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**Just C** · #11 04-30-2012, 02:30 PM

Yeah. The paper thing isn't a good look. Just read that shit untill it's embedded in your brain. Not only will it look better but it will help your delivery cadence presence and confidence. Everything.

Right now you sound too hesitant and throaty. I can hear your voice cracking which sounds like you lack confidence. That might not be the case but people associate that with a lack of confidence. And if you don't believe in what your saying. How can you expect the listener to?

Get me?

**Just C** · 04-30-2012, 02:30 PM

Yeah. The paper thing isn't a good look. Just read that shit untill it's embedded in your brain. Not only will it look better but it will help your delivery cadence presence and confidence. Everything.

Right now you sound too hesitant and throaty. I can hear your voice cracking which sounds like you lack confidence. That might not be the case but people associate that with a lack of confidence. And if you don't believe in what your saying. How can you expect the listener to?

Get me?

**RhetoriK** · #12 04-30-2012, 02:45 PM

yeah. good ish though, glad to see you back doin ya thing. won't harp on anything that's already been said but good feedback from all.

**RhetoriK** · 04-30-2012, 02:45 PM

yeah. good ish though, glad to see you back doin ya thing. won't harp on anything that's already been said but good feedback from all.

#13 04-30-2012, 07:50 PM

Thx y'all yeahh I was high when i started burnt out when i finished that vid so i was like fuck it *grabs the paper* but yeahh imma keep the vids/tracks posted maybe get a few audio batt's poppin...

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Just €

Yeah. The paper thing isn't a good look. Just read that shit untill it's embedded in your brain. Not only will it look better but it will help your delivery cadence presence and confidence. Everything.

Right now you sound too hesitant and throaty. I can hear your voice cracking which sounds like you lack confidence. That might not be the case but people associate that with a lack of confidence. And if you don't believe in what your saying. How can you expect the listener to?

Get me?

TRUE HOMIE I was rapping like i was being watched by a crowed when i shoulda been more chilled out much thanks man!

04-30-2012, 07:50 PM

Thx y'all yeahh I was high when i started burnt out when i finished that vid so i was like fuck it *grabs the paper* but yeahh imma keep the vids/tracks posted maybe get a few audio batt's poppin...

---------- Post added at 05:50 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:49 PM ----------

Quote:

Originally Posted by Just €

Yeah. The paper thing isn't a good look. Just read that shit untill it's embedded in your brain. Not only will it look better but it will help your delivery cadence presence and confidence. Everything.

Right now you sound too hesitant and throaty. I can hear your voice cracking which sounds like you lack confidence. That might not be the case but people associate that with a lack of confidence. And if you don't believe in what your saying. How can you expect the listener to?

Get me?

TRUE HOMIE I was rapping like i was being watched by a crowed when i shoulda been more chilled out much thanks man!

Ohs · #14 05-07-2012, 07:47 PM

lol you was feelin yaself way to much for them shitty ass bars...no hate tho son

Ohs · 05-07-2012, 07:47 PM

lol you was feelin yaself way to much for them shitty ass bars...no hate tho son

**John Dos** · #15 05-07-2012, 07:56 PM

Cel where the fuck have you been? i think you got bars in your inbox from me that i sent ages ago. disregard those and i'll send you a fresh 16 if you want.

**John Dos** · 05-07-2012, 07:56 PM

Cel where the fuck have you been? i think you got bars in your inbox from me that i sent ages ago. disregard those and i'll send you a fresh 16 if you want.