Ill Phenom Vs Lizman (Ill Phenom Wins Via 3-0 KO)

[Ill Phenom]

Thanks. 1-0 upping this.

[Ill Phenom]

Thanks. 1-0 upping this.

[Prose_]

Ill Phenom's ish was mad funny. very entertaining read. liz's was very... blah blah in the first couple lines but really picked up. this is emotion vs. comedy here.

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- the way lizman set it up was a lil difficult at times for me to follow smoothly. gonna have to give this to Phenom
Vocabulary- Lizman did have this one
Topic/Meaning- Liz kinda was blah blah first couple lines... gonna have to give it to Phe
Storytelling/Progression- again... giving this to Phe. lizman was blah blah at some points.
Emotion- Lizman took in emotion tho. ez.
Imagery- ill created more of a picture in my head i suppose. Phe.
Poetic Techniques- liz was straight deep wit it.
Ending- if felt as if Phe took this barely. i liked how he went from comedy to sadness a bit.

Vote: gonna have to toss this to Phenom. very good from both.

[Prose_]

Ill Phenom's ish was mad funny. very entertaining read. liz's was very... blah blah in the first couple lines but really picked up. this is emotion vs. comedy here.

Rhyming Scheme/Flow- the way lizman set it up was a lil difficult at times for me to follow smoothly. gonna have to give this to Phenom
Vocabulary- Lizman did have this one
Topic/Meaning- Liz kinda was blah blah first couple lines... gonna have to give it to Phe
Storytelling/Progression- again... giving this to Phe. lizman was blah blah at some points.
Emotion- Lizman took in emotion tho. ez.
Imagery- ill created more of a picture in my head i suppose. Phe.
Poetic Techniques- liz was straight deep wit it.
Ending- if felt as if Phe took this barely. i liked how he went from comedy to sadness a bit.

Vote: gonna have to toss this to Phenom. very good from both.

[IV]

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Lizman, just, although was very repetitive and forced at times
Vocabulary- Lizman, sometimes too complex but good none the less
Topic/Meaning- Ill stuck to the topic really well
Storytelling/Progression- Ill, he had a clear beginning and a clear ending, he ended it really well.
Emotion- Ill, i think he portrayed emotion in a more subtle way, which went really well with the topic, wasn't over the top
Imagery- Ill stuck to the image, and made it possible to picture it in my head, think he did this really well
Poetic Techniques- Lizman, the rhyming scheme was nice. Ill was simple but effective which i think stuck with the topic more, but Lizman had the nicer rhyming scheme overall
Ending- Ill had a nice ending, wrapped up the whole thing nicely. Lizman didn't have much of an ending.

Overall- Ill i really enjoyed your verse on different levels, you didn't just throw out fat jokes your whole verse but there was still humour, you had a clear objective you wanted to reach in your verse and wrapped it up nicely. There was a lot of subtle emotion in your verse which made it easy to empathise with the character and was overall a better read. Liz, your verse was a nice read and flowed nicely, but repetitive and at times boring. There was a lot of emotion but i think you got lost in emotion which caused you to stray off topic.

Vote=Ill Phenom

[IV]

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Lizman, just, although was very repetitive and forced at times
Vocabulary- Lizman, sometimes too complex but good none the less
Topic/Meaning- Ill stuck to the topic really well
Storytelling/Progression- Ill, he had a clear beginning and a clear ending, he ended it really well.
Emotion- Ill, i think he portrayed emotion in a more subtle way, which went really well with the topic, wasn't over the top
Imagery- Ill stuck to the image, and made it possible to picture it in my head, think he did this really well
Poetic Techniques- Lizman, the rhyming scheme was nice. Ill was simple but effective which i think stuck with the topic more, but Lizman had the nicer rhyming scheme overall
Ending- Ill had a nice ending, wrapped up the whole thing nicely. Lizman didn't have much of an ending.

Overall- Ill i really enjoyed your verse on different levels, you didn't just throw out fat jokes your whole verse but there was still humour, you had a clear objective you wanted to reach in your verse and wrapped it up nicely. There was a lot of subtle emotion in your verse which made it easy to empathise with the character and was overall a better read. Liz, your verse was a nice read and flowed nicely, but repetitive and at times boring. There was a lot of emotion but i think you got lost in emotion which caused you to stray off topic.

Vote=Ill Phenom

Ill Phenom Wins.

Ill Phenom Wins.