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lol..thats a small sample size homie... it works when spoken..but when written? its obvious that the group was KiD n Play..so the 's' kinda throws it off...dope concept audio-wise though
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lol..thats a small sample size homie... it works when spoken..but when written? its obvious that the group was KiD n Play..so the 's' kinda throws it off...dope concept audio-wise though
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they're dope...i use them in my music...but if you do it...it should probably be more than just one syllable in text because it can be difficult to pick up on without having more of a scheme than just one syllable..ya dig>?
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they're dope...i use them in my music...but if you do it...it should probably be more than just one syllable in text because it can be difficult to pick up on without having more of a scheme than just one syllable..ya dig>?
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they're dope...i use them in my music...but if you do it...it should probably be more than just one syllable in text because it can be difficult to pick up on without having more of a scheme than just one syllable..ya dig>?
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they're dope...i use them in my music...but if you do it...it should probably be more than just one syllable in text because it can be difficult to pick up on without having more of a scheme than just one syllable..ya dig>?
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Its 2012 but ya punches LAME & AVE'RAGE STILL?? the only difference is now you say you AIM A GAT AND PEEL so since this "Small Fry Gotta Toy Now" i guess he beCAME A HAPPY MEAL!! cmonn dont SAY YOU CLAPPIN STEEL cuz he AINT AS HALF AS REAL as he CLAIMIN & FORREAL i wouldnt be in a "Box Off His Hit" w/ the GREATEST ACTING SKILL!! (Box Office Hit)
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Its 2012 but ya punches LAME & AVE'RAGE STILL?? the only difference is now you say you AIM A GAT AND PEEL so since this "Small Fry Gotta Toy Now" i guess he beCAME A HAPPY MEAL!! cmonn dont SAY YOU CLAPPIN STEEL cuz he AINT AS HALF AS REAL as he CLAIMIN & FORREAL i wouldnt be in a "Box Off His Hit" w/ the GREATEST ACTING SKILL!! (Box Office Hit)
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Its 2012 but ya punches LAME & AVE'RAGE STILL?? the only difference is now you say you AIM A GAT AND PEEL so since this "Small Fry Gotta Toy Now" i guess he beCAME A HAPPY MEAL!! cmonn dont SAY YOU CLAPPIN STEEL cuz he AINT AS HALF AS REAL as he CLAIMIN & FORREAL i wouldnt be in a "Box Off His Hit" w/ the GREATEST ACTING SKILL!! (Box Office Hit)
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that shit huff yo...
lol...
obviously a solid and well put together concept..only thing maybe is to emphasize that you are REITERATING that he aint clappin nothing. if the reader doesnt get that...it may seem like you are just saying it twice....although i get that you are emphasizing shit...maybe like, "..HAPPY MEAL!!...once again dont SAY YOU.."
small shit i know lol...but it could help
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Its 2012 but ya punches LAME & AVE'RAGE STILL?? the only difference is now you say you AIM A GAT AND PEEL so since this "Small Fry Gotta Toy Now" i guess he beCAME A HAPPY MEAL!! cmonn dont SAY YOU CLAPPIN STEEL cuz he AINT AS HALF AS REAL as he CLAIMIN & FORREAL i wouldnt be in a "Box Off His Hit" w/ the GREATEST ACTING SKILL!! (Box Office Hit)
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that shit huff yo...
lol...
obviously a solid and well put together concept..only thing maybe is to emphasize that you are REITERATING that he aint clappin nothing. if the reader doesnt get that...it may seem like you are just saying it twice....although i get that you are emphasizing shit...maybe like, "..HAPPY MEAL!!...once again dont SAY YOU.."
small shit i know lol...but it could help
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that shit huff yo...
lol...
obviously a solid and well put together concept..only thing maybe is to emphasize that you are REITERATING that he aint clappin nothing. if the reader doesnt get that...it may seem like you are just saying it twice....although i get that you are emphasizing shit...maybe like, "..HAPPY MEAL!!...once again dont SAY YOU.."
small shit i know lol...but it could help
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Nah thanks for real its easy to forget lil bits of wording that polishes it off.
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that shit huff yo...
lol...
obviously a solid and well put together concept..only thing maybe is to emphasize that you are REITERATING that he aint clappin nothing. if the reader doesnt get that...it may seem like you are just saying it twice....although i get that you are emphasizing shit...maybe like, "..HAPPY MEAL!!...once again dont SAY YOU.."
small shit i know lol...but it could help
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Nah thanks for real its easy to forget lil bits of wording that polishes it off.
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Its 2012 but ya punches LAME & AVE'RAGE STILL?? the only difference is now you say you AIM A GAT AND PEEL so since this "Small Fry Gotta Toy Now" i guess he beCAME A HAPPY MEAL!! cmonn dont SAY YOU CLAPPIN STEEL cuz he AINT AS HALF AS REAL as he CLAIMIN & FORREAL i wouldnt be in a "Box Off His Hit" w/ the GREATEST ACTING SKILL!! (Box Office Hit)
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Dope section and that, RULE.
But AINT AS HALF AS REAL? *shakes head*
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Its 2012 but ya punches LAME & AVE'RAGE STILL?? the only difference is now you say you AIM A GAT AND PEEL so since this "Small Fry Gotta Toy Now" i guess he beCAME A HAPPY MEAL!! cmonn dont SAY YOU CLAPPIN STEEL cuz he AINT AS HALF AS REAL as he CLAIMIN & FORREAL i wouldnt be in a "Box Off His Hit" w/ the GREATEST ACTING SKILL!! (Box Office Hit)
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Dope section and that, RULE.
But AINT AS HALF AS REAL? *shakes head*
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......pause on "polishes it off"...lol...and no doubt
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......pause on "polishes it off"...lol...and no doubt
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homie we known each other since the CLASSICK DAYS.. all love, but if you start actin MAD & HATE? "1 on 1" I'll bring the "Heat To The Table" & "Light Up When We Alone" like roMANTIC DATES!!!
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homie we known each other since the CLASSICK DAYS.. all love, but if you start actin MAD & HATE? "1 on 1" I'll bring the "Heat To The Table" & "Light Up When We Alone" like roMANTIC DATES!!!
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homie we known each other since the CLASSICK DAYS.. all love, but if you start actin MAD & HATE? "1 on 1" I'll bring the "Heat To The Table" & "Light Up When We Alone" like roMANTIC DATES!!!
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ok ok....i think what sticks out here is that you may want stick to just 2 double entendres...since having the 3 there kinda stretched the bar...concept was solid though.. execution was a lil off...but not bad. ..the 'heat to the table' part is a lil off too...as i dont think people call lighters 'heat'
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ok ok....i think what sticks out here is that you may want stick to just 2 double entendres...since having the 3 there kinda stretched the bar...concept was solid though.. execution was a lil off...but not bad. ..the 'heat to the table' part is a lil off too...as i dont think people call lighters 'heat'
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