tho...
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