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now can you build a multi around it and at the same time stay relevant?? or is it asking too much lol
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now can you build a multi around it and at the same time stay relevant?? or is it asking too much lol
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Yeah or just throw a couple more punches in the build of up that.
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Yeah or just throw a couple more punches in the build of up that.
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no i meant....can you do it now....
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This Kid NEXT TO ME WITH A HABIT that "Carries While He Talks" BREATHLESSLY WITH THE BAGGAGE that'll "Stick E On Ya Tongue" while your in EXTASY WITH A FAGGOT

It's not polished or fixed up.. But Just get an idea of what you want first and then polish it, Change multi's and shit from there..

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Then you just change your wording a little until is sounds more fluent. Like i'd prolly change the Two That's so it's not as repetitive with a single word in one line.
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This Kid NEXT TO ME WITH A HABIT that "Carries While He Talks" BREATHLESSLY WITH THE BAGGAGE that'll "Stick E On Ya Tongue" while your in EXTASY WITH A FAGGOT

It's not polished or fixed up.. But Just get an idea of what you want first and then polish it, Change multi's and shit from there..

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Then you just change your wording a little until is sounds more fluent. Like i'd prolly change the Two That's so it's not as repetitive with a single word in one line.
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I adopted the Stuttering Stanley Style, so I just keep rambling on words that sound similar and hopefully i come across some good concepts and content to go with it. Lol. idek.
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I adopted the Stuttering Stanley Style, so I just keep rambling on words that sound similar and hopefully i come across some good concepts and content to go with it. Lol. idek.
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This Kid NEXT TO ME WITH A HABIT that "Carries While He Talks" BREATHLESSLY WITH THE BAGGAGE that'll "Stick E On Ya Tongue" while your in EXTASY WITH A FAGGOT

It's not polished or fixed up.. But Just get an idea of what you want first and then polish it, Change multi's and shit from there..

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Then you just change your wording a little until is sounds more fluent. Like i'd prolly change the Two That's so it's not as repetitive with a single word in one line.

got it..........does rhyme scheme play a part??
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This Kid NEXT TO ME WITH A HABIT that "Carries While He Talks" BREATHLESSLY WITH THE BAGGAGE that'll "Stick E On Ya Tongue" while your in EXTASY WITH A FAGGOT

It's not polished or fixed up.. But Just get an idea of what you want first and then polish it, Change multi's and shit from there..

---------- Post added at 02:46 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:44 PM ----------

Then you just change your wording a little until is sounds more fluent. Like i'd prolly change the Two That's so it's not as repetitive with a single word in one line.

got it..........does rhyme scheme play a part??
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Interesting responses.

When I'm WRITING...

I take the idea first and write it as a plain sentence.
Then i decide what I can rhyme with it.
After that I scope for idioms/turns of phrase/possible wordplays.

I mean, in text the idea is to get the point across while remaining in structure and readable. So, You want to have an idea in a complete thought before 'textceeing' it up

I do believe that you can increase the impact of a punch with the addition of facts/relevant references to the build, but the stanza each bar should have a beginning, middle, and end. Meaning: it can become long winded.
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Interesting responses.

When I'm WRITING...

I take the idea first and write it as a plain sentence.
Then i decide what I can rhyme with it.
After that I scope for idioms/turns of phrase/possible wordplays.

I mean, in text the idea is to get the point across while remaining in structure and readable. So, You want to have an idea in a complete thought before 'textceeing' it up

I do believe that you can increase the impact of a punch with the addition of facts/relevant references to the build, but the stanza each bar should have a beginning, middle, and end. Meaning: it can become long winded.
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I adopted the Stuttering Stanley Style, so I just keep rambling on words that sound similar and hopefully i come across some good concepts and content to go with it. Lol. idek.
that must take a really looong time...lol...
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I adopted the Stuttering Stanley Style, so I just keep rambling on words that sound similar and hopefully i come across some good concepts and content to go with it. Lol. idek.
that must take a really looong time...lol...
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The longer you can keep a rhyme scheme going while still throwing effective punches, the verse will always flow better and be smoother to the reader.
It shows a bit more skill also .
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The longer you can keep a rhyme scheme going while still throwing effective punches, the verse will always flow better and be smoother to the reader.
It shows a bit more skill also .
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Interesting responses.

When I'm WRITING...

I take the idea first and write it as a plain sentence.
Then i decide what I can rhyme with it.
After that I scope for idioms/turns of phrase/possible wordplays.

I mean, in text the idea is to get the point across while remaining in structure and readable. So, You want to have an idea in a complete thought before 'textceeing' it up

I do believe that you can increase the impact of a punch with the addition of facts/relevant references to the build, but the stanza each bar should have a beginning, middle, and end. Meaning: it can become long winded.

so you basically do the same thing as everyboy else?.....u broke it down for us tho
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Interesting responses.

When I'm WRITING...

I take the idea first and write it as a plain sentence.
Then i decide what I can rhyme with it.
After that I scope for idioms/turns of phrase/possible wordplays.

I mean, in text the idea is to get the point across while remaining in structure and readable. So, You want to have an idea in a complete thought before 'textceeing' it up

I do believe that you can increase the impact of a punch with the addition of facts/relevant references to the build, but the stanza each bar should have a beginning, middle, and end. Meaning: it can become long winded.

so you basically do the same thing as everyboy else?.....u broke it down for us tho
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